Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 94

*sigh*

i'm highly disappointed, certainly not with you, nor with the end of story
ITS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT AND DAMN REALISTIC TO BE QUESTIONED
but i'm disappointed with fate
why does it have to play with the lives of such beautiful people
but then, its the fire that makes gold glitter, so i know both arnav n khushi will grow stronger that ever before in TVK

but still the separation track is always heart wrenching
n your "kaun khushi?" just left me speechless
throughout last night i could not sleep, thinking what next? n why they r suffering
its easier to advice someone to move on, but to actually do it, thats almost impossible
especially when its your soul-mate who asks \u to forget them n move on

i have been associated as a volunteer with a organization trying to empower victimized women in recent times
n their stories have been so horrifying n painful, its tough to believe that such animalistic people exist who take pleasure in torturing women physically n mentally
n listening to all their life stories have been really helpful in understanding why khushi did whatever she did

this has been a masterpiece...excellent👏

This story has been an amazing which truly touched my heart! Wonderful! Loved it.. Eagerly waiting for part 2 :) Please pm me when u start with phase 2 of the story. I am sending u a buddy request :)

Dear missing TVK1a lot already. Cant believe it ended.reallying u r an awesome story teller. Waiting for TVK2 to happen. Kyonki ab apka intezaar karna aadat to pad chuke hai. Hope to continue with u with more stories dear. Hatts off to u and to ur writing. We always love u. 👏 😊

Awesome update...

First I apologize, in advance, for such a big comment...

Do not expect life to be perfect all time, life is not perfect; just try to make it best , what you get in.

Dii... I am speechless to say about you... my words are never perfect, but the one, I am writing about is the perfectionist of life who taught us, what life is all about???

Dii ... every word u write shows that u see the real perspectives than the reel one ... and make the realistic things to touch the hearts emotionally than making them dream the fairytale that can just make them happy for a period but exist only of its dot.

dii... can some words justify the person you are... I guess no such words exist that can completely describe the person you are...u

Today... I dropped myself in tears , for the life I have lived with you in form of TVK and where it ended on a note to be back with more of happiness, if not, I would have lost more. It was your words that gave me a hope that ... more for us is waiting on a new way with the same destination of love and same folks walking with us. I believe all, who once joined this journey will be a part of every step and every path u will create for us to walk on...

I am technical person when m professional, in real and personal life I am totally an emotional fool and the thing rule me is emotions that can never let me be what others say as sensible person. Today my all emotions turned out in forms of millions tears and mourning , not for the end that came, but for the reasons of longingness that now I am going to suffer from...

I am again in place, where I was left on 30^th nov. 2012.

How strange it is that the story started in spring with new seeds taking root to grow, with melting the snow to get the rain flow, with floods of emotions everywhere and people coming together from places to get together to give a new warmth, seeing off the coldness in relations...

And here it ends, in summer, increasing the temperature of souls to their hottest, causing drought around, with happiness for few and for some spiked heat and fires in hearts...

But with a promise to return the autumn with a cool temperature preparing lives for blowing the new flowers of love and happiness...

Thanku dii.. for this wonderful , out of world story ... Waiting for these days to pass soon and we see a new autumn ... in form of TVK-2

If u see a happy ending then it's a fairytale that u are dreaming , because life in real never has an end to give u eternal happiness...

Dii for you:

Bankar jo haqiqat aye jo saamne kabhe bus ho wo chehra aapka he

Hai nahe armaan koi jo bus aapka saath milta rahe mujhe yu he

Raasto pe jo mei chalu kabhe ho wo har raasta aapka he

Dee hai naye umeed jeene ki aur naye umang bhe mile aapse he

Ban paaye hai hum gar kis kaabil hai ye ehsaan aapka he

Dikhaya jo savera naya andhero mei ho wo mashaal aap he

Chalte the ladkhadakar mila aapka sahara hume jo kabhe

Hue manzil aasan aapke ane se jo bhatak jate the hum kahe

Kaise waqt se hum badalne ko majboor ho gaye

The hum kamjoor aapse milkar insaan ho gaye

The nahe fikar zamane ki na the soch kise ke jasbaat ki

Jhukar aapke saath uthaye jo hue parwah kise ke dard ki

Saath aapka bus mere ab saath rahe jo chau mei koi naye raah pe

Milta rahe bus saaya aapka har kadam pe jo andhero mei darr lage

Hai abhe safar lamba bahut karne ko paar hai raaste kaye

Bus saath hamesha aap rehna jab tak chale saanse mere...

I cried for hours ... same as the day I lost someone special in my life who was my idol... and today again my tears cry the same pain... dii wat have you done with me... dii.. it was really a wonderful journey of tvk that u have created and invited us to walk our steps ...

Dii, in present or future if you ever decide to publish it, please remember to inform me ... I would love to grab its first copy from the book seller...

Now about the update:

It was one of the crucial , intense and very painful update... dii... Just say me U didn't cry... as I can bet on life that every heart that read or wrote this must have felt a pain that is still unnamable for me and many like me must have cried...a lot lot more than worst.

Some words of my friends life:

I still try to forget the past, the day I was harmed not brutally, but my soul was ruined completely, I still seek happiness, and see, I am happy in everyday I wake up, but the day still keep remembering me, not the day is same as it was in the past.

Dii, I would start with Nani, her character was so well written that she was like a pillar contributed in the journey of TVk as equally as every character, if TVK was about Arshi then nani was also one whom I miss a lot, she was a mom to Arnav who gave her selfless and eternal love to an orphan and after knowing about Arnav being the murderer of Adi... she still believed him and love him the same... She was also like a mom to Khushi, I liked reading when she always held Khushi close to her and comfort her with her talks and I like her banters and her ways to give smiles on faces... love u dii..for adding the character of nani in this fiction.

I would love to read her again in TVK-2...

Now about Anjali, I from beginning never disliked her character but with time I started liking it more nd more ... yaa at a point her character was on line where she can be misjudged , but as I read my author and my own believe was that she is the best sis, yaa she must in childhood did some mistake but as a child she didn't knew the consequences that may follow in future and it was genuine as every child fill lost when they are asked to share love with someone suddenly dropped in their lives and she had no one to tell her the way she must behave... but I appreciate that she bonded so well with Arnav forgetting all their past and evn started sharing a special emotion with him... and her role in the last chap was most appreciating... dii ... thanku for giving this relation in life of Arnav... I hope she now act a strong pillar in Arnav's life.

I hope in TVK-2 , she is married to Aman and have kids...

Now about Bhuaji, her character like other is so well written, I appreciate that she never differentiated between khushi and Payal. She always stood by Khushi when she needed and evn when she never said... she was a mother that Khushi lost the day she left her home for her good... And I will feel good , if she is there for her ,when Khushi need her in her life alone to handle the little one...

Thanku dii for Giving this support in Khushi's life.. hope she is there forKhushi in her later life where she need more of her support.

Now about Aman, dii... in beginning itself his character influenced and attaracted me... I read the strong Aman I could ever read... his character was so strong and his shoulder and hand was always there for Arnav when he needed and when he never asked... he was like a backup for him. I dunno but yaa he was also something in the ASR... dii thanku for this character of Aman... TVK is also something added by character of Aman in it..

I hope in TVK-2 also we can read Aman... a lot and a supporting pillar for Arnav like always.

Now about Khushi... Dii... I can never say what I feel for her character, how much I say is always less for her character... dii I thank you for every breathe , for the character of Khushi you have written.. this was the best of my life to read Khushi. Her character is an inspiration for many lives , how to live life in most stronger way... dii, no one is born stronger, the haps and mishaps in life make the best and stronger of urself to come out, but very few have that in them to be strong, Khushi is one of them... she was strong before she meet Arnav but after meeting him she became more stronger, that is the reason I think she took such a big step to accept the little one whom she for a weak moment thought of rejecting evn to give a life.. but I know she would have never done so ... .. Her life went through a lot and I appreciate that she fought back well and came out as a strong person... but I will also say that it must have not been possible if Arnav was not there in her life.

Khushi , I am now more proud of her character, she took a step that is not easy for one to take, to accept the one who can always remind you of ur cruel past... but I loved that she accepted the child.. m happy for the kid... I thought it to be pari... but if its boy then also I am happy... and I wish that he is not second Adi, but second Arnav , who love his family , his siblings rahul, Ashu, My pari(hope if not this time , then may be later in TVK 2) and Last but not the least Arnav , a father, reason for his acceptance on this earth and by the the mother who choose him for the one, she will love all her life. I haven't included Khushi in it as I know she will be the life of the baby's breathe he is taking so he will love her the most.

I will appreciate , if Khushi make the child all of Arnav in him... A reflection of Arnav.

I hate to see the pride that shines in your eyes, vanish away when you think of me. I want you to be proud of me. Thats the only expectation I have from life.

Khushi, never I thought that she will take a step , so bold, of leaving him, for the one her husband want to get a life much better than what he had...and along with Arnav , m too proud of her that she choose the right for the child, I accept that it may not be possible for her to accept the child , till Arnav was there with her, but when she will be away from him, she may accept the child with time and may bond stronger,

Sometime you need to leave back your weakness to receive the stronger , someone expect from you.

Dii, I have a lot lot lot and lot to say about Khushi , as her character cannot be judged or be expressed in few words...

its just impossible to heal a woman in few chapters unless she is ready to take that next step.

So, true dii, its not possible to heal the pains of a women who have seen hell in her life and when reached heaven , she need to forbid herself ... She is stronger but when she face Arnav , she is a weak one who cannot handle the coming way, but I am proud that she did the right and yes dii, it will take her time to overcome the past not completely but she can start leaving a life accepting the fate with seeking new happiness in life.

I never knew a man who would rile me up to hell, one day would pour all his blood to bring the heavens to my feet. I wish I knew!

These words made me realize the love , true eternal love, she feel for him and the love he has poured for her... I cannot express but these words gave some feeling in my heart of some different kind.

Dii, the letter Khushi wrote , was so poured in love, pride and pain... Love for her man who gave up everything for her, pride that she is the lady who get a chance to share his life and pain that they have to get separated because of the immense love they share for one another.

Dii, literally , I cried like a lost soul in universe, as I read every word... it was toughest to read... how u managed to write it... I hat off you for the efforts u maust have put to pen these painful words...

Grief starts to become indulgent, and it doesn't serve anyone, and it's painful. But if you transform it into remembrance, then you're magnifying the person you lost and also giving something of that person to other people, so they can experience something of that person.

Patti Smith

Tha nahe kabhe aitbaar ke ishq mera bhe lega saans kabhe

Socha na tha yakeen hoga aisa jo chaahuge tujhe kabhe

Jaise jaise saath tere in raaho pe mein chalne lage

Chantne lage dhoondh jo dil pe mere jame the

Na karte the aitbaar na rakhe koi kise se umeed the

Tujhse milkar mile umeede hua bus tujhpar aitbaar bhe

Aya waqt ab chukka doon mei bhe kuch pyar mein tere abhe

Apna loon ushe jo keh gaye tere aankhein mujhse kabhe

Hue juda gar raastein humare in raaho mein jo abhe

Milege manzil par jo dekhe hain milkar humne saath kabhe...

Now about the man, Arnav , dii.. I always loved arnav for many reasons... but with TVK ... I respect, I am proud , I float for him evry time I take his name...

Dii, its sad that there exist so less of kind what I read in arnav, if there is someone like him, then the lady is the luckiest to get a man like him... and the family is blessed to get a son like him.

Dii, I cried worst with every word I read , where it was about Arnav, from Arnav, to Arnav... Dii I can never explain what I feel for him, similarly like khushi , these are the dream characters...that walkd silently in my life and gave me much more than expected... and taught me the meaning of life... the credit goes to U...

Seeing you in my dreams in any condition is much better than sharing my life with a person , other than you.

Dii, Arnav ,as I read about him in last part , I lost the last I was holding in myself... Dii, he deserved all happiness.. and I hope in TVK-2 he get all the love he didn't get in this season ...

Dii, he was a Valiant Knight for Khushi, he saved her from breaking down, evn she lost herself , but still now she again started with a new phase in her life and I will say it ws all possible also because of Arnav... but healing the wounds of body are easier than healing the one on soul, it can be healed only with time, but I respect, feel proud and love that he took every step for her to get her back in life... And hope time heal the wounds of their life ...

Arnav was also a valiant Knight for the newborn, dii he gave the strength to Khushi to give birth to the child , he saved a innocent soul. He is the reason that Khushi choose to give a best life to the kid... And I feel proud of him for this... dii it was the best best and best of Arnav... his character reached greater heights in my eye...

Dii, I can no say more about him, coz... its always less , how much I write about him, his character cannot be explained in some words... it may need a life tym to write about him... and I am happy tht u wrote his character so well, that we need more and more words to describe him... but no word seems to justify what he is... I guess he is turning to my weakness...

Thaak gaya hoon Nani...

This words meant more than what it sound... And these burnt my heart, dropped my beats, I feel , I too lost the zeal along with him of living... this words prick me day and night ... and now wen I return home after a hectic day... I stopped saying , I am tired, as more than tiredness, it sounds the last breathe m taking... and I start feeling pain than tiredness in me...

Dii, Arnav's character is best of all in TVK , he is a man who can be an Idol to all men, that what a real man is, how you written about him is... just outstanding, fabulous, tremendous... magnificent...

Some say its painful to wait someone. Some say its painful to forget someone. But the worst pain comes when you don't know whether to wait or forget.

And I am in wait for you to bring the season -2 ...

Dii... every word of his last update was like heart is pricked with pointed nails, from Khushi's outburst to the way Arnav and Khushi cried in Nani's embrace... hoe bhua blamed arnav(this hurted me the most), Khuhsi sharing some moments with Arnav before her departure... Arnav all broken in this update was the worst I could even expect for my enemies... I never wish someone should go through the pain he has been through... this was the hardest and painful update of all times in journey of TVK...

Kaun Khuhsi??

These words were like , I lost the hope I was holding till now... it pricked more with the feel it was said...

Every word in this update , that Arnav said and felt , broke my heart in shrads , the time I read them..

I cried, the past night, but am better with the thought:

"Don't cry because it's over, smile because it happened."
Dr. Seuss

Darbadar ki khakar thokar mile mujhe ye jindagi the
Maankar khaya har din kabhe jo lagte bhook the
Milta sab hai ab bina maange nahe rahe jab wo bhook bhe
Tha nahe apna koi har raat jo bus sote saath tanhai the
jo dekhu ab pass mere hai har koi bs wo neend aanko mein nahe
Le har saans bus auro ki khatir jab tak tum na aye the
Jeena jab chaaha jo khud ke khatir saath ab tum nahe the
Andhre raato mei julaste the khwab mere jo ojhal hota din kabhe
Tere baaho mei sukoon mila dekha maine ek hasee khwab bhe
Dard saath tere se dekh liye jo diye kise ne kabhe
Ab khushi bhe nahe ate hotho pe jo muskuraane ko saath tu nahe
Dabe the har dard har jasbaat kone mei jo na aye tum the
Har kona hai ab tanha bhare jaha tumne aakar khusiyaan the
Pathar bhe aage pighal jata tha itna mein mazboot kabhe
Ab tuta hu is kadar beh naa jau paani sa kahe
Uthakar har takleef chalta raha thake na kabhe ye jindagi the
Jaane se tere thak gaya hoon nahe umeed ab jeene ki...
pass hamesha wo dil tera he rahega jo dhadakta hai ab bhe
Hai tu kahe is jaha mei jee raha hu is umeed se he
Hain nahe ye jaha tna bada jo na mile tu kabhe
Hai bus khamoosh aawaz mere dil dhoondega tujhe ab har kahe...

Kame tere jaane se rahege jindagi mei mere
Par har guroor khud par jo chaaha tujhe kabhe
Maana hue hai door tu mujhse abhe
Par hu khush apnaaya tune jo mere tujhse umeed the
Hai aaj saath nahe par daur wo bhe ayega
Aaj tere saath hai nanhe jaan kal mera saath bhe saath ayega...

Thanku dii.. for your wonderful words about me , I would say it in other way, what have I done to get you in my life... bless you, I wish you get all happiness, love and joy in ur life...

Please bear my extremely free flying thoughts...

P.S. I apologize for words, if any, that may have hurt you in my comments... i didnt choose to write it intensionally , it was just my stupid mind that went wrong some time...

Phase one was an amazing journey, cannot wait til phase 2

Originally posted by: pakpearl

I was literally crying while reading the last part of 44 B...

But then I was shocked to death when I came to know it was the end...

The I got relieved to know tht it was the end of phase 1...

I thought...ok...will have to wait for a month or two...

Lo...

u'll be updating soon...

I can't be more happy,Sweetheart...😊😛😃

This was one amazing true to life story, written beautifully. Bringing out all the emotions, tribulations and other day to day happenings in the society.