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Posted: 19 years ago
#31
it was great plzzz cont. soon. 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
#32
two months pass by......anjum still hates prem but she likes prerna because she is so sweet......she calls prerna by her name......kripa has started to have feelings for angad...aaliyah is back from the camp.....kkavya wants to make anjum his gf...anjum hardly talks to kkavya........prem and mukti fight but are very similar....mukti likes kkavya...the vacation is over and today is the first day of college....the girls are in the first year and the guys are in the second year..........

kr: oh god mukti jaldi bahar aao mujhe bhi bathroom jaan hai....(there is only one bathroom in the outhouse)
anj: kya hai kripa kitna chilla rahi hai...
kr: tp kya karu...yeh maharani ji bathroomse nikalne ka naam hi nahi lerahi hai...aaj pehela din hai college ka aur yeh hai ki....uff(banging the door) mukti jaldi kar na......

she was about to bang again when mukti opens the door...kripa misses it and falls flat on her face....

m: oops sorry.....
kr(stands up): aaargggg 😡 she walks in the bathroom and slips straight into the bath tub...
m: oops mein batana bhool gayi thi ki floor gila hai sambhaal ke.....
kr: 😡 MUKTI.....

anjum is laughing uncontrollably........kripa is going mad...while mukti dont know how to react.....after an hour they all arrive to the college......it was huge....

kr: hhhmmm....achha hai...
m: ya...
anj(immitating kripa): hhm achha hai...sirf teri wajahse mein yaha ayi hu......warna mujhe to mumbai university jaana tha....uggh😡
m: issmein kya kharabi hai?
anj: kharabi yeh hai ke....I MA NOT INTERESTED IN SINGING...

everyone looks at her....anjum smiles....

anj: mera matlab hai ki i a not interested in snging...aur tujhe pata hai na mujhe ladko se kitni chid hai....to singing mein jyaada tar duets hote hai...aur mei ladko k saath gaana nahi chahti.....
kr: comeon yaar....apni dilmein thodi si interest banale.....phir dekh tujhe yeh singing kitni pasand aati hai...

"anjum di"...they hear a voice....
anj: hey aaliyah..tum campse kab aayi?
alli: bas kal hi...jab meine suna ki aap yahi college padne waale hai to i was so excited.....
anj: well...yeh hai mere dost....kripa aur aaliyah....
kr&m: hi aaliyah...
alli: hi...well anjum di mein abhi chalti hu...
anj: phirse anjum kehna suru kardiya tumne...
alli: sorry......ok bye...lunch mein milte hai...
anj: ok bye.....

they started walkig..they three had their classes in different directions....anjum was walking....she bumped into someone........all her things fall down.....she picked it up....

anj: dekhke nahi chalsakte kya?
s: chal sakta to hu....par aapko dekhkar mein aise khogaya ki kuch dikhayi nahi diya........(he touches her shoulder and she throws it away
anj: ooohhh...muje dekhkar kuch dikhayi nahi diya.....(punches him hard on his stomach) 😃 ab shayad tumhe sab kuch dikhayi de raha ahi.......abhi to sirf pet mein mara hai..... 😡 aayindase mere saath flirt karne ki koshish ki na...to haddi pasli ek kardoongi..samjhe...

she left......everyone thought "kya dangerous ladki haoi yaar".......she again bumped into someone......

anj: oh god aaj..kitne ladko ki shamat aayi hai....hey you...(before she could say anything)
s: i am sorry...woh mein apna class dhoond raha tha...merea dhyan mere schedule par tha to dikhayi nahi diya....
anj: thik hai thik hai......meine bhi aapko nahi dekha....its ok and i am sorry too...
s: its ok....hey aap anjum bajaj hai right?....mr bajaj ki ek lauti beti.....
anj: well thi....par ya mwin hi hu.....
s: wow its my pleasure to meet you ms.bajaj...i am yug....yug mittal.....
anj: hi yug....mein abhi chalti hu.....mujhe class dhoondna hai...
yug: ya sure...mujhe bhi...bye
anj: bye...

sorry guys cant write any more...
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Posted: 19 years ago
#33
hey cooooooooooooooooooooool so yug is also here is ki kami thi warna sab the is ff me well plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon itz awosome 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#34
the college was going on.......anjum was going through a room when she heard her name.......she looked inside and saw prem and kkavya inside.....the door was slightly open...she slowly looked inside and she could hear them talk.......

p: 😆 wow....pehli baar.....phli baar...mr.kkavya nanda koi ladki ko pata nahi paya....pehli baar.....
k: shut up prem...... 😡
p: what?....sach hi to bol raha hu na...meine notice kiya hai...jabse woh meri so-called-sister aayi hai...tu uske aage peeche ghum raha hai..par woh hai jo tujhe ghaas bhi nahi daalti....poor kkavya baby.... 😆
k: tujhe kya lagta hai?......mein chahu to usse yu...apni girl friend bana sakta hu samjha.....
p: oh ya......haah what a joke..meri baat maan...she is dangerous...woh doosri ladkiyo ki tarah nahi hai...... uske baare mein sochan band kar.....
k: no way....tune mujhe challenge kiya hai......kkavya nanda ko....ab dekh ki mein kaise usse pata ta hu....
p: ok to tere paas pura saal hai...usse patane ka....kar sakta hai to kar ke dikha.........
k: of coursse...karoonga......to lagi shart.....

he extends his hand and as prem was about to keep his hand on his hand.......they hear a footstep......and someon clapping.....it was ANJUM (duh-uh)

anj: wow....achha hua tum dono ka yeh roop bhi dekhliya meine......mein to soch ti thi ki tum log.......stupid ho....idiots ho...jo hamesha yeh idiotic harkate karte rehte hai....par jo bhi ho tum log dil ke bahat hi saaf ho......but i was so wrong...tum dono to bahat hi gire hue insaan ho...ek ladki ke upar shart laga rahe the......aur prem tum.....mujhe nahi lagta ke tum prerna ke bete ho....you two are just........forget it...tum dono kya samjhoge..........aainda apni yeh shakal dikhayi na mujhe to yaad rakhna........i am the boxing girl yahi kaha tha na....so be careful now.......and you mr. kaavya nanda...mujhe pataoge huh....tumne abhi mujhe jaana kaha hai...jab mein kissiko apna maanti hu to uskeliye apni jaan dene ke liye tayaar hojati hu...aur jab kissise dushmani karleti hu na....to i can even kill that person....so mujhse bachkar rehna.......

she leavesw from there...she had tears in her eyes.....she was sitting on the bench.....thinking.......when someon put a hand on her shoulder.......she turns back and is shocked to see kkavya......

anj: meine kaha tha na apni yeh shakal mujhe kabhi mat dikhana so what the hell are you doing here?
k: anjum listen to me......
anj: you listen to me mr..kkavya nanda.....dont dare come near me.......
k: anjum---
anj: shut up.....

she turns around to leave but kkavya grabs her hand and makes her turn around......anjum gets really mad and slaps him........kkavya raise his hand to slap her back but....he stops himself......

k: very well ms. anjum bajaj tumne kkavya nandase panga liya hai....ab dekhna mein tumhara jeena haram kardunga....mujhe thappad mara na tumhne...mujhe.......is thappad ka bahat badi sajaa milegi tumhe...yaad rakhna....

they both turn to the different directions and leave.....

later that day......

ok i'll continue nextpart tomorrow....next part wil be anagd and kripa and then prem and mukti and then after that it'll be combined.....i mean it'll go on track again
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Posted: 19 years ago
#35
wowwwwwwwwwwwwww gr8 i just luv anjum's atitude boxing grl gr8 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon if u can 2day plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 19 years ago
#36
omg... anjum aur kavya ka panga!!!! will mukti side with anjum or kavya .. i mean cuz she likes him.. ofcourse she 'll side with anjum!!!

ab kya hoga. i wonder!!
continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
#37
hey changed my mind....it wont be anyone it will be all three of them......

later day.......

the college was over......the three girls are walking outsde the college....

m: so aajka din kaisa raha?
kr: fantastic......it was great....
m: mujhe bhi bahat hi majaa aya.....aur tera din kaisa tha anjum?
anj: worst than you can imagine.......
kr: kyu? waise aaj kitne ladko ko maara tune?
anj: ek ko punch aur doosre ko slap....
m: kisse slap maara......?
anj: usse jispar tu mar miti .... kkavya nanda.....
m: kyuuuuuuuuuuuu?
anj: kya kyu?......maine maara so maara.....
kr: par kyu..?
anj: achha sun....

she tells them everything......

m: i cant believce it...mera kkavya aisa kabhi nahi karega.......
anj: par ussne kiya hai.....
kr: god yeh aaj kalke ladke........uff theya re just disgusting.......
anj: i know.......koi kissise kum nahi hai.....
kr: par ek ladka hai jo aisa bilkul nahi......
anj: ANGAD...
kr(blushed): hmmmmmm
anj)(noticed her blush): oh my god dont tell me...you like him........
m: really?
kr(nodded): hmmmmmmmmm
anj: wowwwwwwwwwww i love it.....yay......

she hugged kripa in excitement.......they reach home....

kr: so anjum tu unse badla kaise legi......?
anj: well i have a secret weapon.....
kr: secretweapon......
anj: hhhmmmm
m: kya hai?
anj: ruko.......

she takes her laptop and connect it with some line(she is a computer genious)...

anj(sighs): i never thought i'll use this.......
m: par yeh hai kya(she touched some lines)
anj: mukti dont touch........tu isse bhi bigardegi....
m: sorry......
kr: achha ab yeh bata yeh kya hai?...
anj: khud hi dekho....

she turns on the laptop and doe something and we can see the three guysin prem's room......

kr: yeh.....
anj: mere kamre mein ek secret kamra hai.......jisme meine camera fit kiya hua hai....ab dekhte hai yeh log kya karte hai........

the girls watch tem through a hidden camera......

prem is lieing on his bed....angad is shirtless...he in lieing on the couch and kkavya is pacing around the room.....

p: kkavya man chilll...
k: shut up prem......
a: yaar ab chhod bhi dena she's a girl yaar.....ladki hai....
k: ladki hai to kya hua.....i am not sparing her...mein usse sabak sikha kar hi rahonga.......
a: ok...tujhe jo karna hai kar..but dont expect me to help you.......
k: kyu?.
a: i cant fight a girl ok....
p: kyu?????.....ladkiya chudel hoti hai ya jadoogar hoti hai....jo tu unse nahi ladta.....
a: nahi par mein nahi ladta means nahi ladta.......
p: ok ok.....chilll....hyper hone ki jaroorat nahi hai.....
k; tum dono chup raho.....mujhe kuch sochna hai.....

back to the girls......

kr: dekha anagd in logo ki madat nahi kar raha hai.....
m: i still cant beleive kkavya sach much aisa kar raha hai.....
anj: hey you two majnu ke lailaas...chup raho......

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Posted: 19 years ago
#38

hey itz gr888888888888888888888888 part hahaha very gud
grls can see dem in deir room wow very nic plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon
and ya wherz iz da surprize huh? u told me u liar 😡

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Edited by jazmeen - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey itz gr888888888888888888888888 part hahaha very gud
grls can see dem in deir room wow very nic plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz con soon
and ya wherz iz da surprize huh? u told me u liar 😡

😆

Edited by jazmeen - 19 years ago
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Posted: 19 years ago
#40
itr was awsome luved it! cont soon 👏 👏

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