Arshi FF: The Valiant Knight - Thread 8 - Completed - Note on Page 142 - Page 87

Such an emotional ending poor arshi... looking forward to the 2nd phase

Firstly I wanna congratulate you from the entire team of" Telugu Allari Mooka" for your successful completion of "THE VALIANT KNIGHT" season 1.

We all are exultant to be a part of your journey from the beginning (Ill not say till the end cause there is a lot more to come in season 2).

I have been saying this right from the beginning and how cum I not mention it now... Deepthi this fiction is your "MASTERPIECE". You just "ACED" this fiction.

"HEARTBREAKING" update

I know its been hard both for arnav and khushi, but Im glad that khushi gave birth to the baby considering arnav's appeal,

The entire family witnessing the truth is quite shocking since I hadn't expected to come out at this point of time ... but I dint like khushi naming the baby as Adarsh Singh Raizada...the baby is an innocent soul...

I don't understand whom to blame... the circumstances, Arnav's parents for treating him as trash, Mr.Raizada for giving Arnav a Family/shelter, Anjali for brainwashing Adi, Adi for wantingly ruining Arnav's life, Arnav for not being able to protect Khushi, Khushi for being the life of Arnav,,,the receiving end is an innocent soul

The "TAVEEZ" the most important aspect of the fiction how could that not be a part of the end of this season...

The letter was bang on... I kind of anticipated that Khushi would leave Arnav...

Thaak gaya hoon Nani ... this dialogue broke my heart Deeps...

Would be awaiting for the next season ...Hoping you would start soon...

Im honoured that Im one of your special people so " THANK YOU" for making me a part of it...

last but not the least "QUOTES"

Originally posted by: jduke

After reading Kushi's decision I really wonder and admire how she chose just born over her loving and understanding husband. From couple of chapters I have imagined myself in Kushi shoes and wrote my comments. But her decision to leave Arnav for child I can't imagine myself. Many of you may hate me saying this but I think I will give highest priority to my husband and his love for me and think of alternatives for baby if I don't want to bring up the child. Of course I won't be throwing the kid in trash for sure. I will find a safe place for baby. Does Kushi really think that Arnav will forget and move on just because they didn't make first child together?. Is this first child thing is so important than her and their own happiness?. Why most of our relationships defined around children? Is Kushi's sacrifice a real solution to bring happiness to Arnav?. To me children are part of life and I love my child but I don't give up everything just for numbers. Kushi is one confused soul and is under so much mental and physical stress and hope she took this decision in spur of moment. May be time will heal her and she will reiterate her priorities. I really don't know what Arnav's mind is thinking towards the end but I am not disappointed with his behavior. There is a yielding point to every person and Arnav might have reached that. Arnav needs some space too. He has undergone so much stress balancing everything and everybody in his life. I am saying good bye

Apt ending...i was litterally crying and cdnt see any better than this. This speak lot of unheard and unwritten emotions they are going though.

I don't knw what to write???😕😕

Loved d ff TVK... ending is very sad... but I still loved it bcoz I totallybagree with u Deeps that if person has to heal then they shiuld be ready for it... things will take its time to fall in its place... and I lived d way Arnav easily hugged Anjali although it was Anjali opinion that made Adi grew up.like this.. Kushi revelation to fanily at the kid and wat Adi did to her was wonderfully written ...Hats off Deeps... and ir was really painful when Arnav said Tjank gaya hoon nani... seriously he deserves happuness.. u have proved Arnav as a gem of a character in this ff... I personally love this ff since it was well written how a rape victim suffer and the in securities they overcome. .. no girl shoyld eve r b touched without her sole permission. .. and I was also happy reading the ashu and rahul part... how such innocent lil hearts shoyld be loved immensely. .. im jus waiting for TVK phase 2... start it soon darling I wanna read how they tried moving on and fell in love again... waiting eagerly for that. ...until then im sticking to TVK... hats off ...awesome work... love you Deeps... hugs ..xoxo

Hii...
I read the update in the morningand Ijust could not bring myself to comment on it.. The raw reality that you have portrayed in all its painful glory left me dumbfounded... For once i wantedto scratch away the last part and make khushi accept both arnav and that child... Then i felt as if it was the child who was the cause of all this pain and i wanted it to die or be a stillborn... I don't know... I just could not bring myself to accept this end.. I don't intend to say that you are wrong. You're correct in what you did.. And this probably is the best end there could be to this story... But its so so so very painful to me... The whole day I've beenstruggling to remind myself that its just a story and i cannot stop at that...
All this thinking made me realizethat this is the most sensible thing khushi could do... It was the only thing khushi would do... To live with that child and be in front of arnav's eyes would be more a pain... And knowing that the baby is a constant reminder of what arnav failed at and what circumstances forced them to suffer.. I couldn't get myself to love the child .
Now that I've processed the story and i realise that had they decided to stay together their love would have suffocated and died.. I find thatmore painful..

But nonetheless... I hate tragedies... As beautiful and pristineyour story is I'mheart broken... Its a flaw in me... Maybe this story just splashed ice water on my face and was a cruel reminder that life is much more than happily-ever-afters... I'm a sucker for happy endings and this story whenever i think of it makes me feel like I've lost a part of me with the realisation that thingsare not always lovey dovey...

Your story is beautiful but it mademe cry... I'm heartbroken... I'm sad...

Hades off to u for writing this brilliant story
This one was so realistic n amazing...
Obiyasly Im not happy with the end...
Bt ur reasons are valid...
Waiting for season 2
Continue soon

emotional and heart touching parts

wow dats not wat i was expecting ...so this is wat she meant wen she said to her mother, dat she will always pick her child before her husband ...she did sumthing which neither arnav parents could do nor her parents ...she wanted to accept the child but was not able to because of arnav , every time she use to see arnav she use to feel y it happened ,y its not der 1st child ,y r dey suffering , y is der d feeling of jelousy in his eyes , she was not able to see her husband lyk dis n dat innocent child will always bring dose emotions in arnav's eyes no matter how much arnav tries to accept dat child , arnav was ok wid d child but couldn't deal with the comparison n jealousy , it could hav created sum kind of rift if not now den later if dey would hav gone wid wat the two choices arnav was giving ...thye best thing for the child n der relationship is some space form each other n dat is wat khushi offered to the 3 people in dis relationship ...very very hard decision to make