Sandhir TS ~Yeh Hai Aashiqui~ Part 2, Pg 12 - Page 7

Originally posted by: ShefaliMalhotra

You have chosen a very sensitive topic for your TS

And to top of it all, its is hard to express the victim's mental state through words

But you have done complete justice with it

Thank you sooo much Shefali! I am glad that you thought so😳

Nobody could have written better than this

O.M.G!!! Officially dead!!! Thank You sooo much🤗🤗🤗

You have done a fab job in expressing Sanyu and the cruelty she faced

Your writing got me goosebumps

I could feel the pain, humiliation and insult she must have felt

I was on the verge of ripping off the head of the rapist

But I feel more disgusted towards Sameer

He was with Sanyu for freaking 3 years and still couldn't support when she needed him the most

I really want Sanyu to do a fightback

And that she will! I want to showcase that these victims are just people who want to move on, but the incident haunts them! Hopefully it comes across that way! *fingers crossed*

I can't write more! I'm feeling terrible :(

Don't feel terrible yaar! I feel terrible for making you feel terrible! Trust me, I will make it up to you with the next one!

Update soon and please PM me

Surely!😳

Love, More Love,

Shefali Pari

P.S. The ending fitted perfectly :)

Thank Youuu🤗

Originally posted by: mishtypiya

simply fab...beautifully penned...

Originally posted by: SWA1992

The dr is Randhir Rt??? i'm super excited to read nxt part...plz update soon

Originally posted by: missreddy7

Oh pariii

I have read some stories that deal with a girl going through these issues but the way they portray the girl brings out the inner feminist in me! But you did it really well !!

You go girl!

I love the part when she gives it back to Sameer!

"My ri"" Before he could complete his sentence, Sanyukta had already slid his ring of her finger and thrust it upon his hands. Putting on her best poker face, Sanyukta said, "I am not incomplete. You are incomplete, incomplete of expecting someone who is with imperfections. I am not the one tainted. You are the one who has the tainted mentally. I wish all the best in life Mr Mittal. You can show yourself out"

I LOVED it! I'm sure every girl at some point wants to say that to someone that doubts them. That part was beautifully written.

Yes! It's in my blood to be a badass feminist are Aruru had said😆

And completely agree about how they portray such cases on tv. They emphasize more on the "unpure" part more than the fact that they are going to have pitiful eyes following them for the rest of their lives or the fact that they lose every ounce of self esteem that they have. Some poor souls even start doubting themselves right?

I know right! I cannot imagine the emotions that must be going through them when they would watch such vile lies on tv! I mean they just want to move on, but the incident seems to haunt them!

Me was watching the Delhi Rape case verdict and I actually left like punching every one of the reporters who even interviewed the lawyers! That's where the TV part came from...

Yeah you can probably tell that I'm ranting now..hehe!! Can't help it! You was tooo good

Thank You Thank You! And rant all you want! I promise to be all ears!😃

And who is this doctor huh? Can't be Randhir cause he went to an engineering college?

But then again Pari, I believe you could do some fixing there? He could be the doctor!!

😉... Originally in the episode of YHA, the lead is meant to be a police officer, but I wanted her confidence to be back and personally I can't write crime... So yea😆

Randhir in a white doctors coat looking all sorts of handsome ☺️

Hahahahah! Such besharams' we are😆

Anyways!! I think I'm going off topic here!

I welcome it with open arms!😃

Update sooonnn!!

Will do too!😳

Love thy neighbour

More Love from thy neighbour😃

Originally posted by: bewakoofLadki

Nyc

Originally posted by: maliha_khan

Awesum ts... Wen ll u update the next part?

Originally posted by: SanDhiraddict

My respect to you for choosing such a not-so-easily-go-down subject. I don't find her victim here...she IS fighting so not lost it yet.

Thank you sooo much hun! And yes, she is not the victim! We always associate victims to be helpless and broken... That is why she is fighter like you said😃

You are a W-R-I-T-E-R my friend. You gave me goosebumps through her emotions. She is such a strong girl and you depicted her so well.

Naaaw!!!! Thank You sooo much for your sweet words! you are tooo kind my friend!🤗

Waiting for the update.

Mumma promise tomorrow!

Please PM me. Surely!

Originally posted by: .kiara.

oh no worries take you time 😊

yeap totally.. i rather take 7 pheras with randhir's shirtless pic than any stranger 😆

he is soo dreamy.. i have been watching Sandhir's scenes like crazy all evening.. their kissing scene gave me goosebumps 😳 what a chemistry 😃

ovaries are at risk 🤣 i believe my entire endocrine system is at stake 🤣

oh this is Kiara here 😊

Originally posted by: BeLi3Ve

You know how I am, right? RES! *dies laughing*

Originally posted by: TINASINGHPS

' U r tainted' .. no mr. mtala. surely not.. she is purely the pure girl... as her souoll is still pure.. unlike urs.. so jus get lost.

1 request.. pl.. plz no sad ending.. i m already weak at heart... i know u mentioned in pm.. but still hoping a not 'happy' but atleast a good end