Smitar's OS SERIES: TRYST IN THE CARDS OS 5 Link to #2 in Pg 1(21/8)

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rana5

@rana5

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Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Another beautiful short story. The meetings are always the best part!

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@EchTee

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#142

Wowiee
All well that ends well..
Superb os di..

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__blossom__

@__blossom__

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Really cute OS loved it!

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Awesome OS
Loved it <3

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#145

What a wonderful short story...and I loved it because you can read it in one go...

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Raila1014

@Raila1014

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

You have captured the innocence of them falling in love so perfectly. This was true KKG fearful and full of acidity and khadoos LG who promised to make her life hell without meeting her. But ooperwalla has other plans and he fell hook, line and sink in love with her. His family played him so well. The live confession was so sweet. Love it, really needed this today on a very depressing day for me. Thanks.

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Aruni.

@Aruni.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

Oh god smita di... took my heart away...

i did not realize that his is gonna be a different Os from the last, but this was fantastic too! Loved how arnav falls in love with Khushi... just makes me imagine a happily ever after for them...

Mwaah! Waiting for the next weekend!

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hydsri

@hydsri

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

super. love the fact that this Arnav fell hard and fast for a simple child like Khushi. They are total opposites and totally attracted to one another :)

eagerly waiting for the next one.