Submerged! - ArShi FF:New note P.No 132 - Page 29

Originally posted by: ArshiHamesha

IS👏

Great update and yes very late but understandable.🤗

Love the lizard scene and Khushi's squirming under his body attack ..poor heart of hers was racing like maniac.

OK I know you didn't think of that but it suits so well to your story.

LIZARD...an animal who has the ability to break off their tails to escape predators. This is one of the trait of this animal.Second,it is associated with dreams ...both work in your story.

Third,Lizard is your power animal, heed your own intuition before anyone else's.

Should I say that is brilliant touch which came unintentionally but a reader like me seeing beyond with it.

I can see her sankiness is grabbing his heart.

Akash and Arnav's convo was really nice.can't wait for the plan he just came up with

Thnx for the PM😊

Originally posted by: ranogill

wonderful that arnav was able to make contact with akash...but want to know about his plan

Originally posted by: varsha2KD

Amazing update...

I am glad Arnav was able to contact Akash...

So wana know what is the plan... 😃

Waiting for the next update...

Super update.
The way you described Khushi's terror at the sight of the lizard against the backdrop of the approaching footsteps was brilliant; not revealing whose the footsteps were was even more brillaint as it built up the suspense for the readers and the characters in the story alike.
What a relief, Arnav managed to make the call and chalk a clever plan. Looking forward to the next update.

Thankfully Arnav was able to call Aakash and make plans to catch Shyam.

When i am searching for Arshi's stories, i came to know about your OS: Bairi Piya...Bada Bedardi...