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greshu

@greshu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#911

frankly speaking iam very disappointed with the sad end, alas u r a very good writer, hope u will come soon...with a new blast...ff...

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Arshi diwanee

@Panther007

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Posted: 11 years ago

#912

Such an painful nd heartwreching ending...😭😭

so khushi left him as it was not easy for her to see her man suffering like this...Bt wht was arnav's fault in this..He wanted to give their relationship a chance...Bt it was also not easy for a woman who was victim of such a mishap...so she left him for his good...

Waiting for its season two with less rona dhona..continue soon di.

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sweetydoll32

@sweetydoll32

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Posted: 11 years ago

#913

Superb update dear... As per situation this is the perfect ending... Waiting eagerly for for vk2 plz update soon

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yoga123

@yoga123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#914

Perfect ending...I can understand what khushi must be going through...I feel sorry for all those ladies who have gone through such tough times...I was eagerly waiting how you are going to conclude this story...I did not want the kid to be abandoned...that will be out of character of Arnav and khushi...I liked the way khushi has opened up about the father of the baby...it was for the good of arnav, the child and his family...Arnav would not have opened his mouth and would have suffered through out his life with the way the comparisions being drawn between the kid and him...khushi has helped him... it will take time for khushi to come to terms with the sudden information of what has happened to her... kudos to you for taking up such a sensitive subject and you have delt with it really well... the ending was perfect... would love to read Season II...thanks for the PM

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littlemissstar

@littlemissstar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#915

I have no words...I m shocked that its an end to this jouney...bt it give birth to new journey which will begin soon..soo firstly waiting fr that..

Dii this jouney has been incredible..a roller coaster ride of emotions...this beautiful piece of work is an eye opener..that life is and has never been a bed of roses for anybody..certains things in life r just decided by fate ..i never thought that this arnav khushi bond will become like this..where both wanting to b together n want nothing but a happiness but fate had some other plans..

The way arnav convinced khushi abt the child..the way he was smiling went people said that child looks like him..u need all the courage in the world to accept that with a smile..

The pain khushi n arnav feeling at that time..i cannot imagine..

Arnav came in term of accepting the child because he just wanted khushi to happy..bt khushi couldn't see him like this suffering..the entire family came to know the truth...

Wen khushi said adrash I had goose bumps...

Their last conversation..arnav giving her all the assurance that he is with her n they will b okay was painful..she wore the black saree ..bringing the best memory of their life..i think khushi knew this was coming soo this was the last memory she wanted to take it her..

The taveez tying was too painful..the coffee..arnav complimenting her..she thinking wht an irony..bt she was going take the compliment n cherish it as a memory..

Arnav sensing it that somethings wrong..it must b heart breaking fr khushi while tying the magalsutra..

I had tears in my eyes seeing them soo helpless where nothing could b done to make their life a little better..

Wen arnav returned to only to find khushi gone with the letter..

Dii the letter ..i m speechless..the way every word n every emotion is shown in the letter was simply amazing..frm the first word till last ..i felt breathless..i couldn't imagine the words flowing could give soo much pain..

The words thak gaya hu n kaun khushi were too painful.

Dii I knw that there is no way khushi could come in terms with the truth,the child with arnav being with her..

Iits difficult to heal those scars which r imprinted on her soul ..i m not able to decide if it was right of khushi to leave..would arnav live peacefully without her being by her side..would it b possible to for her to live like this without him ..for that I m waiting for the second phase..cause my thinking process has frozen..n I trust u completely with the this..

Dii thank u soo much special mention..i have been there for all ur three stories ..n all have been simply superb..u r an amazing person..i admire the way you put your thoughts in the stories with soo much ease..every story of urs has something beautiful hidden that we need to take..i cant get enough of that..every update of urs tell me something abt life and simply puts a smile on my face..

Hats off to u dii to put up the valiant knight...the courage to imagine n put up the thought s n mirroring the lives of arnav n khushi to this extent is amazing...god bless u dii fr writng such wonderful piece of work..now I m waiting fr the second phase desperately cause I know u r going to bring a smile on my face..soo waiting..loads of love n hugs

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prameelamenon

@prameelamenon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#916

I think that was a perfect ending to the story.
thank you soo much for giving us this wonderful journey

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#917

can i say that this came as a shock to me! because truly i was not expecting it to end here but thank goodness for ur note at the end saying that u will be back with a phase 2 because i somewhere feel that their story has been left incomplete and they were not given the closure that they needed! i loved ur realistic views about arnav, khushi and the baby.

its true that the baby in an innocent soul that needs to be cherished and loved as every child deserves on this earth but seeing him everyday i think will no doubt remind arnav that this angel should have been created by him and khushi out of love and not through a slaughtering of an innocent soul. its in humna nature to react like this and im pretty sure arnav too may be would have loved the child but not as unconditionally as it would have been!

as for khushi i really dunno wat to say and i dont think really understand her toughts but im grateful that she has at least accepted that she needs to care for the baby but im just wondering whether going away was really the solution. maybe she sould have stayed and deal with the situation. but i guess she has been able to read the unsaid pain in arnav's eyes and she sees herself as a failure who was not even able to spare her husband from that kind of pain! it must not have been an easy decision for her and how emotional she was can be seen in her letter. i just wish she would see that there cant be no other woman for arnav in this lifetime.

i think arnav is in a kind of denial phase and thus he is making like khushi never existed for him, like he never weaved so many dreams with her. i feel so bad for the guy and the part where he says thak gaya hoon hain just broke my heart as if he was saying that he was not physically tired but he is tired of this life without khushi where he can never be happy or feel loved!

thank u sooo much deepti for ur sweet words, u just made my day:) it was one wonderful journey with u, ur anrva and khushi. this ff is very special for me as it dealt with many situations that does happens in ones life and u are one brave person to write and deal with it in writting. it definitely changed my POV on many things and im very grateful for that. hoping u will start the next phase soon. congrats for the completion of this one and wishing u all the best for the next one:)

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Pinky_b

@Pinky_b

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Posted: 11 years ago

#918

Hi deeps, hope you are doing good. I have just been reading your story since last two days and the very first thought that crossed my mind was, why didn't I find the story earlier.Never minding that, I'm happy that I found it at last and I had a great time reading this wonderful story. Believe me, it is the first story that I came across the forum with the different storyline and hell lot of emotions. It really needs a lot of guts to take a sensitive issue and wave a story around it, despite not knowing whether it will be liked by the readers or not. You, my dear have done a wonderful job with both story as well as the characters and you definitely deserve a big round of applause for coming up with a story with such a sensitive issue. You really have done a commendable job.

Coming to the characters, both the lead characters were sketched so perfectly keeping in mind every small thing and I just fell in love with them. My heart really went out to both arnav & khushi, who had to suffer all along their life for no mistake for theirs, specially arnav. Not doubt that khushi was victim for something which was not even her fault, but I case so was arnav if not more. Every single emotion in each of the update was so well portrayed that it was really difficult for me to remember very time that it was just a fiction because everything seems to be so real. There were many chapters where I had tears in my eyes after reading the pain & agony that two innocent souls had withstand starting for their childhood. As a women, you have not left a stone unturned in portraying the feelings, pain, agony & emotions of khushi but what stood out for me was the way you have portrayed arnav's character and it was clearly seen who much you as a writer were involved in your characters. Though arnav forgave anjali, I still partly believe that if anjali had not fed those venomous thoughts to adi at the young age, probably arnav & khushi would not have suffered so much. I understand that anjali had her own reasons & insecurities to do what she did, but still somewhere I felt if it was not the case probably arnav & khushi would have suffered less. I guess through arnav's character you wanted to show that still human's exists and you have achieved it for sure because I believe that not everyone can be a arnav and sacrifice everything he had just because he thought he was at fault when that was not the case. Unconditional & true love do exists and your arnav & khushi are a prefect example for that ( even though it is a friction, it was as surreal as it can because with every single update, with every single line you had punched in prefect emotions & feelings). I for one, don't have any complaints regarding the ending because I believe there could not have been a better ending than that.

Thank you for giving me an opportunity for being a part of your story. I had a pleasure reading it.

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aarushh

@aarushh

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Posted: 11 years ago

#919

Thanks a lot for the pm yaar...
i am terribly shocked and cant believe it till now that this gets end here...
but after reading your author note i am relieved...
that it has part 2 yaar...
anyways for me khushi reaction is correct from her point of view...
u r d best yaar...
cant wait for the next update...
come back soon...

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Srilatha

@Srilathalolla

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Posted: 11 years ago

#920

hey friends it is just my POV if you dont like the ending why dont you think that this is not the ending because the writer said that she is going to start season 2 which is a continuation of this so just erase the end and wait for the update 😃

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