Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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segad

@segad

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Posted: 11 years ago

#301

Smell is a very strong trigger of memories. I will need to look at chameli ka tel with respect after reading this update.

Looking forward to the rest

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Yellow.

@Yellow.

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#302

wowww nice story... cant wait for next part

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sman

@sman

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#303

cliff hanger ;-) amazing update..loved it

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neha2013g

@neha2013g

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#304

superb update...

eagerly waiting for the next chapter to see what happens next... 😊

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Pinky.Raizada

@Pinky.Raizada

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#305

Thanks for the PM and Update. Arnav asking what kind of perfume Khushi is wearing, was cute.

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#306

kya yaar
you stopped it so wrong moment
well wrong for us
but right for you naa
but boy did a lot happen or what
yes it did
awww he cares for her so much doesnt he
he doesnt want her to be hurt
awww he had a nightmare
so much so that he hugged khushi
it really shook him
and the aftermath of this hug shook khushi
she is like whats going on
hmmm chameli and chandan
well she intrigues him for sure
of course she does
and dont i just love where this story is going
haiyye kya baat hai
waiting eagerly for the next now
hope khushi will be safe

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#307

Chapter 5:

So the dhak dhak express left the station and caught full pace. :)

Flt some symbolism for the moment shared behind the drapes and the theme and title of your story.

Sheeshmahal's unkempt status is caught well with the lizard.. reader gets an image of the sotyr unfolding..

Loved to read that description for laad governor that we take for granted, and fell in love with it once more. There is much intimacy in her calling him that which she may have never realized.

Thanks IS..will read # 6soon.