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Posted: 11 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: reet21

Sorry for being late
out of station thi
just reached now.

are wah sweetie...
parth ko fite mein aur new entry Aditya khosla...
Khosla ka ghosla wala...
jarur snayu ka purana aashik hoga ya fir uske would be finace chosen by he rparents
aur Rnahdir uski achi khasi band bjayega...
lovely update
par chotu sa kyon tha?
update soon na...
waiting...



Hey darling... u r back... thanks dear... hahah Khosla ka Ghosla lol ...

will update soon the next part, & even I am also waiting for ur update...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: starshiny

awesum... luvng it...!!!😛
cont soon...!!!



thanks dear... sure I iwll
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: SWA1992

is Sanyu an orfan??? i think so !!!!



haha yaara pls wait u will get some secrets open... 😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74
Hello All... I am back with another new chapter...

Chapter 4:

By hearing that name Sanyukta looked up and shocked to see the person stood before her. Even Aditya is also shocked to see Sanyukta there...

They both were shocked to see each other there, first Sanyu came to her senses and looked away but still Adi's eyes were fixed on her.

Now its FITE's turn, all were introducing themselves. Sanyu came forward and said introduced herself as a Captain of FITE. On hearing this Sarpanch smile disappeared and asked Vardhan to come as he needs to talk private. They both had a chat & Vardhan sir came back with disappointment & suppressed anger. He called Sanyu aside as he wants to talk her personally.

V: Sanyukta, I want to say you something. But you shouldn't take it in a wrong way.

S: Never sir, I know you will always do the correct thing. Pls tell me what happened.

V; Sarpanch told that they won't accept a girl leading a college. Normally they won't even allow girl to be a part of team, but by as my request allowed, but if she is the captain he can't accept the team. So think again about this.

Sanyu is silent with head down. composed herself took a deep breath.

S: Sir, I am stepping down from Captaincy. For me my team is prior, not my position. Am happy if I am captain or a member of the team. My aim to be a part not the position. So I am stepping down.

Vardhan is amazed with her maturity. (his Inner voice: Sanyukta again you proved me right. this is why I always see her in you well done I am impressed). He just kept his hand on her head and asked her to announce this to team & also select the new captain. She nodded yes and they both left from there, not knowing one person heard the whole convo and feeling bad & amazed with her self strength. he is none other than Aditya.

Sanyu & Vardhan sir came near the group

S: Guys, I have to say something. All thought she might tell something about the tasks. I am stepping down from Captaincy & Vardhan sir informed me to select a new captain. this made everyone shocked, except Vidushi, she wanna dance, but controlled herself.

K & P: but Sanyu why? what happened why are you resigning captaincy?

S: guys not now, let's discuss about that later. First let me announce the new captain & Our new captain is Randhir. This made everyone double shock. Even Randhir shocked & looked at her. So now let's start discussing about what we shall do and we can have some ideas & share with our captain. Saying this she left from there following Kaustu.

Vardhan also left from there adjusting his glasses saying Interesting Very Interesting.

K: Sanyu, ye sab kya hai?? why you did like dat?

Sanyu told everything wat happened & wat Sarpanch said. Kaustu became sad on hearing this. Sanyu cheered Kaustu,

S: hey my dear bestie... leave it yaar, I won't be upset for such small small things... My dream is to be a part & I am a part of this team, that's enough, now no more sady sady and lets get back to our work as we have to complete the task before time.

K: Sanyu, tell me onething Randhir insults a lot not even won't leave a single chance to taunt or fight with you then why have you selected him as a captain

S: with a smile, I know him very well, though he irritates me a lot but still he is genius. can solve any issue and able handle any situation. And also he loves challenges & will give his best part to win. he deserves it.

K: But now he will insult you more na,

S: Leave it yaara... lets think about some ideas so that we can share with Randhir.

One the way they have seen one old lady trying to climb a ladder.

S: Aunty, aap ye kya kar rahi ho? pls get down or else you will fall& hurt. pls tell me we can help you.

Aunty: Beta, I have to bring down the wooden sticks my son has kept them there, have to get them down so that I can cook.

S: oh, then pls stay here I will climb and bring. you & Kaustu just hold this ladder carefully & I will bring them. With lot of request old lady accepted & held the ladder tightly.

Sanyu able to manage to go up & threw the bulk down. when getting down she missed the balance and fall down thinking today her bones will definitely break. But a pair of hands holds her strongly & carefully. She just opened her eyes to see who saved her and shocked to see Adi.

Adi: are you Okay? she able to see the concern in his voice. He asked again as she didn't give any reply

a guy from CITE: arey Adi bhai seems like she got lost in your embrace, this behanji still feeling your touch... with that rest others laughed but stopped by Adi's glare.

Sanyu just muttered a thanks and left from there. Adi watched the way she went and looking till she disappeared. this all has been noticed by Armaan(Ami), Adi's best friend & cousin.

Adi: guys; remember one thing don't you ever dare tease or comment her again. I am warning you. Ami has raised his eyebrows by hearing this. then Adi has corrected himself that not to tease any of the girls or else they will be disqualified from the competition. and left from there.

Ami thought something should be there as he has never seen Adi in such way.

Kaustu & Sanyu reached their place saw Randhir waiting.

R: Are you guys done with roaming around? Remember one thing you came here for competition not for a vacation. He looked at Sanyu expecting some reply, but she remained silent and sat near Yoyo. This made Randhir annoyed & even disappointed.

R: Guys, I have met some of the villagers and discussed about their needy. Lets make a notes of their necessaries. from tomorrow afternoon we can start our work. you also check with them let me know if get any ideas. He was saying all this looking at Sanyu, thought atleast she would bring some new idea. But to his bad she remains silent and went with Kaustu to meet villagers.

IN the evening:

K: Sanyu, bas yaar I am totally tired. today have done a lot of work. Now let's go near the river side and sit there for some time. We should also enjoy the nature or else we will also become machines.

Sanyu smiled at her antics and said ok. both went near the bank of the river sat and enjoying the sunset. the surrounding is so good that they forget about the time. they realized its 8PM.

K: God Sanyu its very late. lets go soon or else Vardhan sir & woh khadoos will shower a lot of scoldings. Sanyu smiled and both started from there.

2 guys from CITE noticed them.

Guy1: Yaar ye hottie & dat behenji where are they coming from??

Guy2: ha, its already late, but see that sexy... she is looking damn hot. Both had a evil smile on their face. Guy 1 intensionally dashed Kaustu.

K: hey you.. are you blind?? can't you see us ??

Guy 1: woh kya haina... we were lost in your beauty and unable to notice you coming near and winked to Guy 2. Sanyu understood they are doing this purposely. So she said Kaustu, lets go no need to talk with such people.

Guy2: Oho behenji wat do you mean by such people?? Are you feeling bad we haven't touched you.. woh kya haina..we are not interested in people like you. look at yourself, old types wearing Salwar, god dunno from where you people will come just to spoil our moods.

both guys started laughing. Sanyu in anger

S: look, we are here for a competition not for fight. don't cross your limits & leave our way, Or else you have to face a lot...

Guy1: Dhamki... bhai look at her she is giving us warning.

Guy 2 holded Sanyu's hand and said if we won't leave wat will you. Sanyu tried hard to get out of his grip and about to slap.

But that guy got a hard punch on his face and he is bleeding. Kaustu scared for a sec to see the scene and shouted. both surprised on seeing the person as he is Adi, their captain.

He ordered the other guy to take him to their camp and will talk with them later and turned towards Sanyu & Kaustu

Adi: Please don't worry. I will drop you till your place.

S: No need, we can manage.

Adi: Please let me. Its already late & very dark. I will come with you till your place.

Seeing Kaustu's fear Sanyu agreed.

On the way none spoke a single word and reached the place. both girls were about to leave

Adi: 1 min. they turned. I really apologize for wat happened. I am really sorry as they have misbehaved with you. Looking at Sanyu, you gone through so much, really can't undo that, but will try not to pain you more. if possible please forgive me. Saying he left from there.

K: Ise kya hua? why he said like that??? she looked to Sanyu as she didn't get any response but saw her walking to the room. Kaustu surprised for their behavior and went into the room.

All the team were waiting for them and tensed as its already late. Randhir is about to shout on Sanyu where was she till then, but stopped by Kaustu. She told her the whole incident happened.

This made Randhir blood boil with anger. He was about to go but stopped by Sanyu. Sanyu sensed his anger and she knew he will go beat those guys black & blue.

S: Randhir, (for a sec Randhir was very happy. After so much of time Sanyu talked with him.) leave it for now. no need to create a issue again. Its our fault, we haven't noticed the time. close this topic for now.

R: he did this and you were asking me not to react.. said in anger

S: I knew it, but for now just leave it, promise me you won't go & fight with them. Pls promise me. Looking into her eyes, dunno why but he nodded his head and stormed out to control his anger.

K: Sanyu, are you sure will Randhir won't fight with them

S: I know him very well. he promised me, won't do anything to them.

K: Are you scared for Randhir? if they do anything to him?

S: smiled, no I am tensed about them. if Randhir will do anything as he will go to any extent.

K: shocked. seems you have more idea & understands him very well. also you are like a controller only can handle him & he will listen only to you. though fight with each other but will take have lots of care...

S; hmm nothing like that. Kaustu smiled & left.

S: what happened to you Sanyu? in such situation also you were worried about him, she remembered how much he was disturbed when she ignored him... she then just shook her head and left from there.

Randhir was roaming outside in the streets, trying to control his anger. stupid bimbo, why you took such promise?? I have promised you so can't do anything.

In the CITE camp

Ami saw the guy bleeding and rushed to him with First aid kit.

Ami: ye sab kya hai?? who did this?

Guy1: bhai Its Adi. Ami got shocked that Adi did it. then Adi came inside.

Adi: shukar manao. I haven't done anything as you are in my team. I have already warned you not to say anything against her. then how dare you to hold her hand and misbehave with her??

Guy2: what's wrong with you bhai? we did just for fun.

Adi: Fun my foot. Saale, I already told you before stay away from her.

Guy 2: If not what will you do? again punch??? we also won't be silent. knew wat to do.

Adi: kamine, what will you do & he was about to beat him again. But Ami stopped him

Ami: Adi, stop it I said Just stop. paagal hua kya??? wats this?

Adi controlled his anger and went out, before leaving the room turned back, You know me very well. This is last warning for you, don't dare to do anything with her. Or else know one will save you from me, and you knew very well I will go to any extent... remember that, saying he left.

Ami shocked... As he has never seen Adi in such way. rest too were also shocked. for them Adi is not of this serious types, he loves his friends very much. they were confused why he behaved like this.

Adi came out and walking on the road. In the middle met Randhir.

R: Hey you...stop. Listen I have promised one that won't do anything, or else now your guys would be in hospital. Just warning you, stay away from her. Warna...

Adi: Warna Kya?? don't dare to even think about doing anything to my team. I know how to handle, better you just stay away. both had a tashan look and left from there with clenched fists.

Done with 4th chapter... guys pls share your comments... so that I can continue and it motivates me a lot.

Loads of love,

Mickey



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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
res
unres...

ultimate update...

are ye Adi to sanyu ka purana ashiq nikla...
baton baton mein maafi maang gya...
sorry bol gya apne past ke liye...

and kaustu said it right, she is Randhir' controller...he won;t break his promise he made with her...

but can i ask for a change? yaar is village track pe sab ne bhut kuch likh hai, all made same way,. ranhdir and sannyu fighting making different projects and finally sanyu's acceptable just like show...

like you wrote today. snayu stopped and randir understood, can you keep it this away only, he just taunt her but they still work together and with love caring for each other as well as a bit respect from Randir...as he does while feeding her when she is hungry...i want their emotional touch in this...


dekh le tu likhde nahi to mujhe ek aur SS likhna pdega...😆

anyways lovely and update soon...

Edited by reet21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76
and the award for biggest stalker goes to

NONE OTHER THAN ME🤣
Edited by reet21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: reet21

and the award for biggest stalker goes to

NONE OTHER THAN ME🤣



thank u so much dear... dats true we both really stalk each other 😆😆😆😆😆

Love u a lot...🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: amulbaby06



thank u so much dear... dats true we both really stalk each other 😆

Love u a lot...🤗


i am in love with yours troy
to kya krun.
unreserved above...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#79

Originally posted by: reet21

res

unres...

ultimate update...

are ye Adi to sanyu ka purana ashiq nikla...
baton baton mein maafi maang gya...
sorry bol gya apne past ke liye...

and kaustu said it right, she is Randhir' controller...he won;t break his promise he made with her...

but can i ask for a change? yaar is village track pe sab ne bhut kuch likh hai, all made same way,. ranhdir and sannyu fighting making different projects and finally sanyu's acceptable just like show...

like you wrote today. snayu stopped and randir understood, can you keep it this away only, he just taunt her but they still work together and with love caring for each other as well as a bit respect from Randir...as he does while feeding her when she is hungry...i want their emotional touch in this...


dekh le tu likhde nahi to mujhe ek aur SS likhna pdega...😆

anyways lovely and update soon...



thanks a lot darling... I can assure you changes will be there... by next chapter you will come to know. 😉😉😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: amulbaby06



thanks a lot darling... I can assure you changes will be there... by next chapter you will come to know. 😉😉😉

and i will be waiting dear
update soon...


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