#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#131

Here I am !!! 👍🏼

Sorry for the ramanchi !! I read the update last nite but was too sleepy to comment !!!

Khushi bitiya has lost it !!! She has irritated and instigated him to the level that he has started avoiding her rather looks like has given up on her ... Arnav is hurt because of her distrust that she is showing him over and over... His action is justified.

Baawali Khushi is a confused mess !! usse raha bhi na jaye aur saha bhi na jaaye !!! Either she is found getting irritated at him by remembering the past or waiting for him to get a glance when he is away !! Upar se shak ke keede ne kaat kat mamla kharab kar rakha hain ...

Koi na... I know soon things will fall in place.. Till then Rabba ve...

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rk2127

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Posted: 11 years ago

#132

Res

Edited.

Sorry for editing now, I just got the time to finish reading it.

Ana you rock the update. The emotions In this update were running so high, for khuhsi and Arnav both.

I guess what happen all those years ago, he knew he would be the last contender who Khushi would trust with her heart after the way he broke it for her but now when the realization dawned on him that she is even doubting her for the illegal activities in the Corbett, it must have broke his heart and any hope of getting her back in his life.

But I would not blame Khushi completely for this, he has been acting out of character and all those people around her telling her thing about Arnav which mismatched to what he should be doing. Well now I really doubt Shyam and Aman's intention. Could be they both are in it together that's why Arnav is hiding things from them and doing his investigation without involving anyone.

But what created a bigger problem was her unintentional doubts casted on him through her questions and him distancing himself from her like he did all those years ago, instead of making an effort in trying to clarify her doubts.

I loved their friendly and playful talk in library, Khushi is playing 'little detective' to the 'asshole' jerk who is trying to lure her on a 'pakora date' with a tea under the shade with light drizzle outside, a perfect romantic setting.

But he acted a jerk again a typical men who stereo type girls/women. What's with that lollipop comment?

Khushi did good with that push on his chest, he TRUELY deserved that at that moment. Though not that Aman comment which she so intentionally delivered to hurt him.

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ssyahoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#133

Ana, you already know that I thought the chapter was fabulous !! I loved flirty Arnav and who can say no to onion pakore? Err unless one is hoping to be missing of course 😉
Loving Arnav's efforts here and Khushi's inner turmoil.

You whipped out this awesome chapter in a few days , kudos to you ! Can't wait to Anu's chapter.

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Afsha Ismail

@Chamkili06

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Posted: 11 years ago

#134

Ohhh..khushi shudnt hv done this..i knw wt arnav did was wrng..bt comr on she knws him enuf to fall in love..bt nt trust him ? Kind off feel that arnav did it right to nt go..!![I][/I]

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-silentbang-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#135

arnav is badly hurt and khusi is guilty..

who is culprit??

I guess shyam . I m eagerly waiting for this mystery to be solved ASAP

Nice update

Continue soon

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Russell

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Posted: 11 years ago

#136

i loved the part when khushi questioned him and saw his face and immediately understood she did a mistake...
finally khushi bought out all that she had in her head... Arnav is hurt to see that she dosent trust him...but can he really blame her for that... it was his deeds that made her think that way.. when he very clearly knows khushi is a smart girl to smell something fishy ...
love the update...
thanks for the pm dear :)

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Aaradhaya1688

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Posted: 11 years ago

#137

it was superb
loved how khushi answered him back
but she did hurt him and now he is going to go all cold shoulder on her

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crazy-ash

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Posted: 11 years ago

#138

I like the way it's going!! Great job!
Can't wait to read more and more and more of this unique story!

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vibha92

@vibha92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#139

awesome parts...

d way arshi's dayout started n d way it progressed was awesome!!...bt d way it ended!!...:(

i m so nt lyking dis shyam!!...

aww...arnav is deeply hurt!!...

bt i dnt blame khushi either!!...poor grl was do cnfused n frustrated!!...n at d same time , she didnt want arnav to b involved in all that stuff!!...

i so wish dey wl clear out things soon!!...

update soon...