Sandhir TS ~Yeh Hai Aashiqui~ Part 2, Pg 12 - Page 4

Originally posted by: winchesters

Pari...U write amazing!

The descripption, words, everything...

I loved it!

Yes, the subject u chose was a sensitive one- and m proud of u!

Not every one has the guts to write something like that..

Well, sameer is a coward, so nothing good can be expected off this guy...

Waitin to read the nxt part!
Really loved ur writing style! :) XD

Originally posted by: .kiara.

when are you updating 😛

Originally posted by: meenu1613

nyc... update soon

Originally posted by: gujjupari

hehehe! I am going to cheat and not reply in order😆

Tonight hopefully! I feel like writing this while it's still fresh in everyone's minds😆

Originally posted by: mariya.kamran

Reseee

Unres

OK, the topic chosen was a really sensitive one. The flow of emotions, the aftermath, the ring of turmoil that has to be endured by the one, despite the fact that they were not at fault. Most people sympathies, but no one can actually empathise because they can not see the amount of damage that has been done to the victim.

👏👏👏

I should have asked you to write this TS for me! Brit! that was just oh-so-beautiful and amazingly put!!! So much thought went to this comment nah?! Lemme hug you just for that🤗

The physical state is visible but the mental state is tarnished due to that horrible life changing event. One may heal from the physical damage, but mental disturbance follows throughout life.

I.Have.Nothing.More.To.Add!

Sameer leaving her was a good idea because his mentality got disclosed way before marriage. If he'd married her, at some point, he must have reminded her of the heart wrenching incident which would have broken her down completely. She needs someone who will understand her and her needs, who'll be there for her emotional needs, who'll support her no matter what.

It really was needed! The ideal one for her, would have loved her regardless! And I have sooo many stories like such, where marriages break and relationships end! I mean it's downright cheap and intolerable!

@Bold: I.Have.Nothing.More.To.Add!

Paro, hats off to you yaar for writing such over such a delicate issue. Not everybody has the guts to write such an amazingly descriptive piece of emotional turmoil from a victim's point of view. I salute you! The way you've connected each and every word with her almost seems unrealistic, as if we're actually reading something from a real victim's point of view. You're hell of a tremendous writer 👏

Aaaw!!!! I am going to bowl my eyes out!!!! I can't even!!! You are sooo sweeet to me!!!! I can't even deal with this comment! You.Are.Beautiful❤️

Lemme hug you more time🤗

Eagerly waiting for the next shot. Hope she's not in trouble. Continue soon.

Lots of Love

xxx

Originally posted by: .kiara.

yayy I am excited.. randhir's pic in your display is too hot to handle.. ☺️

agar sanyukta ko nahi chahiye toh mujhe chalega 😛

Originally posted by: 123456me

reesseee resseee😆

unress!!!!!

i thought to read it 2mrw morning...

bt couldnt resist myself!!!!!!!

its beautiful...

the way u described the pain...the confrontation,realization...

and the song aawari...

it brought tears to my eyes...

pari ... u r a stunning writer indeed

m damn xcited readnd d precap😆

update b4 i go mad😉

loads of love,shreyasi😳

Originally posted by: sandhirlover15

Hey Pari

I have read your story Winter Chills. And believe me I have become your fan. The way you write and project every emotion is just flawless. It seems all so real. And you proved it yet again in this TS that yes you are one hell of a writer. Writer who makes the forum beautiful and breathtaking. Your innovative thinking makes this story more impressive.

Now coming to the story it kinda confused me at the beginning but then as you have nailed everything so perfectly that I was able to understand everything and love it to the core. Thanks for writing such marvellous works.

Keep writing!!

Originally posted by: 123456me

for this awesome TS👏