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Sorry for commenting so late Pari!!! I had specially taken some time out to comment on the TS only!!!
Pariii!!! What a master piece! I am spell-bound!!!
The TS had a very sensitive issue, but the way you wrote it was stupefying!
You won't believe but I read it 3 times, after that i am commenting now!!!The content was so delicate, that to understand the depth, I had to read it 3 times!!!
The TS expressed subtle issue!!! Sanyukta's heart-wrenching emotions were aesthetically written!!! In this period of time, everyone only sympathies, but no one empathize!!! Why is it so that the Victim has to suffer so much, why is it so that only the victim is questioned and blamed! I hate such narrow-minded people!
Getting raped doesn't devastate the person physically, but also mentally!
Being in a relationship for 3 years, and still saying you are tainted! You are incomplete!What kind of creatures are these?
With whom Samir Mittal shared so much time, with whom he promised to live till eternity, suddenly all these promises and things vanished just because she was physically assaulted by someone!!
Why does virginity plays such a role in these cases?
I was feeling to stab a knife when that Samir asked for the ring!Was his love that feeble!!! There are millions of Samir who leave millions of Sanyukta for such a reason!!!
She had read that the scars obtained after a war should never be hidden from the public eye. These were scars of survival, these were her remainder that she was always capable.I loved these lines!!! I especially hate those girls who confide themselves after such incidents!! What was their fault in all these cases, why should they hide? They didn't did anything wrong for which they need to hide their scars!!! But yes, from victim's POV, wounds will heal, but the scars will always make them remember about those frightful moments!!!
Haaye teri hoon saari ki saari main .. ho .. oo ..
Par tere liye baazari mai...
By including these lyrics you made the TS more thoughtful! I loved the song!!!
Pari I simply loved the update!! after reading such a exquisite TS on such a delicate issue, had made me respect you more!!!
I loved those small things in the TS, like, the way she absorbed the hot water, which was not at all painful as compared to that incident, the way she tried to hide her scars from the world, the way she was getting scar from the world, her uncomfortable feeling in her own body, her breaking down in front of him, giving a fierce answer and then feeling the sharpness of that broken mirror, which depict nothing but her own life!!!!At first I had thought that Sanyukta would take a stupid step with that broken piece of mirror!!!
I endured such small details!!! These all are indeed true from a victim's POV!!!
Moi being more of a social activist loved the TS's concept!!!
Now I have hardly any word left Pari! Keep writing like this and be blessed!!!
And yeah, what was that precap, was that doctor our Randhir?Moi would die imagining him in that attire! Moi looking forward to read the next update!!!
Love and Respect
Sanju :-*😳
Edited by SweetSassy - 11 years ago
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