New SS - Love Beyond limits....... Updated last part at page: 90 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Tsuchi

enjoyed ur update a lot mickey..😛
beginning was so emotional..but their task n how they eat dinner from same plate was so lovely..truly loved it!😳
n yay!!..here is the tittle..very nice!😃
thanks fr updating n for pm...
precap is sandhir's fight!😆

Originally posted by: reet21

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unres...

first of all i am super se bhi upar wali happy...got first place again in your SS...

coming to update -- Awww!!!!!!!! Thank u so so much

it was just awesome... U have made my day darling

Perfect.loved how, they he brought his lioness back by commenting on her, then made her eat in canteen... their almost ahem ahem in cafe.you know... hehe U know na I am very bad in explaining something like this... tried my level best...

and sanyu was so much worried for him when he was about to fall...

but snayu is quite upset over some matter, i just want randhir to help her as this Randir is more understanding than serial wala randhir...

loving their care for each other... Yup Randhir is bit caring but never ever express it :)

and this time, story pacing was also perfect...

but one thing, when you have written Randhir's POV, usmein, you wrote karti hun, instead of karta hun...like 'i' instead of 'a' at many places, looks like a girls's words instead of a boys...pleasecorrect that... lol thank you so so much for pointing it... yaar I am very poor in writing Hindi. :( :( . I can understand but can't write everytime change the gender 😭😭😭😭😭 very confusion master in this

And continue soon...

will be waiting,..

Love you - Love u tooo a lottt...

Reet

Originally posted by: missreddy7

Mickeyyy!!!

It was really good!

The atta scene was just too funny and when he stares at her eating her sandwich? That was adorable.

My most favourite scene was the laughing wala and eating parathas from the same plate wala

Anyways!! So they have another task coming up?

I think you have something big for us!!

Can't wait to read more

Keep it up the great work

Love

Vinu

Originally posted by: sandhirlover

Hey Mickey...

this was awesome...

you penned it beautifully..

n I loved it...

Sanyukta n Randhir moments in canteen.. aww I just loved it...

Sanyukta ke parents ki koi mystery hai... n m eagerly wanna know that...

now plzz update next part soonish...

dont 4get to pm me

Love

Ashka.

Originally posted by: 123456me

alee waahh

mickey...

tu to chaa gayi...

mastam...

i read both d parts now...

it was reallyyy goood...

update soon

n pm me nxt part... without forgetting...

love,Shrey😳