YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME [ THREAD 1] [ COMPLETED ]

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purnima209

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: avniarpitha

I love it a lottt😳
k..wil be waiting for your update tomorrow...plz pm me

k i will upload my be thoda late like after or nyt . because mrng at hme we are havg function k na...

and i will pm if i didnot but u pls check karo na k na

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purnima209

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: candyfreak
it will be sanyu...omg ...the story turns into something else
plz pm me
love
gowri

i m so happy that u like story

if i forgot to pm u thn pls dont midsunderstand me k na and ha tomorrow check karo i will upload it if i didnot gve u pm means k na

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purnima209

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Sheron13rokerz
Dont diacontinue its fab would be waiting for ur next one.

k i dont
i will upload tomorrow check it tomorrow

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swathi sen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

discontinue???? uske bare mein sochna bhi math...
its really awesome to read your work...
ab toh kahani mein twist bhi aa gayi... is situation mein discontinue karna!!!!
pm me when you update next part...

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purnima209

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - PART 7 - THE SURPRISE

PREVIOUS PART : PART 6 : PART 6

Randhir has now decided to search that girl. He was out of his thoughts when vishal called him.

V: is everything ok sir. Apko itna disturbed kabhi nahi dekha.

R: vishal, ek kaam kar. Is city me jitne mental asylums hein mujhe unki list chahiye aur specially is dress code ki. (he gives a dress code he saw that sanyu was wearing as he was in utter shock after watching her).

V: ok sir.

Randhir vas very restless as he was anxiously waiting for meeting her.

Vishal comes with details.

V: sir aisa ek hi hospital hai jiska dress code apke bataaye dress code se similar hai.

R: good. Show me

V: sir this. National Institute of Mental Health and Neurosciences(NIMHANS).

Sir ek baat puchun agar apko bura na lage to.

R: haan puchh.

V: sir apne suddenly ye sab karne ko kyun kaha??

R: i'll be back fir batata hun.

Randhir reaches to the hospital. He inquires there from receptionist.

R: kya yahaan koi sanyukta agrawal naam ki patient hai.

REC: let me check sir. (she searches total regirsters). No sir nahi hai. Actually sir bahut saare patients aise bhi hein jinke k naam registered nahi hote.

Generally unhe apna naam yaad nahi hota isliye. Agar ap patient ki koi photo dikhayen to main apki kuch help kar sakun.

R: yes sure. (he shows a photo)

REC: yes sir is patient ko to aj hi dusre hospital me bheja gayaa hai.

R: kaun se hospital.

REC: sir, Manipal Hospital.

Randhir rushes to the manipal hospital and inquires about sanyu. They took him to the garden and there she was sitting with her toy car holding a random screwdriver.

Randhir had tears in his eyes because watching her with those things proves that she is his sanyu. He could not believe his eyes. His hands were trembling as if he saw an ocean in desert. His eyes were now sheding tears continuously.

He reaches to her held her shoulders and shakes her.

He starts his vomiting all his frustration...

R: kahan thi tum sanyu. Kahan kahan nai dhunda maine tumhe. Kahan chali gayi thi tum. Kaise rahi itne saal mere bina. Tumh as ek baar bhi meri yaad nahi aayi.

Pari ki yaad nahi aayi. Chup kyun ho bolo. Kuch to bolo sanyu.

S:Tum kaun ho. Ye kya kar rahe ho chhodo mujhe. Mujhe apni car thik karni hai. (she says and goes near a tree and sat in its shed)

She has became just like kid. Her mind was blank. He stares her silently.

He has wonders by her such attitude. He understands the situation when he remembered the words of the receptionist and also recognised that she has been im mental hospital for how long he also didn't know.

After few minutes of complete silence he went near her and spoke.

R: kya hua thik nahi ho raha.

S: Tum kaun ho???? Tum bahut bure ho. Mujhe nahi baat karni tumse.

R: Main to tumhara friend hun. Wo kya hai na tumhe bahut dino se dekha nahi. Tum hi mujhe chhod k chali gayi thi.

S: sachi.. Maine aisa kiya tha???? To fir thik hai tum meri help karo.

R: haan friends to hote hi hein help karne k liye. Dikhao..

S: ye lo

R: after fixing a small error says- see its done.

S: are haan ye to thik ho gayi. Thank you. Pataa hai mujhe na badaa mazaa aata hai in sabko thik karne mein. Tumhe bhi aata hoga na.

Randhir recognises their task of searching parts of their toy car and smiles a bit. After long time he has smiled with such happiness.

S: tum hass kyun rahe ho..

To be continue...