#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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Arjuhisis

@Arjuhisis

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Posted: 11 years ago

#151

"lived up to the expectations" - oh ana, it was much much more dear -

the update was damn exciting and interesting

I was grinning throughout the first half of the update - the library sequences were damn cute - the tit for tat dialogues was very humorous and damn cute - loved it until shyam came and spoilt the show by joining them in their tea and pakore date - cha, that was tooo bad of him - if not for him, ARHI would have reached new heights, I guess - hmmm, a huge sigh

felt bad for arnav, on reading the second half - I know there is a lot of mystery in there -

will wait to read more

ana, you rocked as usual - very very interesting update dear

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RainyDays

@RainyDays

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Posted: 11 years ago

#152

Lovely chapter !

We saw a lot of emotions spread throughout the chapter - ranging from the flirty and free flowing conversation of the beginning to the distant one in the end .

Enjoyed how the chapter started with all the Arnav-Khushi banter which was fun filled and enjoyable . They had a calm and tension-free aura surrounding themselves before it was broken by the entry of the two bosses ...

I justify Khushi's act to question Arnav , though I would have liked a milder version of what actually happened , but lets see what the events turn out to be. Though I feel sorry for Arnav for he was not in the least expecting a Khushi who did not trust him such a matter.. She did what she did to be sure of the fact that what she was thinking was absolutely wrong and absurd.

Eagerly waiting to see how the amazing bunch of super six presents the next chapter ! 😊

P.S.: Loved the length of the chapter !

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mpuhan

@mpuhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#153

as if dealing with a controlling father, thugs in his workplace and a broken heart weren't enough, Arnav has to deal with a lunatic of an ex-flame who thinks she can make him feel all guility and refuse his wanting to come closer BUT has a right to point finger at his loyalty. Doesn't she have too much work to do herself? Why would she want to poke her nose into something she definitely should not?
She still loves him and her heart is breaking to even think Arnav would be involved with the gang. But what she did was absolutely wrong! I hope Arnav tries to put himself in her shoes for a while and forgives her nosiness.

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Rayolight

@Rayolight

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#154

Loved the last two chapters! The story flow is perfect! As usual. The past...and now even the present is sooo intriguing...I almost feel like screaming "What's going on" - heheh.

When you guys write about the forest...I can actually visualize the green...the lovely monsoon...the taalll trees...it's really amazing...

Can't wait for the next!! Please guys update soon! ;)

Cheers!

Rayolight

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 11 years ago

#155

so khushi didn't meant it but her words implied that arnav is guilty ..what will arnav do now

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anu1017

@anu1017

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#156

Awesome update A!!! Loved it 👏Cannot wait for the next update!!!!

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IPK007

@IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#157

Amazing chapter, Ana👏

Really enjoyed reading it :)

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mpat

@mpat

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Posted: 11 years ago

#158

Nice update! 😊

The sarcasms by both and the comebacks were cute. Lollipop comment and Khushi's shove...go girl!!

The Tea and Onion pakore date cute again, but that was short lived. 😔

Questions, resistance, uncertainties, doubts along with wants and desires gotta wear one down.

I am glad Khushi took the initiative to talk to Arnav, but it didn't go down as expected.

Arnav is angry at her insinuation and I don't blame him.

Khushi got her wish for the tour, but not with Arnav, is she suspicious again or sad?

Teak smuggling and culprits...who and how...will wait for the answers as the saga continues.

Nice continuation!!

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@flowers4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#159

awesome update , arnav must have felt horrible ...continue soon...

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#160

Awesome update Loved it :)
Thanks for the pm

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