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Posted: 11 years ago
Hi Dipthiya...Since I read the last part of TVK couldn't sleep last night, it's been 24 hrs. but my heart still in pain and keep thinking about the ending...you had done a outstanding job with this creation of your writting, it needs lots of courage and strength to do so, and hats of to you sweetheart...you were 100% right with khushi's POV but it's still heart so much when i think about Arnav, no matter how much he suffer since his birth or whole life he is still alone at the end...THAK GAYA HUN one line says alot...i had my share of laughing, crying , worried , tense all kind of emotion through out reading TVK and somethime scare as well to read some of the part, never felt so much attached to any of story before...if i had write something which hearts anyone Sorry...i was so disturb after reading that all kind of questione and idea came in mind that you should write TVK2
so atleast we can have some short of relief towards our beloved Arnav and his Khushi...

And when i came to know that you will write TVK2 you just maid my day i'm sooo happy...i never wrote this long comment ever to any ff...so with that a big thanx to all your wonderfull work and outstanding story...if any mistake plz..do forgive me...🤗
Edited by anarshi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Phase 2 of The Valiant Knight -- waiting egarly
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Deepthiya...
I do not know if u remember me from last time when i was reading ur other and my First story wriitten by you- 'Dawn of the dawn'. I had joined ur thread somewhere when we were in middle on tht journey and then had to leave agn due to hectic life after a very short no of regular comments. But, it definitely didn't mean i forgot the story or the writer in you. I was very irregular on forum for a very long time and then on a complete absence of about 2 months until two weeks back. si, i came to finish my earlier story and then i remembered our conversation where u mentioned abt planning to write 'Between Strangers 2' because it had just all the elements i was looking for in a story.and thus, landed on TVK.
I finished reading this story last week when there were still last 2 updates remaining...and believe me u had me hooked rgt from the prologue itself. And then i was eagerly waiting for upcoming updates from the very min i finished the last line of earlier update. and i apologize for not having left a comment while i was around in last two weeks..but believe me i get to read only at bedtime and i do not have access to internet then...but i know all these ae just excuses...so i want to say a heartfelt sorry! SORRY!

and about TVK...well wat do i say...! all i can say is i m stumped like never before! I had been following a lot many IPKKND Fanfictions in last 3 yrs but believe me wen i say- with this marvellous story...Its you who sits on the throne for me from now on, surpassing all of the other writers i use to appreciate.
I am not telling u all this to flatter you or something but...to acknowledge wat i truly feel. So...Long story short...!!!

U know wat...while i was reading the last update, not even in my dreams did i thought tht this is the last one for this story...I m not even sure now if u had been handing out warnings for it...But i was truly taken aback...when i read the last update...and more because...it was an END. 😲
I was extremely overwhelmed after after reading the last part...and agn not exaggerating but telling u the fact, I truly had tears in my eyes...I guess tht shud be enough to rightly express to you...how well u have delivered the story...Especially the Very last Line..."Kaun Khushi?" ...well, i was totally stumped there! 👏

and then...i wudn't say that i didn't feel disappointment at first for the fact that they got separated in the end..honestly, i Was! but...then, it doesn't mean i am not satisfied with what u chose to keep it as. Maybe...Ur ending is wat that took me off-guard...I really appreciate it. But again, i wudn't also deny that had u left it just at that...never to work more on this story again...I wud have also been a part of the whole fandom of urs who woul have been spammming ur Inbox to give us a happy ending. 😆 But, My reasons for demanding tht wudn't have been the fact that we cannot just see Arshi seprated ever...because honestly i have read a few where they get seprated and found their ends satisfactory...but because I wanted to see the family that we have been dreaming to seee together right from the start...for Rahul and Ashu, the two kids that having been looking forward to their own family...and most of all for the very selfless Arnav...who had given up his everything...or shud i say in better words...on being himself just to be with Her...accepting anything and everything that he had done just to keep Khushi by her side...just to have and be satisfied with whatever little he can have of her (specifically reffering to the part where Arnav Brings khushi bk to their new home, when Khushi didn't want to stay with him...but he was satisfied even with her in front of his sight)...and lastly to see khushi understand the very fact...tht if she is with her...then he wants nothing else. And Also because even though watever may have happened, Arnav had overcome everything and proven in every way wat togetherness can really be.
I am not denying ur reasons on behalf of Khushi, but all i am saying is its hard to accept the pain all tht he readily embraced just to have her in his life...only to lose it all in the last. I know, it is very much possible with the practical mindset, but m heart is just not ready to accept it. 😭

All in all...Thank you very much for this masterpiece...and for deciding to give us Phase two of this story before we cud evn complain!

with Love,
Meg




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Posted: 11 years ago
humain intezaar kitna ...yeh hum nahi jantay...magar jee nahi saktay tumharay binaaa...waiting eagerly for tvk 2...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
I just got accidently hooked to your ff when I was randomly searching for my ay dear arnav -kushi ffs.

I started reading from in between threads where they they were separated and lots of crying and sadness. so I didn't like it, but just read that chapter as I wanted to finish what I started. but that resulted me reading the next three chapters and you had me hooked and blown away.

then I started reading from the start because there's no way your arshi is going to me sleep without reading their story from the start.

now I completed chapter 24. you just top yourself with the way you emotionally hook us to the characters that you cannot stop feeling for them. it's like you are there seeing each scene like being immersed in it. I don't have words to convey what you do to me with your beautiful ff. But I'm so thankful that I got a chance to read it.

thanks a lot for sharing your ff. please continue writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey Deepthi,

I started reading this FF almost when u were in 30th chap or so... Since then i had been hooked.. loved the way you portrayed Kushi here..

Now waiting to read d new version of TVK... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Such a nice story n you are right tht it takes time for them to overcome frm trauma so you did right but season 2 is coming so I'm happy.
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Posted: 11 years ago
reading chapter 27 and feeling devastated.

WHY???

it's more than heart breaking!!!

feeling like breaking things at home. you really know how to write pain!
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Posted: 11 years ago


Na jane kyun meri zindagi me tum aayi thi,
Na jane kyun mene tumhe chaha ta,
Na jane kyun mene tumse milne ki bekarari dikhai ti,
Na jaae kyun mene tumhe apne sanson me basaya ta,
Na jane kyun mene tumhe zine ki wajah banayi ti,
Na jane kyun tumhe pane ki chah jagayi ti,
Na jane kyun mene tum se hi dil lagaya ta,
Na jane kyun mene tumse hi pyaar kiya ta,
Jab chot is dil ko hi khana ta,
Jab sansein meri hi thamni ti,
Jab ansu mere hi behne te,
Jab alag yun hi hona ta.
Na jane kyun meri zindagi me tum aayi thi Kushii??

Link for the pic..
http://i.myniceprofile.com/245/24517.jpg



Edited by abhinavasen - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abhinavasen



Na jane kyun meri zindagi me tum aayi thi,
Na jane kyun mene tumhe chaha ta,
Na jane kyun mene tumse milne ki bekarari dikhai ti,
Na jaae kyun mene tumhe apne sanson me basaya ta,
Na jane kyun mene tumhe zine ki wajah banayi ti,
Na jane kyun tumhe pane ki chah jagayi ti,
Na jane kyun mene tum se hi dil lagaya ta,
Na jane kyun mene tumse hi pyaar kiya ta,
Jab chot is dil ko hi khana ta,
Jab sansein meri hi thamni ti,
Jab ansu mere hi behne te,
Jab alag yun hi hona ta.
Na jane kyun meri zindagi me tum aayi thi Kushii??

Link for the pic..
http://i.myniceprofile.com/245/24517.jpg

Love it..Superb Pic and very apt 😊



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