#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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IronButterfly

@IronButterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#471

Now that's interesting.
The fear of losing him made Khushi react like this.
There is love between them & now it's not long before they confess it.

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kaprasin

@kaprasin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#472

Such a wonderful thrilling update. Waiting for next chapter

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

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Posted: 11 years ago

#473

Taken!

*edited*

Lovely Jen!! Simply superb!! It was like watching a thriller movie! Filled with all the action and drama and a bit if romance and care!!

Beautiful man!!

The care and concern was just oozing out!! Aman I hope you rot in hell and jerk shyam too!!

Aww she's forgiven him! Ainch ainch! Nish nosh!!

Cheers

Edited by TwilightStar_JP - 11 years ago

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Akorshi Oroni

@Akorshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#474

amazing update...

arnav saved him...

but still injured...

aman what happened to him?

khushi was hell worried for arnav...

the day really troubled arnav a lot...

ah the moment is here to confess arnav's disappear ...

khushi already forgave him...

arnav will surely make her forgave justify...

update soon...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#475

That was beautiful update...

Poor Aman, he has a goal, to reach that, he used wrong ways that leads to cost his life...

Kushi thinks that she didnt effected by Arnav, but she knew whats the truth is... their confession was Awwing... Hope Arnav will get the medical help soon...

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zooni

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Posted: 11 years ago

#476

super update

the action was well written...

love how u squeezed in romance too :)

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zainza

@zainza

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Posted: 11 years ago

#477

This doesnt at all look like action written first time...its brilliantly written, I was almost on the edge of my bed reading this...I loved it!

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pmpm1

@pmpm1

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#478

Great update! The action was good but the subtle romance was even better. The 'Yash Chopra' in you made sure that you included romance in the suspense as well! 😆

What happened to Aman though? I am confused about that... Will wait eagerly for the next update...

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Russell

@russelskhushi

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#479

wow...what an action packed update!!! it was so thrilling ... glad Arnav made it to the cottage without being eaten!! i guess the maneater was bussy with Aman!! ... for some season i glad Arnav got shot !!! atleast it bought out what he had in mind all this time (well almost) ... lolz..
awesome update Jenny <3