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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
amazing yaar just loved it 👍🏼
u r superb n update soon😳😳
n thnxx a ton for pm 😉

neha😎
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52
again sorry...*late*
awssmmm yaar...
enjoyd it alots...
y sanyu is scared...
night part is fantastic...
now comptetion time...
con.soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
I read both the parts in one go.I must say you are a great writer.
This story has got a beautiful concept and the emotions U have described here is absolutely amazing.I just loved their fights and the Paratha scene was just brilliant.The bike scene where Sanyu gets scared for Randhir just fab.
Please update soon the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: don girls

Wow
Just read all the parts and it is amazing
Love the storyline and concept
Interesting so far
Please PM me when you have updated, would love to read further on, thanks



Hi dear... thank u will deff PM u, sent buddy req.. pls accept
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: Fairystar

amazing yaar just loved it 👍🏼

u r superb n update soon😳😳
n thnxx a ton for pm 😉

neha😎



Thanks dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

again sorry...*late*
awssmmm yaar...
enjoyd it alots...
y sanyu is scared...
night part is fantastic...
now comptetion time...
con.soon...



dats darling... Sanyu... dats a lit secret😉😉😉 will reveal soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: anjipankaj

I read both the parts in one go.I must say you are a great writer.
This story has got a beautiful concept and the emotions U have described here is absolutely amazing.I just loved their fights and the Paratha scene was just brilliant.The bike scene where Sanyu gets scared for Randhir just fab.
Please update soon the next part



Wow thanks dear... its an honor for getting such a big compliment :) Thank you so much sure will update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Hello all... 😊😊😊

I am back again with chapter 3. Here it goes...

Chapter 3:

Sanyu got lost in her deep thoughts hasn't noticed when she has reached canteen. She came out of her trance by Randhir's voice.

R: Oye Miss Day Dreamer... what are you thinking??? where have you lost? seems like thinking about how to convence your parents... and when & how are you going to submit your letter.

S: Look Randhir, don't irritate me now, leave me alone, I will talk to Vardhan sir.

R: Hey you, first remember one thing Vardhan sir won't even care damn about you. if you are unable to give it then you can't even participate.

S: I am not even in a mood to argue with you. Just leave me alone, I will manage my things, don't need such letters & assure you I will definitely participate in this.

R: I already told you, you don't belong here and you are doing against your parents wish... & also you don't even care them.. I dunno why are you doing this.. seems you even won't respect them.. they were even happy if you are far away from them dunno why even feel like they have disowned you. I really pity them.. how did they bare you for such long years... & I think now you would be very happy as you were very far no restrictions nothing from your family.. why you do showoff that you miss them, why dont accept you don't even love them.

This made Sanyu's anger reach its peak.

S: Enough!!!!!!!!!!! Just shouted. everyone turned around to see what happened.
I said shutup. Mr Randhir Singh Shekawat. Just enough. I am silent that doesn't mean I am not capable to say any or do any. Do you ever dare to talk about my family & me again. or else you have to face the worse situation which you will regret. I am warning you for the last time don't ever come across my way, don't ever talk to me. or else I dunno what I will do with you. Just stay away from me. she left from there in terrible anger.

Randhir stood there dumbfolded. he was shocked by the outburst of Sanyu's anger. had never seen her in such a rage.

Randhir's POV:
Sanyukta Agarwal, how dare you to shout on me like that and that to infront of whole canteen. How dare you to insult me like this, you have to pay for this. Now Randhir's anger is also in its peak.

In the evening Randhir went to Vardhan sir's cabin

R: Sir, May I come in

V: Yes Randhir, are the letters ready? Keep them on my desk and inform the team that we should start tomorrow morning.

R: Sir, except Sanyukta all have submitted. there is no response from her till now. Seems she won't be participating as you said before time who wont submit will be disqualified.

V: Interesting Very Interesting. You may leave now.

Randhir came out from Vardhan's cabin and thought himself, Sanyukta Agarwal... you are gone.. now you are not even allowed in the team.. once I am back from this just wait & watch.. wat I will do with you.

In the room Kaustu tried to talk to Sanyu but she stopped & said that she is feeling sleepy. Kaustu felt very bad for Sanyu as she knew she won't be coming & will defenitely gonna miss her. Did all the packing and slept

In the morning all were waiting near bus and surprised to see Yoyo there.

V: Students, don't feel much surprised. Yoyo will also accompany us & help us in some other things. Now you tie this cloth on your eyes & get into the bus as we shoud reach the village soon. I know about you Farzi engineers why to tie this cloth, this is becoz you shouldn't know the place exactly where we are going. so just do it now & get into the bus immediately. All did the same.

Driver helped them to sit in the bus & started.

Randhir POV:
Farzi, see we all are leaving now & will do some interesting tasks.. where always you wanna participate. Now you won't be a part of this & I am very happy wont see your face for some days. now what you will be doing?? repairing machines?? he remembered how they used to work in lab, no no now she is not in good mood, so will she cry? then remembered all the night scenes how she cried & slept in her room holding her family pic & muttered don't leave me alone in her sleep.. he remembered their canteen scene, how they ate together, her smile... by thinking about her laugh a small smile crept on Randhir's face. Just then he realized, what he has been thinking so far... dude, she is so far from you, then WTH are you thinking about her, you have to be angry, then why are you smiling like an idiot??? & why her thoughts are not leaving your mind... Sanyukta Agarwal you are making me crazy... just leave me alone.

He came out of his thoughts by Vardhan's sir voice as they have reached the place. God these many hrs I have been thinking about that Farzi... Randhir beta, you should definitely check with a doctor.

All opened their eyes & shocked. Saw Sanyu standing there with her luggage.

V: Students don't be much shocked. Sanyukta Agarwal also will be a part of the team.
Kaustu came running & hugged her . Parth, Jiggy & Sahil were also happy to see her.

R: Sir but she didn't submit her letter, then how can she participate?

V: Randhir Singh Shekawat, let me remind you, you are here to work in the team not to question me. and my decisions are final. so now lets start and go to Sarpanch house. there he will arrange place for us to stay.

Randhir glared at her, but she ignored him.

All went to Sarpanch house & met him. Sarpanch is very nice person and kinda helpful with MCP qualites. When he saw girls in the team his smile vanished and said in a rude way to stay properly as this is village, not a city & their college. All reached the respective places. Boys stayed in one room & girls in one room. while going to room Sanyu & Randhir collide each other.

R: Again!!!! Look Farzi, don't you have any other work. jab dekho mujhe takrati ho... and I know you have convinced Vardhan sir by your Rona -dhona and started his taunts. Sanyu doesn't even responded and left from there ignoring him.

R: WTH she ignored me??? how dare she??? & how can she??? I should be the one to be angry as she shouted on me infront of all in the canteen.. then why she is doing this... left from there frustrated.
In the girls room:

K: Sanyu, why this Sarpanch is in such a way? why he spoke very rudely?

S: Kaustu, ye sab chod, cholo lets go and have some rest. From tomorrow moring we have to start our work.

K: yeah right, tomorrow morning Vardhan sir will decide who will be the captain also.

S: yes, for now let us sleep. tomorrow we have to go to Panchayat & also meet the other team members, think they are from CITE. Lets hope we will have a fair competition. Saying this both went to sleep.

In the morning all assembled at the Panchayat.

V: So students, before the meeting started let me announce you something. I have decided the captain for the team

All were waiting curiously. Sir announced Its Sanyukta Agarwal. All clapped except
Randhir & Vidushi. Sanyu was shocked and felt extreme happy as she is the captain of Vardhan's sir's team. Normally its a wish to be a part of the team, but now she is the captain... She is out of words & stood there with all happiness on her face.

P: Hey Sanyu, Party to banta hai.. after this meeting lets celebrate about this. She just smiled.

Randhir POV
What, this Farzi captain? God wat happened to Vardhan sir why he has selected her. & on which basis he did? why she?

Vidushi POV:
WT**** does this Vardhan gone mad??? he has brought her without permission letter, & now made her as captain. I thought Sanyukta won't be here and I can have fun without any disturbance as this Kaustuki will be alone & I can get all the attention, but why again she came back

All stood near the Panchayat place, Sanparch came & wished both team.

Sarpanch: Baccho... you all are welcome here I hope you will do some good work for our village and have some good experience here. You always can reach me if you have any problems. First please introduce yourself.

Then CITE mentor came & introduced himself as Kabir. later one by one came & introduced themselves.

Vidushi: Yaar ye CITE boys are looking so hot. there is not even a single girl in the team. let us see if we girls get any attention from them. She just stopped her blabbering when she got a glare from Randhir.

One by one student introduced and then came a handsome & arrogant guy with well built boy make any girl stare at him. Stood before all. He is looking damn hot. Anyone can notice the arrogant look & carelessness in his words.

Guy: Hello all, I am Aditya Khosla, Captain of CITE.

By hearing that name Sanyukta looked up and shocked to see the person stood before her. Even Aditya is also shocked to see Sanyukta there...

Guys... please please share your comments as that motivates me a lot...

Love you all,
Mickey.


Edited by amulbaby06 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
amazing update
love the way that you changed the scene to make it your own
love the ending
you added a new character
can't wait to see how he is related to sanyu
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#60


thank you😊😊

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