Sandhir TS ~Yeh Hai Aashiqui~ Part 2, Pg 12 - Page 3

Hey Pari.

Again an amazing piece of work by you dearie.

The topic choosen is a very delicate social issue,but u penned it down perfectly,the emotional turmoil that Sanyukta was going through was clearly visible,each and every word depicted her pain,it was heart-wrenching.Particularly,in these type of cases,the society doesn't blame that animals,they blame the victims,i don't understand the mind-sets of People,they look at the victim with a look that says,as though she is at fault.Such situations boil my blood.Being a girl i can't tolerate such mentality of People,infact no girl can tolerate this.

As time pass by,the physical damage may heal,but the damage it caused internally never heals,the inner suffering remains life-long.It is really hard for the victim to forget about that incident and move on in life,possible to some extent,unless and until she gets the culprits punished,i.e...,death sentence.

The way u started the story with Sanyukta in the washroom,sitting lifelessly under the shower of steaming hot water,the pain that the hot water caused was nothing compared to the pain that she went through during that horrible incident.Her uneasiness,her repeated attempts to scrub away all the marks.U depicted the pain that she is going through in words,it was not an easy task but u did it flawlessly.

In a way,it is good that that Sameer broke off the relationship because,if he can't stand by her side,when she needed him the most,then there is no point in taking the relationship ahead,because relationships depends on trust and Sanyukta trusted him that he will be by her side through every thick and thin,no matter what,but he had broken her trust.It was nice that Sanyukta showed him the door.

She needs the person,who helps her in gaining the lost confidence and helps her to become the strong woman,a person who will support,understand her and stand by her side,no matter what.

"She had read that the scars obtained after a war should never be hidden from the public eye. These were scars of survival, these were her remainder that she was always capable."

Loved this line,hats off to you for writing on such a sensitive issue,which cannot be easily described in words,but u did a fabulous job,each and every word seemed realistic.U are an amazing writer,whose works are beyond perfection and u have the capability to keep the viewers hooked to your works,because of your extra-ordinary writing skills and unique concepts,which directly touch the readers hearts.The two lines from the song fitted perfectly.

Loved the fact,that Sanyukta's moms eyes no more bore sympathy,but concern and infinite amount of love for her daughter,who has the capability to fight against all odds.Her fighter daughter.

Waiting to see how she tries to regain her strength and confidence with the help of the doctor.

Will be eagerly waiting for the next part.

Lots of love.

I LOVED it! I'm sure every girl at somepoint wants to say that to someone that doubts them. That part was beautifully written.

And completely agree about how they portray such cases on tv. They emphasize more on the "unpure" part more than the fact that they are going to have pitiful eyes following them for the rest of their lives or the fact that they lose every ounce of self esteem that they have. Some poor souls even start doubting themselves right?

Yeah you can probably tell that I'm ranting now..hehe!! Can't help it! You was tooo good

And who is this doctor huh? Can't be Randhir cause he went to an engineering college?

But then again Pari, I believe you could do some fixing there? He could be the doctor!!

Randhir in a white doctors coat looking all sorts of handsome ☺️

Anyways!! I think I'm going off topic here!

Update sooonnn!!

Love thy neighbour

Originally posted by: DamselinDistres

res! xD

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the world ,tch tch , i pity them :P😎

(please, no one take it personally, its jjust my warped sense of humor) ! :P

will unress tomorrow xD

Originally posted by: chowanisha

u knw dis ws realy somethng different...

the way u expressed sanyukjta's state ws brilliant...pls update soon...wil b waitng to knw hw she recovers..😊

Originally posted by: sandra22

nice... the doc's gonna be randhir??

love

samyuktha😳