You've Fallen - KriYaansh and SwaRon FF *temporarily paused*

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Jyoti

@jyoti_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

SORRY... for being soo late.. <(*.*)>
finally read it.. Beautifull start..
loved it.. d way u described his life.. n d problem he's facing.. n kriya as his neighbour my desi girl in chuddidar ahhaaa.. i can imagine dat.. my adorable doll 😳

U r amazing writter... seriously 👏

Intresting n a new concept ..keep it up.. update it soon.. n pm me i ll commnt after my xams pakka :-) ❤️ 👏

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anjali

@anjali22

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome start
Update next part soon

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luv_arsha

@luv_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

This is awesome
Update soon

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shakz_KR

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Awesum
Plzz do update soon
Waiting

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alex754

@alex754

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Wow u have just fallen in love with this story
Sooo cute
Kriyaa is so adorable
I loved the part where rey says to her that he is not following her and next part was hilarious
Thanks for pm
Pls update soon

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ANMOL

@Hp_TvD_mAnIc

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

aswom update dear ...

its mindblowing

yes its difficult to live without parents...

nd sharon helps swayam...

update soon

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

wowwiee a new FF😊

amazingg start👏

continue soonish😉

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trishika rajput

@trishikarajput0

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Nice start...

kria was really nice to rey... I thought she will be nervous... I want to know kria's point of view also... as of now with rey's point of view...I can only say that he some what like her... kria will be helping him...good start of their love story

thanku for pm

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

finally both have some how convenience their parents and also agreed and they success
in grab it... and finally both swayan and sharon have landed in india ... and are neighour
and both are new to this city mumbai and are help it out... fabulous and amazing...
do continue soon and pm me