#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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coderlady

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Posted: 9 years ago

#761

Loved the story. The jungle setting was awesome.

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Posted: 9 years ago

#762

Awesome awesome and awesome! Loved it totally! <3

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VishMaram

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Posted: 9 years ago

#763

A well written collaboration story. The setting takes the cake and all the writers have done a great job to present tranquil vibes and joy that is felt while visiting National Reserve. Arnav and Khushi are lucky to have spotted the herd of elephants and a leopards eating the prey. I have visited a national park but was not fortunate enough to spot the cats but elephants, yes, and it is a beautiful and majestic sight.

This story of second chances had mystery as the underlying theme. Being a short story, I am guessing Khushi's kidnap was not made a suspense because of chapter restrictions.

The character that blew me away was Shyam. A flawed but ethical man. What is even better is he knows he is flawed and he will not hold grudges against Arnav for suspecting him to be the fraud.

The chemistry between the protagonists was crackling. I also enjoyed the subtle comic timing in a couple of chapters. Their love for nature and conservation was what brought them together, reunited them and will keep them together.

Would there be another collaboration in future? I hope so.

Edited by VishMaram - 9 years ago