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Posted: 11 years ago
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YOU ARE ALWAYS WITH ME - PART 8 - THE PAIN...


PREVIOUS PART : PART 7 : PART 7


S: tum hass kyun rahe ho.


R: main.. Wo to isliye kyunki tumne mujhe gudgudi kiya.


S: kahan.. Maine to tumhe touch bhi nahi kiya.


R: uske liye thodi touch karna zaruri hai. Bas ungli ghumane ki der hai. Bataun kaise.


S: haan batao.


Randhir starts tickling her. Then she smiles and then laughs. More he tickles more she laughs louder n louder.. Watching her smiling and laughing, he's feeling like flying without wings.


After sometimes, he comes to the real world and senses that 2 make sanyu normal he has to know what had actually happened to her in past.


He then prepares to leave. Suddenly he is stuck in his position due to some tight grip on his hands.
While standing sanyu held his hand tightly with both her hands.


S: tum ja rahe ho mujhe chhod k. Tum to mere friend ho na. Please mujhe chhod k mat jao. Mujhe yahaan achha nahi lagta.


He again sat down, cupped her face and said


R: dont worry baby, mujhe thoda sa kaam hai. Wo khatam kar main tumhe lene aaunga. Hum yahaan se chale jayenge. Thik hai.


S: promise.


R: pakka promise.


He was about to leave when sanyu called him.


S: tumhara naam kya hai.
Randhir smiles and says MCP.

S: mcp, tum bahut achhe ho.

R: tum mujhse bhi zyada achhi ho.


Randhir leaves and sanyu again started experiments with her toy car.

Randhir rushes to NIMHAS(the hospital from where she is shifted). After reaching there he again inquires at reception..


R: who took care of this patient. (he asked showing sanyu's pic)


REC: (pointing to a lady) Wo vasudha hai wo sabka khayaal rakhti hein.


Randhir goes to her. She was sitting on a bench quitely. Randhir shows sanyu's pic to her.


R: aunty ap is ladki ko jaanti hein????


Va: haan bete.. Ye to bahut pyari bachi hai. Kabhi kisike saath ladai nahi, jhagda nahi. Bas apne kisi khilone ko pakad k baithi rehti hai.

8 saal pehle use yahaan admit kiya gaya tha. Bas bachon ki tarah bolti thi, uthna baithna sab bachpana tha. Use kuch bhi yaad nahi tha. Fir bhi mujhse bahut ghul mil gayi thi. Doctor bhi uski bimaari ka pataa nahi lagaa paaye.

Tabse wo yahi thi. Bas aj hi ise manipal hospital bheja gaya hai.

R: ap bataa sakti hein ise kisne yahaan admit kiya tha aur usse contact kaise kar sakte hein.


She searches the register. Got sanyu's pic and gives randhir a name and address.


V: bete ek baat puchhun.


R: g aunty zarur. Main apke bete jaisa hi hoon to na.


V: beta, ye tumhari kaun hai. Tum kya lagte ho iske.


R: ye meri wife hai aur main iska husband hun.


V: beta iska achhe se khayaal rakhna.


R: aunty, meri zindagi mujhe dobara mili hai. Ab uske saath rehne ka uska dhyaan rakhne ka koi mauka haath se nai jaane dunga. Ap fikr mat kijiye aunty wo hamesha safe rahegi.


V: tum usse bahut pyar karte ho na.


R: g aunty. Par meri beti se kam. Usne mujhse waada liya hai na. (Smiles)


V: hanesha khus raho beta.


R: ap jaisi maa ka haath sar pe rahe to har beta khus rahega.


He again rushes and reaches at the address. He got down from his car stands infront of the home and knocks the door. There comes a lady out and says "ji ap kaun. Kuch chahiye apko"


R: g, kya main mrs.mahalaxmi rao se mil sakta hun.


MR: g, main hi hun. Boliye.


R: (showing sanyu's pic) ap ise janti hein.


MR: haan. Andar aayiye. Baithiye.


Randhir comes and takes a seat.


MR: ap kuch lenge.

R: nahi. Wo sanyukta.(as he was too impatient to know about her)

MR: wo apki kaun hai.

R: g meri wife.

MR: haan main hi ise hoslital le gayi thi. Bahut buri haalat thi iski bechari jab wo mujhe mili.


Past...


Mrs. Rao was returing to bangalore via delhi when she saw sanyu stuck in between trees. Shecwas senseless. Mrs. Rao asked her driver to help her. The driver took her out of the trees and managed her to make her to lay inside the car.


The took her to nearest hospital but there the doctors could hardly mend her wounds. Just a first aid because that was a very small place.


They then took her bangalore to a good hospital. There she had been operated for few weeks but still they could not do anything about her mental condition. They advised to admit sanyukta a mental asylum where she could get a better treatment. Therefore mrs. Rao admitted her to NIMHAS.


present...


After listening to all these, randhir realized that how much pain has sanyu gone through.
He then thanked mrs. Rao and went away.


To be continue...


NEXT PART : PART 9 : PART 9

Edited by purnima209 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res... I wanted to be the first. now I am going to read it!
OH MY GOSH!!!!!! WHY DID YOU EVEN THINK OF SHELVING THIS FF... It is sooo sooo sooo sweet!👏 Oh My god. I loved the interaction between Sanyukta and Randhir! It was just beautiful. And knowing that Randhir loves her so much! I loved it. It makes me jealous... I want a guy that will love me that much. This is so beautiful... something I didn't mention. The title! It's so apt for this ff. Because Randhir really really loves Sanyu a lot. This is so good. And I like the way he had to go back and find out what had happened! It's going to be a super treat to watch how he will bring her back. And then how she will react to missing the 8 years of her small Pari and then seeing this... hopefully Randhir will think of Sanyu and how she should have another baby. And that mature update will be another treat to read. Oh my gosh... this has beautiful potential. And I loved the fact that you updated just for me! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE... ( i wrote out all these pleases by the way... no copy and paste ... so you understand what I mean.) PLEASE DO NOT DISCONTINUE! And automatically, this will be amazing... and people will read this! DI DI DI DI DI! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE PART 9!!???!!! I will be a stalker now... So excited! 🤗
Edited by kri1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: kri1

res... I wanted to be the first. now I am going to read it!



after readg tell me how it is 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: purnima209



after readg tell me how it is 😊


unres!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#75
Dear, phir se wahi baat??? don't even think to stop it... sorry for the late reply. I am lit busy with other things and missed. this post. I am very very happy for Randhir atlst he got his Sanyu back I liked the way how he said his name is MCP... dat was really amazing... Still Sanyu won't forget to repair the things... that's superb...

Keep writing... jaldi jaldi next part be update karo na... eagerly waiting...

Love,
Mickey

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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: amulbaby06

Dear, phir se wahi baat??? don't even think to stop it... sorry for the late reply. I am lit busy with other things and missed. this post. I am very very happy for Randhir atlst he got his Sanyu back I liked the way how he said his name is MCP... dat was really amazing... Still Sanyu won't forget to repair the things... that's superb...

Keep writing... jaldi jaldi next part be update karo na... eagerly waiting...

Love,
Mickey


ya i will post but after nice response 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: kri1

res... I wanted to be the first. now I am going to read it!

OH MY GOSH!!!!!! WHY DID YOU EVEN THINK OF SHELVING THIS FF... It is sooo sooo sooo sweet!👏 Oh My god. I loved the interaction between Sanyukta and Randhir! It was just beautiful. And knowing that Randhir loves her so much! I loved it. It makes me jealous... I want a guy that will love me that much. This is so beautiful... something I didn't mention. The title! It's so apt for this ff. Because Randhir really really loves Sanyu a lot. This is so good. And I like the way he had to go back and find out what had happened! It's going to be a super treat to watch how he will bring her back. And then how she will react to missing the 8 years of her small Pari and then seeing this... hopefully Randhir will think of Sanyu and how she should have another baby. And that mature update will be another treat to read. Oh my gosh... this has beautiful potential. And I loved the fact that you updated just for me! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE... ( i wrote out all these pleases by the way... no copy and paste ... so you understand what I mean.) PLEASE DO NOT DISCONTINUE! And automatically, this will be amazing... and people will read this! DI DI DI DI DI! WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO UPDATE PART 9!!???!!! I will be a stalker now... So excited! 🤗




k k i wont dont worry and ha i iwll upload nxt part soon yar just i want to see response buddy thats it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: purnima209


ya i will post but after nice response 😉



Also pls pm me... And I completely agree with Kri 😊😊😊 well said.. the interaction between den is simply superb...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: amulbaby06



Also pls pm me... And I completely agree with Kri 😊😊😊 well said.. the interaction between den is simply superb...





k yar i wll agree with u so i will continue it and i wont discontinue it but cmg to pms sry yar i cant because it is diff to send muliple members pms yar so cant really really sry about that but u daily check karo k na i m sry...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oy dont even think to discontinue dis ff it was superb loved sandhirs cute conversation very excited to know what happens in further update so stop disappointing n continue asap n thank u so much for regular updates dear:))

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