FAN FIC updated pg 18 - Page 3

Originally posted by: jazmeen

nic part now itz gonno b intersting right when dey r gonn ofall 4 each other
angand is anjum's friend 😕
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ya in the part before this she dsaid....alliyah's brother was her friend too...that's angad...

continjue soooooooooon.. it was a gr8 part.. yahh i wonder how they know eachother........

well everyone is thinking how angad and anjum know each other...well anjum used to come to india every summer for her vacation so she is alliyah's(angad's siter i have not mentioned)friend....and she knew angad as alliyah's brother...but she never met prem or kkavya...

Great part yaar, i just love it. plzzz cont.soon

a=angad mb=mr. bajaj & nbsp;
anj=anjum pr=prerna
kr=kripa m=mukti
k=kavya p=prem

they all go to anjum's house.....anjum goes inside.....she sees a man sitting at the couch reading a newspaper....

anj: papa

the man lowers the paper and we see its reshab bajaj (of kzk)...he smiles and goes to anjum and hug her.....anjum hesitates but hugs him ....

mb: how are you beta?
anj: i am fine....well mwin apne kamre mein chalti hu
mb: beta tumhara kamra change hogaya hai....(pointing to a room) woh hai tumhara kamra....prem ko tumhara kamra bahat pasand agaya to maine woh usse dediya....

anjum's face were red in anger.....it was like smoke coming out of the ears......she really loved her room....there was the only two places with her mothers memories....outhouse and her room...she was about to say something....

kr: ummm...najum hum chalte hai
anj: what do you mean chalte hai?
kr: matlab....hum abhi hotel mein rahenge aur baadme ko apartment dhood ke reh lenge....
anj: what mere hote hue....mere ghar ke hote hue...you'll stay in a hotel or apartment.....
kr: ummm...
anj: shut up....tujhe yaha rehne mein problem hain na...mujhe bhi hai...to aisa karte hia outhouse hum teeno saath rahenge....
kr: par tera ghar to yeh hai....
anj: yeh mera ghar tha...ab kissi aur ka hogaya hai....waise bhi outhouse mein koi rehta bhi to nahi hai......chal....
mb: par beta....
anj: pls papa....hum outhouse mein rahenge.....

everyone were staring at her......they went to the outhouse......

m: arre yaar...jaldi kholna bahat neend arahi hai...
kr: par humne to unkle se chabi hi nahi maangi...
anj: unke paas keys hoga to hi magenge na.......i have the keys of the outhouse.....yaha sirf mein hi aati hu...aur koi nahi....koi aayega bhi nahi...mein kissiko aane doongi bhi nahi....
kr: ok ab gussa hona band kar aur andar chal....
m: ha yaar i am sleepy...
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k: yaar tune uss ladki ka temper dekha....?
p: ha yaar aisa lag raha tha...jaisekacha chaba jayegi....
k: but man she is hot.....
a: ek baat yaad rakhna....she is really dangerous.....bachpanse usse ladkose chid tha...dont ever mess with her....warna...
k: warna what?......ladka hokar ladki se darta hai....
a: nahi yaar darta nahi hu...opar ha uski ek punch khayega na tab pata chalega.....
p: kyu tune khaya hai?
a: ha i think last summer...nahi usse pehele wala summer par....i was teasing her aur tab hi ek punch khaya tha....abhi tak bahat dard hota hai....
k: wow....
a: hey....tu itna dream mat kar ok.....yaad hai na tere 22 saal ke hone ke baad teri aur aaliyah ki sagayi hogi...tere birthday par....
k(sarcastically): yaar us dinka yaad mat dila.....
p: hey comeon....mr.bajaj mujhe maar dalenge...dekhte hai ki yeh ladkiya kya kar rahi hai....
a: ok
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the girls are unpacking...the door bell rings.....anjum opens the door....its prem....

anj: tum yaha kya karne aaye ho?...mujhse mera ghar aur kamra chhinliya ab mera outhouse bhi chhinne aaye ho?
p: excuse me...meine kuch nahi chhina...meine sirf yeh kaha tha ki your room is beautiful aur mr.bajaj ne mujhe woh kamra dediya....aur mein yaha sirf yeh dekhne aaya tha...ki how are you doing....woh bhi sirf mr. bajaj ke kehne par.....
anj: we ar fine aur pls hamari phikar karne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai......ramu kaka ko bolna ki aaj khana mein banaungi understand.....now get lost...

she banged the door close.....prem was annoyed by her behaviour...

nic part 👏

poor baby kavs gonno get engage 2 alliya😭

a=angad   ; mb=mr.bajaj
kr=kripa &nbs p; m=mukti
anj=anjum k=kkavya
p=prerna &nbs p; pr=prem


it was evening....everyone were sitting in the dining table.....everyone including kripa,mukti,mb, kkavya,...they were talking while anjum was getting everything ready...and was about to serve.......mukti by mistake spilled her coffee over angad so he was in prem's room......anjum comes and serves everybody.....prem was about to sit in the seat next to mb.....but anjum pulls the chair and he falls down....

p: what was tha?
anj: what?????
p: why did you pull the chair?
anj: cuz its muine....you can take anything from me....my house, my room, (eyeing mb) even my dad.....but forget about my chair......
p: ispar tumhara naam likha hai kya?

she pointed at the back of the chair.....it was written(PROPERTY OF ANJUM BAJAJ)..

anj: mera naam likha hai so......dont ever try to get it......

everyone starts eating.....kripa was just about to eat....

mb: ummm...kripa hum sabne khana suru kardiya hai....aap angad ko bulayengi pls....
kr: sure unkle no problem.....

she leaves to call angad....even while eating anjum was treating prem really bad....

anj: prem woh potato pass karna....
mb: beta woh aapka hone wala bhai hai......thikse bartaav kijiye.......
anj: papa pls....
mb: achha bhai na sahi woh aapse bada to hai na....
anj: sirf 1 saal hi to bada hai....
mb: jitna saal bhi ho....bada to hai na....
anj: uuurgghhh.....ok (showing her bateesi) prem can i have the potatoes plssssssss......
mb: beta humne aisa to nahi kaha na.....well usse prem nahi bhaiya kaho....
anj: what?.....bhaiya woh bhi isse.....never....
mb: beta.....
anj: ok can i have the potatoes plssssssss...luv bhaiya....
p: luv bhaiya....?
anj: ya.......prem bhaiya....very old fashioned....luv bhaiya....aajkal ka fashion...
p: mera naam prem hai...luv nahi....
anj: matlb to same hai na....
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meanwhile kripa and angad.....kripa is looking for prem's room....she finally opens a door and finds angad in a towel........she turns around.....

a: kya hua?
kr: darwaza lock nahi karsakte the kya?
a: meri marji.....waise bhi itna sharma kyu rahi ho?
kr: what do you mean?
a: london se aayi ho na...to mujhse bhi kahi nangepunge ladko ko dekha hoga.......ismein sarmane ki kya baat haii....
kr: nange punge?......shut up......london se aayi hu par hu to hindustani na......niche sab khane par tumhara intezaar kar rahe the....isiliye tumhe bulane aayi thi.....
a: ok

kripa was about to leave.....when angad threw the towel to her.....

kr: yeh kya?
a: towel hai....
kr: par yeh to tum...
a: abyhi nahi pehen raha....
kr: what.....?shut up....
a: chaho to peeche mudkar dekh sakte ho.....
kr: ewwww....you are disgusting....i am leaving...

again she was abot to leave......angad caught her hand and turned her around.....he was already dressed up....he smirked.......

a: chalo saath chalte hai....

next day....anjum, kripa and mukti are jogging.....

anj: kripa...tera mu yu gubbaro ki tarah kyu phula hua hai?
kr: kuch nahi....
m: bata na.....
kr: woh actually....kal mamma ka phone aaya tha?
anj 😡 : kya bola unhone.....?
kr: kajol ka birthday hai isiliye mujhe bulaya hai?
anj; tune kya kaha?
kr: kuch nahi...
m: kuch nahi?
kr: hmmmmm
m: par kyu?....
anj: you could have said her you are not coming.....
kr: tujhe pata hai na mein mama ya papa ko na anhi kehsakti....
anj: wow...kripa you are great.......unhe teri birthday kabhi yaad nahi hota.....par apni sauteli beti ke birthday par tujhe buarahi hai.....in 9 saaalo mein kabhi unhone yeh janne ki koshish ki ke tu jinda hai ya nahi...to aaj achanak ku bulaya hai tujhe?.....aur...tu bhi na.....ufff...

anjum jogs fast and sits on a bench.....she feels someones hand on her shoulder...she turns around and she sees a lay.....she was around 35....

l: namaste...
anj: namaste par meine aapko pehchana nahi....
l: well i am prerna....tumhare hone wali maa....
anj(sarcastically): oh to aap hai...my so called mom-to-be....
p; tum aise kyu baat kar rahi ho....?
anj: because i hate you....

she ran away from there crying......she bumped ihto someone.....it was kkavya....

k: hey....anjum....ro kyu rahi ho?
anj(sobbing): kuc nahi....bas..(wipes her tears) mein chalti hu....mujhe der ho rahi hai....

she starts running again.......

k: ajeeb adki hai...well angad ko suit karegi.....dono hi bahat ajeeb hai...

noo but angad!! uuuuu!! dumbo.. itll take time for him to understand1!!!

its gr8 howz its going.. continue soooonn

nic part but kavya duffer wanna anjum wid ANGAND alwayz realised luv afer loose it kavya baby wake up ( hey bole to hosh me aao) hhaaaaaaa 👏
con soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz