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ajeetha

@abivicky86

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#311

this story is becoming like a thriller you have increased our heart beats

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@addicted25

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#312

Aah totally inspired, the dream sequence, losing his mother near the jasmine and then somehow finding his solace again in the jasmine oil that Khushi uses. Totally belivable, then the embrace and Khushi doesnt flee nor flip, but stands her ground understanding that the person in front of her needs her. Arnav on the other hand has growing feelings for this girl, but doesnt realise he is falling deep.

Loved the fact thst he took a psychology class at uni, I wouldnt have put it past him to do something like that in reslity (ok you know what I mean, I'm not living in Arshi land and if I am im not the only one(;)]). I would expect him to do just that self analyse, put it into context of a grown man and learn from it.

we definatly need a longer chapter. Maybe Khushi ends up running with him. Funnily enough in the uk the show is rerunning and they are fleeing from the kidnappers... is this coincidence?.. I thoroughly hope so.frightening if you are so organised! Especially coming from someone like me who sstill needs to do the dishes. Hey ho your stories are too good to pass up.

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Mysticaldivine

@Mysticaldivine

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 11 years ago

#313

IS👏

Jasmine , smell from mother to lover

Jasmine a symbol of love , harmony, a symbol of divine hope, a symbol of amiability ,grace and much much more,

He is embracing her meaning he is embracing all of this and this relation is getting deeper but he doesn't know that or realizing it yet. He needs her for cheerfulness and for serene peace and that lies in the inebriation of Jasmine...meaning Khushi...

Good he took the psychology class , venting out is good and healthy.It helps you to put your past aside.He just need to come out of that childhood trauma and that is only possible by facing the reality.

OK what happened to this END part???

Edited by ArshiHamesha - 11 years ago

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733619

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#314

Nice update. Looking forward to the next part

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phillips_2909

@phillips_2909

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#315

nice framing
just read all the parts
it's just amazing
like to read more
how he save others n specially khushi
how will they fall for each other
eagerly waiting to know

update soon n do pm me please
don't want to miss this

awesome ff

do buddy me

thank you n waiting

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#316

Inspired ... Lovely tactical feel to your writing ... Dappled green leaves ... Birds chirping ... Smells of sandalwood and jasmine ... Desolate grayness ... Lines between dreams, nightmares and reality bring blurred ... Loved ASR's vulnerable state and her confused concerned hesitation reaction to it. I love what you are doing with the story and I definitely love the lace of things ... A cliff hanger ... If you must but I trust you to give us the a worthwhile climax. Love that you said he studied psychology at school ... Mastering his disability ... Exactly as ASR would tackle anything challenging in his last and this is his weakness ... Inspired really really like that your story stays true to the characters we so fell in love with. Looking forward to the next installment. In all honestly ... Very well written piece ... You should be proud not just of the plot ... But also the knitty gritty of story telling ... ⭐️

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#317

Its becoming interesing by the day !!

Love teh increasing nearness between Arshi..

Noe that Shyam is back in action, hope everything goes well..

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#318

Arnav and Khushi are coming closer.

It'll be interesting to see what happens when Shyam enters the scene.

Waiting for the next update.

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aarwen

@aarwen

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#319

Laad governor? Him? He thought 'Nannav' was crazy, but this one takes the cake!

haha I literally burst out laughing when I read this. Sorry for the delay in coming and reading InspiredSoul. Today finally I read all of it in one go.

First I thought the unconscious man was ASR and then you hoodwinked me into thinking it is Dhruv and I spent a couple of apprehensive minutes wondering where the story was heading. But he is ASR and you have carved out his character with so much detail and kept him like the ASR we know. Felt so good to see him as the intelligent, resourceful witty character we love. The minute background details of his harvard life (How you ignored girlfriends..😆 ) and also Khushi's characterization is lovely. Her dhak dhaks breathtaking.. and I am terrified of lizards too so can relate to it all..haha..

The story itself unfolds like a love cum mystery story.. very intriguing.. Thanks a lot for the PM. I will definitely be waiting expectantly for the next update. really enjoyed so far..

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Horizon

@Horizon

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#320

Inspired, maafi maafi..lakhon mafi for the delay in commenting. Did read the chapter few days ago but didn't get to comment form the phone.

How you introduced maa and how it most effortlessly flowed into reality is incredible so is the imagery created. He taking psychology classes is the true highlight of this part. Your understanding and interpretation of the character and its every nuance is stellar.. jasmines and sandal wood would never be the same again..

great narrative style IS.. waiting for the next..

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