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STARRING:

eijaz khan......as

KKAVYA

manoj....as

PREM

iqbal khan..........as

ANGAD

anita......AS

ANJUM

sanjeeda........as

MUKTI

neha........as

KRIPA

........kkavya is the hottest hunk of the college.....prem is the "i am too cool" guy......angad.....everyone loves him...noone ever knows whom he loves...while he is waiting for his miss perfect........these three guys with different personalities are the best of friends....(living in india)

anjum is ....much like mishty of kyph(just her personality).....all she cares about is how to keep the two best freinds happy.... mukti....everyone calls her miss wrong... everything she does goes wrong.... kripa...a girl with big dreams... these three girls are best friends too...(living in london)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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if you guys like it pls...comment....WELL I AM NOT WHO YOU THINK I AM ...this is my first fanfic so will try to make it interesting.......the first part will be up tomorrow.........I AM NOT crazy_princess..AKA SHIKHA........you can say i am anonymous.......thankyou
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PROMO:

we see a girl talking in the phone.....
G: uffo..papa meine kaha na mein nahi aana chahti....
P: par beta hum aapko bahat miss kar rahe hai....
G: but papa meri padhai ka kya hoga?
P: uffo...hamara college bhi oxford universityse thodi na kam hai....apna padhai yahi pura kar lena ok?.
G: par papa...apko to pata hai na meri doston ke baareme...
P: dont worry...humare paas itna pesa to hai hi ki hum ek ki jage teen ticket bijwade....ab jid mat karo aur jaldi se yaha ajao....
G: ok papa bye......

she hangs upp adn turns around and we see its no other than anjum....
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Posted: 18 years ago
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man i want to write my first part.........so here it goes.....

LONDON,
we see a girl running....saving her life....then a man comes in white horse...(typical "sapno ke raajkumar" type) adn saves her....as he was about to open his mask...............kripa jerks up....because of anjum.....

k: anjum tu bhi na...kitna achha sapna tha....
a: achha?... aj bhi wahi raaj kumar ko dekha...?
k: ha.....
a: achha kaun hai?
k: pata nahi....tune dekhne kaha diya?
a: yeh bata ki desi tha ya imported...?
k: kya?
a: uff...desi yani indian.....imported yani bahar ka.....kaun tha?
k: pata nahi....
a: tujhe kuch pata nahi aur phir bhi itni bekaraar hoti hai tu....
k(blushes): tu nahi samjhegi....
a(teasing tone): aye haye....kitna sharmati hai tu.....
k(hitting playfully): chup kar......jaa mukti ko uthale...mein tayaar hoke aati hu.....
a: achha thik hai....

they hear someone shout" aaaahhhhhhhhh"......both of them run to another room......and see mukti in the floor...next to the bed......both of them started laughing........

m: has kya rhe ho...help karo yaar....
a: sorry......

anjum helps her stand........

a: kya hua tha?....tu waha kaise?
m: woh neend mein bed se gir gayi....

kripa starts laughing uncontrolabally........anjum tried her best not to laugh but could not succeed...she joined her as well....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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guys i was going to write more...but.....was confused in the time difference between......india and london so....if someone would kindly let me know....thankyou...
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INDIA,

we see two bikes racing......... they are going.... when one of the bike falls.......the other bike stops and then the guy opens his helmet...its PREM....he comes down of the bike.....

p: meine kaha tha na...mujhse panga mat lena... pachtayega......ab uthja sujit...

the guy stands up....

s: yaar prem......tujhe race mein koi nahi hara sakta...you are the best.....

"kisne kaha ke isse koi nahi hara sakta....i challenge you...mr.prem" everyone turn around and its KKAVYA......

p: i accept your challenge.....
k: kool.....yahase ghar tak.....dekhte hai kaun pehele pohochta hai?
p: ok.....

both race to the house......(btw they are neighbours) prem win.....

p: ab kya khayal hai?
k: maan liya bhai....you are the best.....
p: hey yeh angad kaha hai?
k: woh aur kaha hoga?.....gym...
p: comeon lets go....

they both head towards the gym......we see a man working out.....with big muscles...and hot body....prem and kkavya enter the gym....

k: angad din bhar work out karne ka socha hai kya?

ANGAD looks up.....and we see his face......he smiles...

a: socha to kuch aisa hi hai....
p: yaar is gym ke bahar bhi ek duniya hai...aur us duniya mein college naam ki ek cheez hai......jaha hamein abhi pohonch na hai....'
a: pata hai..
k: to chal na....adhe ghante mein pohochna hai...
a: i dont care yaar....aur tum dono kabse care karne lage....kabhi koi lecture attend to karte nai ho...saara din ladkiyo ke aage peeche ghumte rehte ho....
p: taana marna band kar aur abhi chal....
a: ok......tum dono jao.....bas adha ghanta...i'll be there...
k: aana jaroor...
a: of course...bye
pk: bye

both of tem leave


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Posted: 18 years ago
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great parts!!!!!!!!
luv it.. cant wait till u continue .. when will they continue and will it be luv or hatred at first sight..
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow nice story! wonderful parts! continue soon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice story n nice part
continue soon
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BACK IN LONDON,

anjum was preparing breakfast....kripa enters kitchen...
k: hey anjum...you've got a mail....
a: dikha to.....(sees te envelope) arre papa ka hai...

she opens it and finds three tickets......and there was a letter in it....

Anjum beta,

beta...yeh tickets tumhare liye...jaldise yaha ajao......aur is baaar sirf summer vacation ke liye nahi...balki college padne ke liye aana padega...i want you to study here in mumbai.....agar chaho to mein tumhare dosto ke liye bhi tickets bhej sakta hu......hope to see you soon.....love you ...

papa...

a: WHAT THE HELL......PAPA!!!!
k: kya hua?
a: papa ne mujhe india bulaya hai...
k: so you got there every summer....
a: ya i know but this time...he wants me to study there in mumbai.....
k: WHAT?ytou are not leaving us alone.....
a: ya i know...i will talk to papa.....

anjum grabbed the phone and called her dad......

a: hello...
p: hello anjum beta...
a: papa what the hell was that?.
p: what?
a: papa pls....why did you send the tickets?
p: because i want you to come here....
a: i dont...want to ...
p: par beta....
a: uffo..papa meine kaha na mein nahi aana chahti....
P: par beta hum aapko bahat miss kar rahe hai....
g: but papa meri padhai ka kya hoga?
P: uffo...hamara college bhi oxford universityse thodi na kam hai....apna padhai yahi pura kar lena ok?.
a: par papa...mere dost
P: dont worry...humare paas itna pesa to hai hi ki hum ek ki jage teen ticket bijwade....kripa aur mukti ko bhi saath lana....ab jid mat karo aur jaldi se yaha ajao....
a: ok papa....par agar woh dono nahi maane to?
p: dont worry...unhe mana lo bus...ok now bye......
a: bye....

she hang up....

k: to kya kaha unhone?

(mukti enters)
m: kissne kya kaha?
a: papa chahte hai ki hum sab india jaye.....
k: WHAT?
a: ab chonkhna band kar.....
m: wow....log apni school khatam hone ke baad...london uiversity mein apply karte hai aur hum hai ke waha admission lene ke baad.....india jarahe hai waha padne...
a: yanikee tu ayegi...?
m: of course tum dono ke alawa mein akeli kya karoongi of course i am coming.....
a: thanx(hugs her)..aur tu?
k: but anjum.....i am born here....aur mujhe to achhi tarahse hundi bolni bhi nahi aati....i mean i never actually speak in hindi....
a: dont worry waha ke college mein adhe s jyaada student hindi mein hi fail hote hai.....
k: kyu?
a: arre yaar.....waha bhi sab log kitne mordenise hogaye hai na......
m: waise bh aj kal hindi kaun bolta hai?....sab ti hinglish bolte hai na....
a&k: hinglish....
m: ha.....hindi + english........=hinglish
a: mukti tu bhi na....to kripa what say?
k: oh... thik hai....
a: so you're coming....
k: uuuummmmm of course
Edited by crazy_princess - 18 years ago

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