#2 Arshi SS: The Last Place On Earth Ch 11 pg100 7/22 *Completed*

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Varsha Dutt

@varsha2KD

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Posted: 11 years ago

#161

Amazing update...

So exactly which section can we find these books??? 😆

Khushi confronted Arnav but he didn't answer her... Arnav is hiding something but its for everyone's betterment... hope Khushi understands that soon...

Loved the update 😃

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Archna

@archnahardik123

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#162

Brilliant chapter.

Loved their tea time talks and their little fight. The start was so comfortable and cosy but with Shyam in picture it got ruined.

Why Shyam wants them to go to teak woods and he specially wants arnav to take them? Is he wants both of them get distracted from certain work might take place in here or he just want arnav to go away from there.

Khushi is again doing that but glad that this time she wants to talk. With him straight rather then asking from some one else.

Clearly arnav wants to protect her and may be that's why he is keeping distance from her.

But looks like it's getting hard for her to stay away from him. Loved how worried she is for him and went to him for truth. But poor boy. Got hurt in this process.

Now he is away and she is going away without him. Hope he could make it later. And they patch up soon.

It was very interesting update by you and you did such a fantastic job, I got stick to it. You are a great writer.

Loved it.

Thanks for updating

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bellacoolio

@bellacoolio

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#163

Lovely update! Eagerly waiting for the next part..

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akankha

@akankha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#164

Fabulous update Ananya!
Loved it. :)

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Crazy4Sobti

@Crazy4Sobti

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#165

Updated comment for chapter 6 here!! Sami, sorry for the delay.😃

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#166

Sorry about a short comment, but I loved both chapters! Sami & Ana you guys did a terrific job... Feel Khushi's frustration at Arnav's cagey behavior, hopefully he will be able share with her soon... Khushi just needs to have patience & trust Arnav more... Poor Arnav is now hurt, hope we get to see Khushi make-up to Arnav for a change, he was a perfect gentleman with her taking her out to the lovely waterfalls...

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Kiruthika

@-Keerthi-

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#167

Oh no oh no.. This can't be happening..

Arnav wat r u hiding? Khushi shouldn't have acted like tat.. So sad everything turnsout like this..

Anyways as usual interesting update..

I miss ur humour though..

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vgedin

@vgedin

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#168

I always enjoy the little witty tit-bits you always have in your writing 😊 How to be a cute little detective was a cracker! Little Miss Detective hit a huge 'Miss' on her very first attempt :P

About A & K. Sigh. They both keep see-saw-ing from angry/attracted to sorry all the time. I think its time they just kissed and kept kissing :P

Information is power. I'm sure Arnav knows that. But its also dangerous, and I'm guessing thats why he is keeping it from Khushi. Its getting more interesting with each update. Waiting for you guys to unfold the rest of the mystery :)

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shree10

@shree10

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Posted: 11 years ago

#169

Chap 6-

Sami , You GQ only you cud bring those double meaning references! 😆
Even I had my eyes poppe dout at this-
"Virgins are quite unique, don't you think?" Arnav proclaimed nonchalantly
I mean they still have unresolved issues and instead of trying to touch upon that this guy opens like this?? Unbelievable!! I could imagine naughty glint on his face!
and I was 😆 at this-
"I just thought you would like my opinion on virgins" Arnav proclaimed cleverly.

I mean really??
With this first half I almost though we are headed for some light moments or some start of communication between them but you took it mystery!
Now even I was as sceptical as Khushi.But somehow I know Arnav is not invloved in smuggling but can totally understand Khushi's worry, fear and the battle bet her heart and mind!
Why is Arnv being secretive? Does he suspect Aman and Shyam?

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Ishque

@Ishque

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#170

Loved the update never expected it would be this soon. But my heart actually went out to khushi when she comes the middle of the night to see some one there and Arnav in his least bit. But this chapter out of all had lot more story to it.lot happened in this episode.

If khushi does not trust Arnav its all his fault. And he cannot blame khushi for it.

I loved it and thank you for the PM :)