Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8) - Page 14

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nishu_shorna

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awwee... its cute... already loving this OS Di... waiting for the next part already...

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sonal

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Posted: 11 years ago

So cute and lovely ...

Update next parts soon...

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pinkly

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Posted: 11 years ago

Superb start. The khadoos ASR already likes Khushi. Arnav's initial irritation and annoyance before meeting Khushi was nicely written. Later he was smitten by her smile and innocence. I love this story already. The pictures were appropriate and go with the story beautifully.

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dumas

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Posted: 11 years ago

loved the os so cute she is no giving him the importance he is accustom to loved how he promised to make her life hell but he himself is sorting her out loved how he wanted her to use his name awesome update.

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8Lucky88

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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome start...a different story...

love to read your work!!!!

amazing

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rvas

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Posted: 11 years ago

read story 2 part 1&2 and loved it...can't wait yo read more

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BS.ILoveYou

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Pehle to Maafi..woh kya hai na.. Hume apne he ghar me hamare "free time" me PC nahi mil pata.

In this OS starting from part 1 Anjali k vichar are very devilesh...i mean to-get-chote-married-at any-cost type.. 😈

actually the whole Raizada pariwaar was on a mission To-get-Arnav Married 🤣

I loved the 2nd Part the most...

Thre convo was adorable.. and Khushi was cute as always.. 😳

I loved Arnav getiing jealous

"You...you have boys at the orphanage?" he asked, something like fear eating in to his heart.

She laughed. "Boys? No, Sir. It is just for girls."

This was the best part..

"I want you to accompany Akash to Mumbai tomorrow. It is high time you learned more about the business," ASR declared.

All smiled. Akash alone looked at ASR in shock.

"You will have to be there for 2 weeks," ASR said. "Pack for the period."

Akash stared at ASR. "Two weeks, Bhai?" he asked.

He parked the car by the hostel gate. He knew the address by heart, having memorised it from her file a few days back.

@Blue..

And i loved thre cofessions the most..

Edited by B.S.I_Love_You - 11 years ago

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Vsahi

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Posted: 11 years ago

As usual astounding Di👏 Loved it to bits😊 Thank u so so so much for yet another beautiful story Di😃 Love u 😆

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segad

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Posted: 11 years ago

This story and the picture just made me realise how much I miss seeing Barun on the screen. What an awesome actor! Those expressions!!!

Lovely story. love your attention to the finer details like Mamiji's makeup leaving stains on Arnav's clothes 😆

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KtotheM

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Posted: 11 years ago

That was sooo nice :)
I loved reading it...

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