Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 83

Originally posted by: canapoem

Edited:

Deepthi, first and foremost congratulations on the completion of TVK, a story which must have taken a lot of bravery to even conceptualise let alone write it. Secondly thank you Deepthi for saying such nice words about me and keeping me in mind while writing a part of the story. I am really honored and it means a lot to me.

Finally coming to the update and ending of the story, Deepthi let me assure you that what you are going to read below written by me is only what I felt about the ending of the story and please please don't take it personally at any level. Its just my view about certain decisions taken by Khushi and there is absolutely nothing personal about it.

Coming to the initial parts of the update, happy that baby is born and even kind of satisfied that people know the truth. As a person even I don't like to keep secrets in life and if there is something unusual, I usually share it immediately with my closest ones. (You surely know this about me.)

I am a fighter in life and circumstances also has made me into one. I used to always appreciate Khushi's character in this story because she was a fighter and I used to find a lot of myself in her. But today she disappointed me. You know after reading the update last night, I could hardly sleep the entire night. I kept putting myself in her shoes but sadly I could not connect to her like earlier times.

I can understand rape victims undergo a lot of psychological disorders and sharing intimacies again is very difficult for them. But are they not rape victims who have fought these demons and leading normal lives now??? If so many women can do it, then why not Khushi?

Coming to the baby, she could only think of the night of the rape and decided that Adarsh was the father and the baby is no way connected to Arnav. What surprised me is that how could she forget the seven months of care and love which Arnav had given to her, how he had been happy looking at the ultrasound pictures or feeling the baby's kicks, how he had taken care of her every need including her food intake or when she was throwing up or her mood swings, does that not make Arnav a father equally. Why did she overlook all of this???

I always feel that love is something which is infinite and has no bounds. You give love ten folds and you get back hundred folds, whether be it with your parents or spouse or children or friends. So would it have been so difficult to give love to that innocent baby while loving her husband too.

And you know the most saddest part of her decision was she made Adarsh Singh Raizada win. Adi's plan was to destroy Khushi and inturn destroy Arnav, which he succeeded. He took that one thing which Arnav called as his away from him. For someone like me who always believes that "good always wins over evil", today was a black day for me.

Further, Khushi did not even have to guts to say goodbye to Arnav in person and she had to leave a stupid letter to tell him that. Did Arnav deserve this??? Right from birth, he has always lost people who either love him or whom he loves, unfortunately history repeated again today.

Again Deepthi, please don't take this personally. These are only my views regarding Khushi's decision. Whatever her reasons were for the decision, I can only say that "people take decisions in haste and repent in leisure" and I somehow feel that she is going to repent her decision and hope she changes her attitude and decision before its too late.

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

Poem ji.. please dont mind me!!

i know that Khushi has disappointed everyone.. but you know.. not all rape victims have someone like Arnav with them..

Khushi was going through the pregnancy thinking to be Arnav's baby... it was her pride which she thought only to be Arnav's

but that has shattered beyond repair.. and for a woman like her.. who loves someone to extreme.. will be difficult to digest the fact that she is not the mother of a baby whom she thought to be part of her love.

and she can never accept the baby letting Arnav go through hell.. as Arnav is so possessive about Khushi.. though he may accept the baby, it will be difficult for him to connect with it as he knows what Khushi went through to get the baby to the world..

And Khushi cannot let the baby down for know mistake of his.. so without putting both Arnav n baby to hell she silently walked out with baby..

it will be difficult for her to accept the baby and the incidents relating to it.. but she will come up.. but if Arnav is near her she will definitely find it difficult to accept the baby as she wanted to cherish the moment of THEIR BABY with him.. not this

coming to letting Adi win.. He has already destroyed their peace of mind which is his victory.. whenever Arnav was with Khushi though he is all loving, seeing her scars his mind automatically goes to the night.. Arnav went through sheer torture through Khushi's pregnancy.. and Khushi after knowing what she was carrying was not something out of love but force, she broke from inside..

so Adi already won.. and now if they get together with the baby it will be nothing more than torture seeing each other in pain..

so its better they sought it out alone..

Originally posted by: canapoem

Edited:

Deepthi, first and foremost congratulations on the completion of TVK, a story which must have taken a lot of bravery to even conceptualise let alone write it. Secondly thank you Deepthi for saying such nice words about me and keeping me in mind while writing a part of the story. I am really honored and it means a lot to me.

Finally coming to the update and ending of the story, Deepthi let me assure you that what you are going to read below written by me is only what I felt about the ending of the story and please please don't take it personally at any level. Its just my view about certain decisions taken by Khushi and there is absolutely nothing personal about it.

Coming to the initial parts of the update, happy that baby is born and even kind of satisfied that people know the truth. As a person even I don't like to keep secrets in life and if there is something unusual, I usually share it immediately with my closest ones. (You surely know this about me.)

I am a fighter in life and circumstances also has made me into one. I used to always appreciate Khushi's character in this story because she was a fighter and I used to find a lot of myself in her. But today she disappointed me. You know after reading the update last night, I could hardly sleep the entire night. I kept putting myself in her shoes but sadly I could not connect to her like earlier times.

I can understand rape victims undergo a lot of psychological disorders and sharing intimacies again is very difficult for them. But are they not rape victims who have fought these demons and leading normal lives now??? If so many women can do it, then why not Khushi?

Coming to the baby, she could only think of the night of the rape and decided that Adarsh was the father and the baby is no way connected to Arnav. What surprised me is that how could she forget the seven months of care and love which Arnav had given to her, how he had been happy looking at the ultrasound pictures or feeling the baby's kicks, how he had taken care of her every need including her food intake or when she was throwing up or her mood swings, does that not make Arnav a father equally. Why did she overlook all of this???

I always feel that love is something which is infinite and has no bounds. You give love ten folds and you get back hundred folds, whether be it with your parents or spouse or children or friends. So would it have been so difficult to give love to that innocent baby while loving her husband too.

And you know the most saddest part of her decision was she made Adarsh Singh Raizada win. Adi's plan was to destroy Khushi and inturn destroy Arnav, which he succeeded. He took that one thing which Arnav called as his away from him. For someone like me who always believes that "good always wins over evil", today was a black day for me.

Further, Khushi did not even have to guts to say goodbye to Arnav in person and she had to leave a stupid letter to tell him that. Did Arnav deserve this??? Right from birth, he has always lost people who either love him or whom he loves, unfortunately history repeated again today.

Again Deepthi, please don't take this personally. These are only my views regarding Khushi's decision. Whatever her reasons were for the decision, I can only say that "people take decisions in haste and repent in leisure" and I somehow feel that she is going to repent her decision and hope she changes her attitude and decision before its too late.

Originally posted by: lalarukh

aweee meenu i love u dj ...such mature thoughts...hats off girl

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

u r 2nd one to call me mature..

u n deep di get ready to be packed to asylum.. no one here thinks me to be mature🤣

but coming to the story.. i dono y.. i am able to connect with both arnav and khushi..

and mainly Arnav.. i can easily connect with him.. dono why😕

Originally posted by: lalarukh

u know wt dj ...those who laugh out makes other laugh with them ...kiya kabhi kisi nay notice kiya backend how mature they r...i guess me and deeps have seen that in u...we both willing to go where ever u going to send us...hum tayar hain :)

Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

not me.. My amma will do the honors😆 they think i am kid and are worrying about my future sasuraal🤣

vese yeh aap dono hamein yeh alag nazar se kese dekh liye?😕 jo aaj tak kisi ne nahi ki.. alag nazar chodiye.. aaj tak humko kisi ne notice tak nahi ki😆