Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 85

thanks for the pm n for this FF

I know n understand the story requires the way it ended but really painful seeing them apart and Arnav saying "kaun Khushi"...

Deepu.. I will comment after reading the update again... and after the Break fast... because Inlaws cant wait long for the break fast... I will take at least an hour to comment... Please... Please...

what an end to season 1..simply loved it..take a bow Deeps.. waiting already for season 2 ;-)

I read this FF recently and i can't thank you enough for giving us such a good one. I'm generally a silent reader and keep it to my self, but after reading this story its a shame to not thank you. I'm still breathing through this story. You are such an amazing writer. I'm very much looking forward to Valiant of Knight 2. I will go through your index and read all the other FFs that you have written so far. Please don't stop writing and i'm really happy for you, to have such a loving and caring family.

Originally posted by: abhinavasen

Deepu,

Hope u are doing fine now, i understand u must have worked very hard to breath the emotions in ARSHI.. I guessed yesday that today will be TVK1 ending... And Thankyou for making me be a part in this beautiful Journey..

i Just finished reading todays update... Speaking about the Ra*e is not easy and battling is big fight of life..

Kushis character has been pictured as a a very strong women since beginning.. and she was living the same..But the moment she came to knwo the disaster in her life she couldnt accept ,,, she reacted as WOMAN finally...

But,

She claims she loves Arnav immensely, she listens to him and delivered the baby.. she knows the life history of Arnav from where he came , how much he suffered till date(suffering) and she also knows she is the only WOMAN in his life .. He was with her in thick and thin, she learned inspite of knowing about the baby from the very beginning he has acceped the baby only because of HER...

Inspite of all this i find the way Kushis decision for both is not convincing... She made him Tie the mangalsutra and toe ring, Means she wants them but notArnav???

This is not the real KUSHI .. Either she is not in her right mind frame or she doesnt want to force the baby on to Arnav..

#Either way iam not happy with her decision and she writes a letter.. and its too painful to read this line I sincerely hope you find someone who could be yours in all true sense,BECAUSE I AM NOT THE ONE FOR YOU...

How could she decide for him??

Deepu, this is ur story and ur characters, i love ur writing ... but this update didnt reach to the extent i imagined.. iam sorry to say this. but please dont mind this is my view..

Want to read in TVK 2 what u have stored for us..

Thankyou for the mention in note.. u deserve much more appreciation..

Stay Blessed!

Awesome update.

i am in tears di

Originally posted by: Chaverah_TFC

And I salute you dear narrator!

Yeah, it took me more than a half day to come to take in the fact that TVK has come to an end (though its just the phase 1)..

Trust me, I saw the PM this morning, read the first part for about a half, my heart bled already and it was like. I was living through that hell.. And then I just scrolled down to see how many parts this update has been written in and by the end of the second part, my eyes literally came out of their sockets and I just went still.. IT took more than a 5 seconds to compose myself and scroll up and down and see that it truly is 'The End'.. And then the last two lines of Anjali-Arnav convo with Arnav's ending question ' Kaun Khushi?' killed me, truly! Seriously, I literally felt my heart stab and trust me this is the first time I felt it.. I honestly was expecting a lot more of chapters, not just one or two, where Arnav & Khushi would work into fighting that dark phase and fly in love and joy once again and this came as a really unexpected and shocking to the core twist!! I dint have the heart to read the update, not yet, coz I was busy trying to grasp what just happened.. TVK at an end? With a tragedy?! I scrolled down to find your note and that was it, I read a few lines and I was like 'fu*k!'.. I wasn't angry, Deeps, trust me.. I was more like I dont know.. Lost? Disappointed? Numb actually.. And then I shut the system without as much looking at anything else.. I attended a marriage, my mind still stuck with the few sentences I read and I really had to sleep over it in the afternoon.. It was a true melancholic feeling.. And then in the evening when I bathed and got freshed up, I was like, 'its true, Deeps told it was a story of a Valiant Knight, A Knight who stood by her, an intense caged story, but never promised a miracle.. And then keeping in mind the various times you'v stunned me with the perfection of how realistic you'v kept the characters, the way you promised to show that they are intense in every emotion , in every phase of their life, I couldn't help but want to jump in and see how this ended up...

You are one heck of a writer who needs to take up this as a profession, seriously.. Not many a writers have this kinda influence on the readers and if I, a book worm and a constant novel reader since like my 12-13 of age, had this affect, anyone can become bound to you..

I dont know how you'v coped up with the emotions but honestly, it was bang on! I'm not going to mention about the reactions of the various characters, not even Arnav's.. All I'm gonna mention is how much you'v shifted higher in my list of respected people.. Even if this were the end of TVK, I would have reacted the same way, but yeah, may be a little later, taking my time to digest the fact that it truly is the end..

Journey through TVK not just was a reading experience but kind of a check yourself spot where many of my perception towards things and the ones you'v mentioned clashed, met, differed, matched, and even changed.. The way I look at hidden emotions, the way I read people's silent gestures became clearer.. The strength, the bravery, the grief everything I could relate, feel and connect..

And now, though I am a bit low on how TVK end, (okay, just the phase 1), the ending was kick-ass!! 'Thank gaya hoon Nani' .. 'Kaun Khushi?"

I love you Deeps.. For every word, every emotion, every lesson, every single thing of you.. Not just as the writer, but as a person in whole.. The way you speak of your family, your perspectives, your stand on your decisions, I truly respect you.. Koti lo okkaru antaru kada, naaku meeru alaga.. I bloody dont care what the world says, but for me, meeru oka motivational factor la unaaru ippudu... You know, your writings for me are like kinda preparing me to face what the world really is.. I salute you for that.. From the bottom of my heart...

Now that you'v given the heart warming news, the strongest thread to hold onto to mend the broken hearts that TVK phase 2 is gonna be up, I'l be waiting like child does for her Dad to return from the Army..

I know you'l rock it, I trust you.. I'm not gonna ask for how it'l be or put up my suggestions, but all I ask is, keep showing me the true world Akka.. I seriously am preparing myself through you...

Love&Hugs,

Chaverah.