Originally posted by: priya1101
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Hey Pari.
Hey Priya😃
Again an amazing piece of work by you dearie.
*Humbly bows!*
The topic choosen is a very delicate social issue,but u penned it down perfectly,the emotional turmoil that Sanyukta was going through was clearly visible,each and every word depicted her pain,it was heart-wrenching.Particularly,in these type of cases,the society doesn't blame that animals,they blame the victims,i don't understand the mind-sets of People,they look at the victim with a look that says,as though she is at fault.Such situations boil my blood.Being a girl i can't tolerate such mentality of People,infact no girl can tolerate this.
Me too! I don't understand how the society thinks it's the girl fault for the events that occurred to her! I mean was she standing there asking for it? No she was just minding her own business! Yes! No girl can ever tolerate such narrow-minded behaviour, but what can we do? Society again barricades the voices of protest!
As time pass by,the physical damage may heal,but the damage it caused internally never heals,the inner suffering remains life-long.It is really hard for the victim to forget about that incident and move on in life,possible to some extent,unless and until she gets the culprits punished,i.e...,death sentence.
@Bold: Couldn't put it better! We can only imagine the pain during and the aftermath of rape! We can only assume and we can never learn, as words do not hold the capacity to explain! A victim can try and move on, but there fear lives right?
The worst part still... The culprits get amazing foxes as lawyers and they just infuriate me to no extent! I knew the Delhi Rape case, I wanted to k*ll the lawyers of the rapists by shooting them where it hurts the most! It was already hard to catch these animals, but it's even harder to prosecute them! Loopholes in the system!
The way u started the story with Sanyukta in the washroom,sitting lifelessly under the shower of steaming hot water,the pain that the hot water caused was nothing compared to the pain that she went through during that horrible incident.Her uneasiness,her repeated attempts to scrub away all the marks.U depicted the pain that she is going through in words,it was not an easy task but u did it flawlessly.
Thank You! I have never written so , for a lack of better words, descriptively before!
In a way,it is good that that Sameer broke off the relationship because,if he can't stand by her side,when she needed him the most,then there is no point in taking the relationship ahead,because relationships depends on trust and Sanyukta trusted him that he will be by her side through every thick and thin,no matter what,but he had broken her trust.It was nice that Sanyukta showed him the door.
@Bold: Man! You are just tooo goood Priya! Lemme hug you! I love you because you picked up on my subtle hints! It feels soo good when this happens! I love you sooo much for reading in between the lines!🤗🤗
She needs the person,who helps her in gaining the lost confidence and helps her to become the strong woman,a person who will support,understand her and stand by her side,no matter what.
Nothing.More.To.Add😎
"She had read that the scars obtained after a war should never be hidden from the public eye. These were scars of survival, these were her remainder that she was always capable."
Loved this line,hats off to you for writing on such a sensitive issue,which cannot be easily described in words,but u did a fabulous job,each and every word seemed realistic.U are an amazing writer,whose works are beyond perfection and u have the capability to keep the viewers hooked to your works,because of your extra-ordinary writing skills and unique concepts,which directly touch the readers hearts.The two lines from the song fitted perfectly.
I read in a magazine where women hide their bruises from domestic violence behind makeup... So I used that as a before and after kind of thing?
I cannot thank you enough Priya! I really cannot! I feel like shipping you a big box of chocolates and hugging you tightly until you go "get the eff off me you creep"
I actually cannot deal with how sweet, generous and loving you are too me! Your reviews never fail to leave such a big goofy smile on my face! Even my dad looks forward to your comments😆... Yeah he likes to read the comments only😆
No but seriously girl... Lemme just 🤗🤗
Loved the fact,that Sanyukta's moms eyes no more bore sympathy,but concern and infinite amount of love for her daughter,who has the capability to fight against all odds.Her fighter daughter.
A supporting family is all one needs right? And plus I wanted a change in the behaviour of family and Sanyukta's outlook after this scenario... I hope to make it out better in the next part!
Waiting to see how she tries to regain her strength and confidence with the help of the doctor.
I promise to give a feel good ending!😃
Will be eagerly waiting for the next part.
Soonish! I cannot find the words today... but I promise tomr!😃
Lots of love.
More love than ever before,
Pari🤗
Anupamaa
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