Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132

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SarunNArshi

@SarunNArshi

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#291

ufff.aise kaise khatam ho gya.phir nxt update tak intazaar karo.very dificult.:-(
btw ur updte was awesome.and they hugged also.hayeee;-)wish they will soon hug each other wen they r completely conscious and willing:-)

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anjs

@anjs

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#292

hi

thanks for updating...ur story is very involving n m enjoying reading the updates a lot...

arnav's nightmare was so vivid...and him associating khushi's smell with his mother's, shows y khushi has become so close to him n y he cares for her... u tried to fit it all in, just like a puzzle, n it actually fits so well...obviously a simple girl like khushi who works hard to eke out some money will not be so vain to splurge money on perfume, even the local, low quality ones, as those arent imp for her family, hence the smell comes from the oil n the agarbatti... i loved this logic n it fits really well with her character...

also loved arnav's study of human psychology, that shows how he is so good into reading humans...also this is how i always visioned the real ASR to be, the one who is so haunted by his past n the need to do well in his business that he has no time for girlfriends n casual flings...

wished the serial guys had followed ur narration... they ruined the character, by giving him a long list of ex-gf's n then later getting sheetal into the picture..negating all that they themself had painstakingly built...

m so eager to read the next chapter...update soon

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indi52

@indi52

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#293

inspired soul,

finally came to read... and loved what i did... the poems were beautiful, that dhruv becoming asr... smooth. lovely story... something tender and so intense... and the man is drugged, weak, almost bed ridden and she is the only one with whom he has any real contact... very very nice. the lizard must have had fun... the curtain canoodle aaah nice.

very interesting plot and yes, dhruv is a meaningful addition... love the setting being the same as we know, but the story told differently.

thanks for pms...

look forward to the next chapter.

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ranogill

@ranogill

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#294

so arnav singh raizada got closer to khushi..story really picking up ...wonderful

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tracy1191

@tracy1191

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#295

woww just found this... this is really interesting.. like the way the story is progressing.. and specially that both the mystery part and the arnav-khushi part are being given equal importance and are interwoven very nicely..

awesome work😊😊

also can you pm me links of any other stories that you have written..

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Ipoona

@Ipoona

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#296

Inspired ... Loved it ... Reserving ... Will be back ... Busy as can be. ..

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#297

That was beautiful update...

Arnav's childhood memories are so beautiful and loved the kid Arnav very much...

Arnav's night mares are too painful but cant help as those are hunting him since his was child...

Glad to know that he can find solace and peace and calm in Kushi's presence... Poor Arnav, he is confused with his feelings on Kushi and those are not helping him...

Poor Soul Kushi, she dont know what she needs to do when the time Arnav hugs her... She is too naive, beautiful and kind hearted gilr...

How can you end the update such a crucial point??? cant wait to read next update

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cute_sarun

@cute_sarun

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#298

Awesome update!! Arnav is falling for khushi she reminds him of his mother

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nishu_shorna

@nishu_shorna

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#299

Arrrgghh... Aise end kardiya... Ab wait kaise karoon... It's too thrilling & exciting to wait patiently... Do continue soon plz... Loved the update... How he connected Khushi & his mother... It's wonderfully written... Waiting to read more... All the best for Khushi...