Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 96

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Posted: 11 years ago

Intezaar Intezaar Intezaar mere TVK 2 Kaaa ..,

mere sar pe Bukhaar mere TVK 2 Kaa.. 😆 ..

Eagerly waitng for Next Week .. Haye kese guzre ga pura Ek Haftaa..


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Posted: 11 years ago
Sorry for the late comment - I read the update two days ago but I just couldn't come to terms with its ending. When I read the update that morning I cried so much. Even on my way to school on the train, I cried and I couldn't stop thinking about it the whole day... It was so heartwrenching and I didn't expect that ending at all. I honestly don't know what to say about it excep that it was so painful and for me it was disappointing in a way too, even though I understand why you have done this. It really hurt me when khushi wrote 'we are not meant for each other' because he was the only one who understood her and vice versa. And what really got to me was the fact that even though adi is dead, in a way he achieved what he wanted. Writing this comment now and thinking of the story is bringing tears in my eyes. I must say that I will never forget this story and I don't think I'll ever get over the ending.
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Posted: 11 years ago
people say after heart break every sad song seems to be made for the one whose heart broke into shrads...

but here since i read TVK last part ... it seems that every sad song is made for Arshi...


Two songs that m hearibg since morning and make me feel more of TVK are : Saiyaara from Ek Tha Tiger and

Chaaha hai tujhko chahunga har dam
Marke bhee dil se ya pyar na hoga kam
Teree yaad jo aatee hai, mere aansu behte hain
Apna toh milan hoga, pal pal yeh kehte hain
Kya yeh jindaganee hai, bas teree kahanee hai
Bas teree kahanee hai, yeh jo jindaganee hai
Chaaha hai tujhko chahunga har dam
Marke bhee dil se ya pyar na hoga kam

Teree woh baate, woh chahat kee rasme
Jhuthe the vaade, kya jhuthee thee kasme
Jaane tamanna kya yeh sach, hai bas itna keh de
Tut jaaye na lamhe aitbar ke, de koi sila mere intejar ka
Chaaha hai tujhko chahunga har dam
Marke bhee dil se ya pyar na hoga kam

Teree hu teree jo chaahe kasam le le
Mujhko humrahee too apne gam de de
Saree umar hai mujhko dard judai ka sehna
Raste me khoyee hai manjil meree
Mere sath jayengee mushkile meree
Chaaha hai tujhko chahunga har dam
Marke bhee dil se ya pyar na hoga kam

Too saamne hai mere, phir kyon yeh duree hai
Tujhe kaise batau mai hay kya majburee hai
Yeh bhee koi jina hai sirf aansu pina hai
Sirf aansu pina hai yeh bhee koi jina hai...



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Posted: 11 years ago
Damn this was too sad and emotional, I hve tears in my eyes while reading khushi letter, I kno it's jot easy for her to take this decision but yeti she did.
Feeling so sad for Arnav too and i dnT kno what to make of it???is he moving on??? Is he forgetting khushi and accepting life as khushi ask him in the letter???
Still confused cuz he removed all her clothes n ask anjali "kaun khushi"
Waiting for phase 2 and yet again confused are they gonna fall in loved with each other or different ppl ???
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Posted: 11 years ago
great ending
no to comment on them
hope thy didn't suffer more

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Posted: 11 years ago
its sooo...painful...:(((..
i dont know wat 2 write...but i cant accept khushi' decisn...may be ...she was right...but wat 2 say...soo sad..😭.😭.😭.😭.😭...
in all these...adi's revenge fulfilled...arshi seperated..n arnav will b suffrg...😭.😭.😭.😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
ooh sad i wil miss vry sad ending
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am speechless! Wa always wondering how you would work out this revelation, understanding how Khushi was characterised. But this way? It is completely in line with the story, thats the irony. Khushi is not able to exorcise her demons with Arnav around her, he will not be able to come to terms fully with abandoning her child. Time can only reduce the heat of the emotions involved, time away from each other. They love each other so very much, yet to survive with self respect they cannot be near each other. Hate tragedies, but what still brings me hope is that there is II. Hope the romance is between these two there & fulfilled.
You have woven such an emotional story, it will remain in my most memorable list. The highs were high & the lows very low. This ride was filled with angst, pain, happiness, hope & love of the highest order. Will miss waiting for the updates!
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Posted: 11 years ago
This was really sad ending.
thanks for 2nd season.
U r right.
She suffered a lot.
They want happiness.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dear Deepthiya,

Oh my! Arnav and Kushi broke my heart with the pain they endured and enduring. I badly wanted Khushi to know the truth because it will always create a barrier between them as their relationship is a no holds barrierrelationship. Where each allows theotherto read their each thought and emotion, where they understand each other's pain more than anything. If the truth don't come out, Arnav's pain will create a rift sooner or later. And holding the truth from her, no matter what reason or for goodness, will eat away Arnav.

I understand why you have to separate them even when you want them together. A part of them has to be healed by themselves before they can allow each other to be healed. Also the baby is always there between them which is a result of the nightmare they both want to forget, but the innocent child unknowingly bring them again to the same night where their dream was turned into a nightmare by the monster. With the the childhood both had and how it haunted their life throughout even when they made something of themselves, they will never be able to give up the child and forgive themselves. I understand Khushi when she says, she wil never be able to care for the child, forget love, when she sees what Arnav had to undergo and will have to bring the life back for themselves. Thethree of themwill have to go through fire and ice to purge themselves to get back with each other.

I don't have words to express myself to you what a beautiful story and emotions you gifted to me. Thank you from the bottom of my heart. Through many news and movies, I had strong feelings about rape and and rape victims and what they and their families have to undergo. The way you treated it make this story more than just a story, its most realistic where you treated your characters has real people.

I'm eagerly awaiting for the next stage of story, their path to healing and love.

Please do start the next part soon.

Thank you once again for sharing this ff with us.
Love you for it. Take care.

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