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Posted: 11 years ago
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YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - PART 5 - a new dawn


PREVIOUS PART : PART 4 : PART 4

Now randhir was broken n was in sanyu's arms. He was crying badly n she has cupped his face n made him looking to her. They were sitting on the floor. Randhir was constantly staring her like a kid. As sanyu stopped speaking he hugged her again wiped his tears.


He went to the room again. There Renuka was crying hiding her face with her palm. He came held her both hands with his n unwrapped her face.


R: ab apko apna chehra chhupane ki koi zarurat nahi. Mujhe samajh me aa gaya hai ye apki majburi thi.


She was speechless, a lot of happy tears were flowing from her eyes n she hugger him tighly. The only thing she could say was "itne saalo baad aj mujhe mera beta waapas mil gaya". Both were in tears.


Meanwhile sanyu was observing all there n she remembered how her words effect randhir. Renuka opened her eyes n saw sanyu outside the room. She just made her lips move to say thank you without making any sound.


Now they broke their hug n renuka called sanyu inside. She blessed both n went away. Now..

R: thank you sanyu tumne meri zindagi ki sabse badi kami ko bhar diya. I m glad that you are in my life. Thank you n I love you...


S: its ok mcp. I made it for myself. Watching you happy is biggest pleasure of my life. I love you too.
He gently kissed her on her forehead n then hugged her.
(so this happened n randhir thereafter respected his mom plentily..)


Present...

All set. Randhir went office alongwith pari. He went office n leaving pari @ school.

@ office @


R to his PA: Vishal aj ka schedule kya hai.


V: sir, aj bas do meetings hai clints k saath par kal apko bangalore k liye nikalna hoga 2 dino k liye. Wahan apko ek deal final karni hai. I'll be there with you.


R: ok.


After work he picks pari from school.

In car...


P: papa apko pata hai aj school me teacher ne sabko maa par essay likhne ko kaha.


R: to tumne kya likha.


P: maine likha maa bahut sundar hai. Wo hamesha mera saath hai.


R: tumhe kaise pata ki mumma tumhare paas hai.


P: ap hi to kehte ho na ki maa apke paas aati hai. Apke paas aati hai to mere paas bhi aati hogi na.
A tear drop escapes from his eyes n he hugs pari.


P: papa ro mat mumma ko bura lagega na.


R: ok. As ur order my princess.(giggles)


They reach home. Next day he's ready to leave for bangalore. But something was cooking in his mind..


R(in his mind): pata nahi kyun aisa lag raha hai aj kuch badalne waala hai. Pata nahi kya. Par sanyu, aj tumhari bahut yaad rahi hai. Se says luking to the paayal.

His thoughts interupts when his mom calls him.

RS: beta breakfast karlo fir tumhe nikalna hai. (now she has left her company making randhir its ceo as he is more than elligible for that post. In short she is retired).


Randhir had his breakfast , went 2 pari kissed her on her forehead without disturbing as she was sleeping n left for bangalore)


@ Bangalore @

He went for his hotel. He was invited by his guests n a car was set for him.

On the way, he saw something that amazed his eyes. A girl with freezy hairs looking cheerfully to a toy car holding an useless tester in her hand.


She had wide dark circles under her eyes. She looked very week wearing some hospital dress. She was inside a van having steel net tied on the windows of the van.


His eyes wide opened when he saw her. A tear drop escaped from his eyes and his lips uttered a name...


To be continue...


NEXT PART : PART 6 : PART 6

Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
I hav a feeling that it is sanyukta..yeah! I hope..and is she in a mental asylum van playing wid toy car? So many questions. I hope i didn't set the spoilers..Update soon. Waiting...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anyania

I hav a feeling that it is sanyukta..yeah! I hope..and is she in a mental asylum van playing wid toy car? So many questions. I hope i didn't set the spoilers..Update soon. Waiting...


i will post tomorrow k na ...
lets see who is she... 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
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ohh please say that is Sanyu, please please please...
And thanks for the pm!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sry yar tomorrow cnfrm i will pm u... i m really sry yar ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Is that Sanyu??? lost her memory... yaar left in suspense... pls update asap ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Is that Sanyu??? lost her memory... yaar left in suspense... pls update asap ...




k i will post today nyt only dont worry...
and no pms k na?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update😊
continue soon
nd thnx 4r pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - PART 6 - A DISTURBED DAY


PREVIOUS PART : PART 5 : PART 5

Randhir was in traffic when signal was red. He saw someone and said SANYUKTAAA...

when he utteredr that name the signal became green and he left. He was shocked and was not in a position to say or do anything. he was very restless and was in his thoughts.

R(in his mind): no, aisa nahi ho sakta. My sanyu is no more. Yeh kya ho raha hai. Ye kaise ko sakta hai. Sanyu to us din pahaadi se gir gayi thi.


Past...


Sanyukta fell from the cliff and car blasts. Now every family members arrive there and called police. Randhir was not in his sense. Renuka took pari from his hands and shaked randhir but he was still in shock.


The police seached sanyu everywhere but in vain. No body was faund. The only thing that was found was a burnt car.


After that sanyu was declared dead.

On sanyu's funeral...


Randhir was now quite out of shock but crying badly alone in his room. He was neigher speaking to anyone neither ate anything. He was in extreme sorrow.


Now someone knocked the door. It was his dad.


(His relation was not continuing good with his dad after getting his mom back. Randhir thought that his dad separated him and his mom. Even he was not making his dad a part any important decision of his life)


R: kaun hai.


RD: beta main hun dad.

R: mujhe apse koi baat nai karni. Apse to kya kisise bhi koi baat nai karni. Just away. I just wanna be alone.

RD: beta I know ki tu mujhse naaraz hai par beta baahar sanyu ka chautha hai.
(hearing this a thrill went on his spines and he came out.

Still crying badly n on his knees infront of sanyu's pic.

Everything was over but still randhir was sitting with his swollen eyes crossing his legs staring sanyu's pic and disturbed with that incident.

Suddenly he came out of his thoughts when he heard a baby cry. He went near her and took her in his arms. Within a minute pari became quite and he remembered sanyu's words of loving pari more than her. A tear drop escaped from his eye when he saw pari smiling.

She looks just like her. Eyes, nose ears everything resembles to sanyu. Just her lips were like his. Even she smiles like sanyu.

He came facing sanyu's pic holding pari on his arms and said YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME SANYU through this angel. I love you.


Present...


He was in his thoughts till a call had not disturbed him. After 2-3 rings he answered the call. It was pari.


P: hello papa !!!

R: haan beta bolo.

P: main apse gussa hun.

R: aisa kyun?? meri princess mujhse naraaz hai.. Shaayad maine koi blast kiya hai.

P: haan yahi kiya hai. Ap mujhse bina mile chale gaye.

R: sorry beta main thoda late ho raha tha aur tum so rahi thi. To maine socha main lauthte waqt meri princess k liye ek badi si barbie le aaun par kya karen tum to gussa ho. Ok kisi aur ko de dunga.

P: nai nai main gussa nai hun mujhe sabse badi waali barbie chahiye jisme uske hairs colour ho sakte hein.

R: as u ofder my princess.

P: love you papa. Bye

R: bye beta love you too.

Randhir reaches his hotel room. N he was hell disturbed.

In meeting...

Mr. mehta wes representing his project and randhir was still thinking of that girl. Mr. mehta finished his presentation and said "mr.shekhawat any quiries????

R: still in thoughts.

MM: mr.shekhawat!!!!!

R: anhhh... No no.. Nothing.

MM: so are we done with this deal??

R: sure.

MM: thank(shake hands)

Everybody leaves except vishal..

V: is everything ok. Apko itna disturbed kabhi nahi dekha.

R: vishal. Ek kaam kar...


To be continue...


NEXT PART : PART 7 : PART 7

Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Noo yaar you just continue.. its really nice one.. and update soon.. bcoz icnt wait soo long.. 😉

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