Sandhir TS ~Yeh Hai Aashiqui~ Part 2, Pg 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: SweetSassy
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Let me just say, I am already blushing!😳

Sorry for commenting so late Pari!!! I had specially taken some time out to comment on the TS only!!!
Aarreey chma-cham! No need to say sorry! I am just touched you took some time out to read and comment cham-cham🤗

Pariii!!! What a master piece! I am spell-bound!!!
The TS had a very sensitive issue, but the way you wrote it was stupefying!
You won't believe but I read it 3 times, after that i am commenting now!!!The content was so delicate, that to understand the depth, I had to read it 3 times!!!

You read it THREE times?!? WOAH! Thank You SOOO Much baby! I cannot tell you how happy I am!!!😳😳

The TS expressed subtle issue!!! Sanyukta's heart-wrenching emotions were aesthetically written!!! In this period of time, everyone only sympathies, but no one empathize!!! Why is it so that the Victim has to suffer so much, why is it so that only the victim is questioned and blamed! I hate such narrow-minded people!
Getting raped doesn't devastate the person physically, but also mentally!

Don't feel like adding anything more!😎

Being in a relationship for 3 years, and still saying you are tainted! You are incomplete!What kind of creatures are these?

It's extremely sad and disgusting but sadly it does happen... Guys leave behind girls who desperately cling to hope though it doesn't happen! It's cheap and downright disgusting!🤢

With whom Samir Mittal shared so much time, with whom he promised to live till eternity, suddenly all these promises and things vanished just because she was physically assaulted by someone!!
Why does virginity plays such a role in these cases?
I was feeling to stab a knife when that Samir asked for the ring!Was his love that feeble!!! There are millions of Samir who leave millions of Sanyukta for such a reason!!!

What can we do baby?! All we can do is shout in to the void... Society is too rigid to ever listen to a numbered few🤢

She had read that the scars obtained after a war should never be hidden from the public eye. These were scars of survival, these were her remainder that she was always capable.
I loved these lines!!! I especially hate those girls who confide themselves after such incidents!! What was their fault in all these cases, why should they hide? They didn't did anything wrong for which they need to hide their scars!!! But yes, from victim's POV, wounds will heal, but the scars will always make them remember about those frightful moments!!!

Again... we cannot do anything! They feel weak and uncomfortable in their own skin. To the victims will be another case of "easier said than being done!"

Haaye teri hoon saari ki saari main .. ho .. oo ..
Par tere liye baazari mai...
By including these lyrics you made the TS more thoughtful! I loved the song!!!

Thank You! I love the song too! Those end lines are just like a punch in your face!😳

Pari I simply loved the update!! after reading such a exquisite TS on such a delicate issue, had made me respect you more!!!
I loved those small things in the TS, like, the way she absorbed the hot water, which was not at all painful as compared to that incident, the way she tried to hide her scars from the world, the way she was getting scar from the world, her uncomfortable feeling in her own body, her breaking down in front of him, giving a fierce answer and then feeling the sharpness of that broken mirror, which depict nothing but her own life!!!!At first I had thought that Sanyukta would take a stupid step with that broken piece of mirror!!!

You are the only person who picked up on the glass shards bit! A lot of victims think of ending their lives and I just wanted to keep it at subtle hints... Not too over the top... Just sufficient enough to get across my point... Though not many people picked up not it!😆

I endured such small details!!! These all are indeed true from a victim's POV!!!
Moi being more of a social activist loved the TS's concept!!!
Now I have hardly any word left Pari! Keep writing like this and be blessed!!!

I cannot say anything more! Moi too is a social activist! 😃 Thank You sooo much!!!!🤗

And yeah, what was that precap, was that doctor our Randhir?Moi would die imagining him in that attire! Moi looking forward to read the next update!!!

Update hopefully today! (I have been saying this more the past three days now😆)

Love and Respect Just absolute love!
Sanju :-*😳 Pari🤗

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To say Thank You' for showering sooo much affection on this TS would not be enough! My feeble attempt at expressing gratitude! *facepalm* Next and final part to this TS and it's extremely long! Extremely long and a little rushed, but it's a TS so I needed to fit most of the content in!
Mein ek innocent si jaan, proof reading se pareshan... You guys know the rest😆

Yeh Hai Aashiqui~ Part Two (A)

The rain had long passed and had given away to a pleasant, clearer sky with no dark clouds. As Sanyukta, sleep deprived and eyes still blood shot, got ready and she walked out of her house wearing her bruises and scars with pride. As she walked out of her apartment, the sound of gossiping aunties fell upon her ears. "Poor girl got used!" one of them said, while another one replied, "Bechaari! Think about her future, no one will want to mar- -"... Clenching her fists she tried to ignore the voices that were regurgitating in her head.

Walking in to her office without her facade of yesterday, Sanyukta attracted a lot of stares, sympathetic stares. As she looked around she had attracted everyone's attention, everyone's unwanted attention. "If I am remembering correctly, which I am, don't you all have some work to do?" Sanyukta said emphasising on the word "work", before walking and slamming her office door shut.

Absorbing herself in file and pending contracts, Sanyukta was soon able to divert her over working, over stressing mind. Despite the occasional stare here and there, the day has gone smoothly for Sanyukta. Now all that remained was the dreadful journey home, as she went out to look for a taxi, ran to her lift and again felt uncomfortable to say the least at the company of males in the lift.

As she knocked at the door, her mom ushered her inside not before looking behind Sanyukta's frail figure as a reflex. After serving Sanyukta her dinner, her mother began, "Beta, let's go see a doctor just in case? I mean just in case... I mean just to be sure" her mother gulped back her saliva. As Sanyukta looked up at her mother, thinking again to be met with sympathy, but her mother's eyes no longer beared that suffocation. This time Anju Agrawal's soft eyes were brimming with concern and unadulterated love for the fighter that was her daughter.

Slowly nodding, she again walked lifelessly to her room and locked the door. After making sure the windows were shut and curtains drawn, Sanyukta pulled over the covers, only to stare at the ceiling. If she closed her mind consciously, that dark lane would cloud her vision. Hence she felt herself staring at the broken shards of glass in the bin again and her heart simply wanted to keep running her finger over the sharp edge again and again. She stared at the shards inertly until the first crack of dawn, when sleep finally engulfed her in to its arms.

Upon reaching the hospital with her mother by her side, Sanyukta left herself grudgingly walk towards the counter and swallowed her bile and asked for a female doctor. "Sorry ma'am, we are currently waiting for a female doctor to arrive and additionally, she only takes patients with prior appointments"

"Is there any other doctor on duty, who is free right now?" Sanyukta heard her mother say, she did have a point; they really didn't have a choice. They couldn't afford to patiently wait this one out. Giving her consent to any available doctor, Sanyukta started to fill out the formalities.

Reason for visit. Sanyukta's hands started to wobble slightly at those words. She swallowed her bile again and wrote one word: "Rape". Her mother's eye brimmed with tears of unspoken pride. There and then, her mother sent a quick prayer to all her Gods and guardian angels, to thank them for their mercy. Funny that, it is only during certain ordeals that even the extreme start to believe in the presence of an Almighty.

"Ma'am, a doctor is ready to see you", the receptionist professional tone had suddenly changed to one of unwanted compassion, as she gave out the instructions to the doctor's cabin. Sanyukta felt herself roll her eyes and sigh deeply as she walked out alone as only she wanted to see the doctor.

Knocking softly on the door, Sanyukta's heart was literally thumping loudly than ever before. Lowering her head she walked in to the doctor's cabin and sat down dejectedly on one of the opposite seats. Shivering slightly, her eyes wandered around the doctor's cabin table avoiding the gaze of the doctor.

"Sanyukta right? What brings you to see me today?" the doctor's tone was irritatingly cheerful and his gaze too intense. "Urm... I ur..." flinching slightly at her helplessness, Sanyukta had no idea how to break it to an outsider, a male outsider. Even knowing that he is a complete professional, Sanyukta felt herself awkwardly shift in her chair, while wiping her sweaty hands on her jeans and letting her eyes wander on the table in front of her.

The doctor cleared his throat alarming Sanyukta as she snapped her head up, her eyes shining with fear. For the first time the doctor was able to look in to his patients hazel orbs which help inexplicable emotions, though he could tell that she was afraid, but why?

"You know I like to bite people when they don't say anything to me" the doctor said in a mocking tone which failed to make its impact on the person before him. Frowning slightly he pulled out her filled form and looked up to the person in front of him who was awkwardly shifting in front of him, adamant on not making eye contact.

In this few years of practise, he had always heard of numerous rape cases, though never handling one himself. He got up and arranged for a blood sample to be taken by a female nurse. Sanyukta had heard the proceedings and felt herself release her breath and closed her eyes in gratification. As Sanyukta stepped out of the nurse's cabin, she found the doctor standing right outside the door and gestured her to his office.

"Your test results will come in a few days time, but at the moment take a seat here" the doctor said while ushering her to the hospital bed in front of him. Sanyukta's subconsciously widened her eyes in alarm and in reflex her body stiffened. Realising the misunderstanding he had created, he cleared his throat and said, "to just appropriately just check your bruises". Hiding the embarrassment in her eyes, Sanyukta sat on the table, while the doctor examined the bruises on her face.

"What is your profession Sanyukta?" he doctor said while he glared at the hickey mark on the neck. Swallowing her saliva, she said, "I work as a marketing executive." A prolonged silence followed after which the doctor reached out to touch one of her marks near her eyes. Jumping in fear, Sanyukta's eyes had widened and were out of pop out of her. The doctor's eyes however held anything but sympathy, his carried another emotion, he held curiosity in his eyes.

Just as he was about to say a few words of condolences, Sanyukta interrupted him, "I am sorry... But I am getting more fidgety these days." The doctor smiled and said, "It's okay... I get fidgety when my tummy hasn't been fed", this time though his joke had earned a tiny smile. "Anymore wounds?"

"Actually... ur..." Sanyukta couldn't help but tug at the hemline of her kurti all the while avoiding his gaze. Understanding her hesitance, he smiled a little and said, "It's okay, I was going to ask you to stay back here for a few days anyways, that way a female doctor can help you." He saw preparing herself to argue and before she could say anything, he said, "You look fragile and it's better if you stay here for a few days... For formalities sake" he said firmly and saw her surrender."

As she got down and walked to the door, the doctor said, "Sanyukta, it was never your fault and always remember I am always here to talk.", his eyes shining honestly. "What's your name doctor?"... "Randhir Singh Shekhawat" while extending his hand, which she tentatively took it in politeness.

As she stepped back in the hospital with her bags, Sanyukta was escorted to her room where the doctor was already waiting for her. He turned and offered a bright smile only to be met with a demure one in return. "Welcome to your room for the next few days! Trust me if you want good food just let me know, the canteen basically serves you water and boiled vegetables" he squirmed his face in disgust.

Smiling apprehensively in return, Sanyukta was told to rest for the night before the analysis tomorrow. Sanyukta tried getting used to the uncomfortable and not so soft bed. After twisting and turning in her bed for the umpteenth time, she got out to wander in the garden. She glanced around and walked out to the nearest balcony and sat on the railings. She looked down and show a range of cars and people on the street and took a deep breath.

"What do you think you are doing? Do you not value your life? What will parents say for crying out loud!" Randhir said as he pulled her from the railings and shouted at her without giving her a chance to explain. "Doctor! Please! I was not planning to do what you are thinking... I just need some fresh air!"

"Oh really! Then why was this in your bag Sanyukta?!" Randhir said while pulling out a glass shard from his doctor's lab coat. "Please enlighten me!" Randhir said, his tone conveying hints of anger and concern.

For the first time Sanyukta let a tear fall from her eyes in front of another person after Sameer. From that day she had not broken down, but today she had reached the pinnacle of her control.

"Why do you care so much?"

"Because Sanyukta what happened to you was atrocious! Words will fall a mile short of how inhumane and atrocious it was! But it does not mean you can end your life and just think that all your problems will come to an end. I am a doctor Sanyukta; trust me when I say this suicide is never the answer! Ever!" his eyes faltered and he looked away before continuing, "I have seen many families fall... Don't do this!"

Sanyukta looked into his eyes without hesitation this time and they held a different emotion... Pushing aside her thoughts, she walked back to her room but nor before throwing the glass shard in the bin where it appropriately belonged.

~*~ I couldn't finish it off here... The rest in the next post!

Edited by gujjupari - 11 years ago

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Yeh Hai Aashiqui~ Part 2 (B)

After that incident on the balcony, Randhir and Sanyukta used to always talk to each other. He would come to see her every day before he started work and visited her after his duty finished.

They would talk about the most absurd of all things from music, cheese to lady fingers. Whatever they talked about, the conversation would flow naturally without any awkward silences. They shared a mutual understanding after that night. He gave her the trigger that she very much required. For some absurd reason he was able to look past the facade she had put up in front of all.

The night before her discharge both Randhir and Sanyukta sat down on the same railing and looked out to the night sky. "I never asked but did you go to a police station Sanyukta?" Randhir said looking towards Sanyukta who just looked in to distance. With every passing day Sanyukta had started to lose her hesitation towards him. She looked forward to his visits and their random ramblings. She even found herself giggling at his idiotic comments.

"What is the point? I don't have the time to go to the police station every day for no results Randhir. What will they do? To find those urr things amongst billions odd people! Do you really think I will have the energy to go and face those men when I am sixty years old when the case would have just reached the court proceedings? There are 2 women who get raped every hour in India and I will just add to that number, nothing more!"

Randhir looked at how bashfully blunt her reply was. Randhir too looked in to the distance and thought about her reply. He did know that the judicial system did have its flaws, but that doesn't mean that she was not entitled to justice.

"Sanyukta you need to go file a complaint! You have to give yourself justice! You have to and I know want to hear any excuses. You are going to go to a police station tomorrow and that's it! And I am coming with you!"

"You know you are really immature for a doctor" Sanyukta shook her head in denial! "Did you just crack a joke?" Randhir mocked, his eyes wide!

"Never asked you this question either, but any boyfriends?" Randhir asked in curiosity. Sanyukta took a deep breath and exhaled loudly. "One... Was with him for three years, we were going to marry."

"Then what happened?" Randhir asked urging her to go on. Sanyukta boldly faced him and said, "he left me after this." She looked back ahead and shook her head in amusement. "He said I was tainted... I don't blame him, anyone would have left someone life me..." she continued and sighed deeply.

Randhir's anger knew no limits after hearing how cheap and inhumane some could get. His anger was plummeting at her every word, only he knew how hard he clenched his fist to control his anger.

"Anyways tell me what yours? Any girlfriends?" She nudged him playfully. Taken back at her sudden change, Randhir said, "One... but she left me ages ago. She took her own life after she was molested. I told her I would stay by her side, but she still didn't pay any heed" Randhir gulped back his tears.

"Not every guy is like your finance Sanyukta. There are guys who would be willing to marry someone as beautiful, as smart, as successful as me. Even me.

Sanyukta's head snapped towards his direction. It made a lot of sense to her now; it made sense to her now why Randhir never had sympathy in his eyes but held care and concern instead. "I am sorry"

"I am sorry too." Randhir said and both looked out ahead in the distance. "So you are going to discharged tomorrow huh?" Randhir said looking at his fingers before continuing, "You know I might actually miss you and your snide comments."

"You don't have to miss me, you are coming with me tomorrow right?" Sanyukta said without any hesitation and looked towards him. He smiled in return and both just looked in to the distance. Their silence was their solace.

(Sorry for skipping a few details, but I wanted to finish this part here... So it is a little "jumpy" at places)

Randhir had held her hand tightly when the police inspector asked to tell them what had happened that night. To say that she stuttered and lisped throughout the confession would be an understatement. While trying not to cry, Sanyukta tried to swallow her bile and talk at the same time, little to her credit though.

But he was forever by her side, holding her hand tightly and warmly. At first when he had reached out to touch her hand, she had stiffened immediately but gradually got used to his touch as he stubbornly didn't let go until she responded back with equal zeal.

After handing the officers with the medical reports, which were fortunately void of STDs or pregnancy, Randhir and Sanyukta both headed out of the police station hand in hand.

"Randhir where are we going?" Sanyukta said in apprehension, as Randhir drove the car only onto the main street. Sanyukta no longer fell uncomfortable in Randhir's presence, in fact she quite liked his quirky antics.

"Surprise Sanyukta" He winked knowing how much Sanyukta hates surprises. Upon parking the car in both of the shop, Randhir ushered Sanyukta inside and told her, "You are going to get a tattoo Sanyukta!" he said looking at the Sanyukta's shocked face.

"And why would I put myself so through much pain?"

"So you know you are a fighter and always come out stronger!"

Sanyukta just looked at Randhir's calm words and just smiled. She went to the cubicle and came back smiling. "So how was it?"

Sanyukta smiled in response and asked him to drop her off at her work place. And he did so without pressuring her for an answer. He knew that if she wanted to tell him, she will eventually.

As she entered her office again after a week, she looked around and she no longer bothered herself with the glares from her co-workers. She just took it in her stride and walked to her office with her head held higher than ever before.

As her day finished, she looked for a taxi as always, but found Randhir standing leaning on his car instead. Walking over to him, she managed to say, "Miss me already" in her mocking voice.

Earning a chuckle and a small nod in return, Sanyukta headed in to her car and he drove her home.

"You want to know what I tattooed?" Sanyukta said in an all-knowing tone. "So you do know?" Randhir asked acknowledging at how well she knew him in return.

"It says Gratitude' in Greek" She said hesitantly pulling up her shirt a little to reveal a bunch of Greek letters. She pulled down her shirt and looked ahead to the long road on front of them.

"You trust me this much?"

"Randhir, I think we have long passed that stage..." she said smiling a little in gratitude.

It was only then Randhir realised the reason for which Sanyukta had gotten that specific tattoo. Randhir had no words to explain his sentiments at that moment. He had just wanted to hug her in the moving car, but he just diverted his attention to the long road in front of them.

As Sanyukta got out of his car and started to walk out Randhir said, "Wait! See you around Sanyukta."

As Sanyukta walked past the noisy aunties again, who always seemed to hold a gossip party every morning and night? As she walked past the aunties, she heard them saying, "Look at her... She doesn't even realise what has happened to her! Still going out late at night and worse still her parents don't put a leash on this girl."

Sanyukta sighed and walked over to the aunties and putting on her sweetest ever voice she said, "Hello aunty! I completely appreciate your concern about my life but please do not bring my parents in to this." After walking off Sanyukta sighed deeply, she had wanted to hurt the aunty where it hurt the most, but she decided against it.

She no longer felt like she needed to give justifications to anyone, as she no longer cared about other people's narcissistic judgments.

As she reached out to keep the closing lift door open, she saw the same guy she used to freak at the sight off. She gave him a warm smile and after sharing a few casual talks, she got off at her level.

As her mother opened the door, she was met by her old daughter who waltzed in and brightened the entire room.

After finishing off her dinner and helping her mother with the other chores, she walked to her room with a spring in her step and left the bedroom door open.

She went to her memory table and took out a piece of glass shard, that was somehow mysteriously placed back in her bag by a certain someone.

She smiled to herself and checked her tattoo in the mirror. It was impulsive, but unlike other impulsive decisions, this decision she was not going to regret at all!

Her phone pinged and she opened up the message which read, "Same place same time tomorrow?"

Smiling slightly and typing a "Yes", Sanyukta fell asleep without a care in the world.

She no longer needed to stare at the ceiling. She no longer needed to wait for sleep to overcome her. She no longer needed to facade her bruises, which were improving with every facing day.

Her scars would heal, one by one. But they surely would. And she too would be capable of loving again.

Iss rog ko kuch sujhe na... Koi farq isse bujhe na... Ye harartein, utare nahin Hai sarphiri, yeh aashiqui... Maadmast bhi, yeh aashiqui... Kambhaakht bhi, yeh aashiqui.

Love carries the capacity to look beyond all! All you need is a pure heart! Always give love a chance, it is an unexplainable emotion which can only be felt and expressed. Those who don't know love is, have either never been in love or are so deeply entangled, that they don't know it is Love.

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I did promise a happy ending and personally I thought this was alright right? I wanted to focus on the "feel good" nature of this part! I hope that was accomplished! And the title track had to be used for me, it's such an amazing song this one! Also the bit where Sanyukta says, "There are 2 women who get raped every hour"... Yes that is the curent statistic...

PS: In the episode, which has not aired yet, the female lead is meant to be a sex tape victim while the male lead is shown as a police officer. I had initially thought of making Randhir a police officer as well, but then I thought it would delve more into the criminal side of things (unconsciously of course), while I wanted something more on re-building her confidence and self-esteem. So that was my reason for making Randhir a doctor in this TS!

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Res.
I will unres it soon dearie.😳

Yayyy,i am first.

aaj mein upar aasman neeche,aaj mein aage zamaana hain picche.😎😆

But sorry,for unressing lately,i was little busy,college and all.

This is beyond perfection Pari,I am falling out of words to praise ur work.It's flawless and brilliant.

U handled each and every detail with great ease,that's the skill of a Professional writer and u possess it,Hats off Pari,All in all it's a deep,emotional and an amazing piece of work.

Life is a journey,it's not always a cake walk,we all know that it's a roller-coaster ride,it moves on and we have to move on with it,saying this is easy but jisspe bit tha hain,woh hi samajh sakte hain,who might have gone through these incidents in life,only they can understand it,we can never understand what they are going through.But kehte hain na waqt har zakm bar deta hain(Time heals all wounds),slowly and steadily Sanyukta gained back her confidence with the help of the doc-Randhir,whose company slowly made her strong,he being a doctor and a good human being he was, understood her inner turmoil and behaved/reacted according to it.Right from their first meeting he made sure that she doesn't feel awkward.After her examination in the room,by a nurse,when she was heading outside,I loved the way how he said that,it was never her fault and that he will always be there to talk.Small little jokes cracked by Rd,never failed to bring a tiny smile on her lips.This is the beauty of a relationship,where we can feel the connection with the person's soul,in the first meet itself.

The part where she has to write the reason for her visit,even though her hands woobled initially,then the fighter in her pushed her and she wrote Rape,and her mother's eyes brimming with tears of pride,seeing the courage and strength of her daughter.It gives a message that we should not be afraid of disclosing the fact.We should face it and fight against it.

"The doctor cleared his throat alarming Sanyukta as she snapped her head up, her eyes shining with fear. For the first time the doctor was able to look in to his patients hazel orbs which help inexplicable emotions, though he could tell that she was afraid, but why?"

This first appointment of Sanyu with the doc was penned down with atmost care and sensitivity,so much thought process is required to write this kind of work and u r really a perfectionist.Few days stay in the hospital and Dr.Randhir's company,helped her wounds heal not only externally but also internally,to some extent.Sharing her thoughts with him and listening to his thoughts,developed a strong bond between them and gradually made sanyukta to overcome her past and helped her in emerging into a more strong and confident woman.

Dr.Randhir worked as a panacea for all her wounds.This is the power and purity of true love which brightens even the darkest phase of life.Not only his support,but the fighting spirit in her helped her to move on.

RD is a ray of hope and beacon of light in her life.Guys like Rd are difficult,to find in real life,but there might be few guys like him in real life too,who support their gf/partner,through this phase and provide them support,be with them always,come what may.

There are many high points in these two parts,the hospital scene,Reason for visit,Rd and Sanyu's first meet,She staying in the hospital,Their growing bond,he supporting her through every thick and thin,balcony talks,SanDhir going to police-station together to lodge complaint against those morons,She slowing forgetting her past and stepping towards her future confidently,gaining her courage back,The glass shards part,the tattoo part is the highlight of this TS

"And why would I put myself so through much pain?"

"So you know you are a fighter and always come out stronger!"

He very well knew that she is a strong woman and a fighter,this act of him proved how much he understood her in less span of time.

From where do u get such brilliant ideas girl,this entire tattoo part conveyed so much,their trust on each other and the purity of the bond that they shared was clearly visible in this tattoo part,then the part came where he was curious to know what she got tattooed and she showing him and saying that it meant gratitude in greek.I am speechless,u conveyed the beauty of their relation and equation brilliantly,through this tattoo part.Kudos to you dear,everything was executed perfectly .U planned it well duhling.

Ur statistics are right,there is this helplessness in our judicial system,we frequently hear that,kanoon ki haath bandhe hue hain,escaping of these criminals from the clutches of law proves this.It's all happening because of few corrupted lawyers,who are supporting such criminals,that's why even if the culprits get caught,they are getting bailed easily,where as the actual and only punishment for them is that they should be hanged till death.

We should fulfill our duty as a citizen and fight the battle,it will be tough and long,but we should never give up.Yes,the judicial system has some flaws,but we should fight for justice,that is the only way which helps us to move on completely,even though it takes time,but getting justice gives inner peace and puts an end to the inner struggle going in our hearts.

These lines are screaming love everywhere,such is the feeling or essence of pure love.Kudos to you dearie,for these beautiful lines.

Ur mission is 100% accomplished dear,there is definitely a feel good nature.The title track also added perfection to a rather perfect story.

OMG...i have written an essay,but what to do,ek baar maine commitment kar di toh apne aap ki bhi nahi sunti.😆

Sorry,for the length of the comment,i hope u didn't get bored,But seriously you write so well that i couldn't stop myself from writing everything i felt while reading this,i am totally in love with your works. Once again,i salute you for not only choosing this topic but also doing complete justice to it.

Loads of love and respect.

Priya.

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oh! man seriously India is gone from bad to worst as far as crime against women r concerned.

this is such a hateful reality and our system is also acting as helpless.

u penned this situation very perfectly.

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Originally posted by: adventure_gurl
loved it

Thank You sooo much😳

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beautiful...

touched every cords of my heart...

keep up the good work!!!!!!

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Originally posted by: dixitciaaa
beautiful...
touched every cords of my heart...
keep up the good work!!!!!!

Thank You sooo much!!

You are tooo sweet meri jaan!

Thank You again😳

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Originally posted by: coolishparul
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oh! man seriously India is gone from bad to worst as far as crime against women r concerned.
And it really isn't improving! It's just a disgusting fact!

this is such a hateful reality and our system is also acting as helpless.
System is slightly flawed and hence it is clearly being taken advantage off🤢

u penned this situation very perfectly.

Thank You sooo much for reading and reviewing this rather long part!

Thank Youuu😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

#90

**UNRES**

Well, I guess I am the only late comer!

This Chapter was again written gracefully! The way Sanyukta's bonding grew with Randhir, the way she fought back and the way she amassed was a treat to read! You lived up to my expectations Pari! Each word was beautifully wove in amazing sentences!You overwhelmed me by writing this update!The way you portrayed Randhir's character was again a amazing thing! Sanyukta's fightback was justified! You did a great job Pari!

Love and Respect❤️

Sanju❤️

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