You've Fallen - KriYaansh and SwaRon FF *temporarily paused*

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

finally both have some how convenience their parents and also agreed and they success
in grab it... and finally both rey and kriya have landed in india ... and are neighour
and both are new to this city mumbai and are help it out... fabulous and amazing...
do continue soon and pm me

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raina

@--RAINA--

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

amazing start
lykd it
do update soon

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shreya

@luvuKR

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Dat ws so AWSUM...superb..its an ahmazng start...beautiful update
Update soon 👏
Thnx fr d pm

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-Monika-

@-Monika-

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Amazing start...

lovely..

well written...

loved it..

continue soon..

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Sanchita Naha

@Sanchita_14

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

😃 omg that was damm Qute one
its really diffrent loved it
Awesome
Wana readit more loved it
Thank uuu sommuuuccchh

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anjali

@alisha1810

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#16

wow...its amazing..
beautifully written...really liked it 😊

i love kriyaansh 😆
update sooon

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Ramya sree

@ramya.reddy

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#17

res..

unress..

waahh awesome update loved ittt

continue soonnn

hayteee poor reyy usko khana bannana bhi nahi aata hehehehehe

okkk they way u explainedd reys pov was fab i mean his struggle to come to mumbaiii and finaalyy he acheivedd ittt

and hehehehe he came to mumbaiii and thenn kr meett humare rey kria ko startmeing he dekhthe reh gaya and his dad teasinggg hehehehe andd hiss 1st day of clg nicee poor himmm he struggling a lot to adjust in mumbaiii

andd baba reyy huhhh he misunderstsnd kria thatt kriaa must be thinking rey was following herrr andd apne face pe bol diya pagal ladkaaa

andd kria told tie ur lacee tab uske face dekhna layak tha buwaahhh and they finallyy speak to each other and went fr lunchhh and rey ko hath se khana nahin aata poor himmm

andd kria is so sweet she said she will help him to settle his apartmenttt

hayeee i loved this updatee

continue soonnn

eagerly waitingg

Edited by ramya.reddy - 11 years ago

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Manahil

@...Mallu...

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Awesome Part (: Lovely work Song Is perfect You chose (:
Thank you for pm..

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David

@arshafan94

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Wow awesome.
i loved it.
i loved the similarities they share and the dad's teasing part
excited to see them becoming friends and hopefully lovers
pls continue soon

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Akanksha

@Effacious

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#20

aawww this was lovely Arya :D

It was cute.. :D

loved how u showed Rey's not so easy new beginning in mumbai... and Kriya. similar yet differnt to him...

she doesnt seem to be a baatcutter in this one...hehehe...

cute beginning...

waiting for furthur chapters!!! :D