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Abyan

@Abyan

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#441

The whole update was mind blowing.. loved it ... I enjoyed the whole jungle scene.. especially their heated exchange of dialogues... Thoroughly enjoyed this awesome update... hats off to you for taking this effort! It was such a wonderful chapter... just one word Disha.. You are Absolutely a brilliantly written🥳...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#442

did i mention about the sexual tension in the car after their tryst in the forest

guess i didnt

good lord poor arnav

there is only so much control he has right

and it wasnt helping matters that khushi was making it worse

no wonder she tried to stay away

also not go back with him

but not her day of course

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headtotoe

@headtotoe

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#443

Hey Disha !!!

Kudos for your debut in the world of fiction though your work didnt look like a work of a debutant !!! It was fabulous...

Oh the wanton thoughts... neither they left Arnav nor me... 😉

So Arnav screwed up long back with Khushi !!! No wonder she shrinks in a cocoon when around him and the nerve of the man that he is objecting on Khushi being friendly to others...

Arnav not reacting on their smuggler fiasco is just because he cant tell people aroung about this confidential thing ya iske peeche kush gehri soch hai ??? Ya woh bheegi Khushi ko dekh ke baki sab bhool gaya??? 😆

Super update !!

Thanks for the PM...

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Nishi

@Ni_singh

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#444

Fabulous update. Very well written.

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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#445

That was really good chapter. Please keep on writing you guys.

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aarrsshhii

@aarrsshhii

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#446

Wow... nice chapter. ..
loved the way you wrote it. .. once bitten twice shy...I dont think khushi will lay open her heart that easily again...
and it wasn't a good thing that arnav did either...
waiting for the next chapter :-)

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1chilly

@1chilly

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: sonakshimehta29
Lovely update...
Drr desires for each other is justified..aftrall who can redist a wet arnav..a wet khushi..having desires bubbled up in each other!!

They r so broken from within dat nly dey both can heal each others wound by loving n caring each!!
😃 😳

👍🏼 For the comment!

Loved it.

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CrazyArshiFan

@CrazyArshiFan

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#448

Very, Very interesting...

Very original story , can't wait to read the rest...

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Smita Gogoi

@Gogoismita

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#449

Jst started reading it lovely one... :)

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bkamber

@bkamber

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#450

This is what came to mind as soon as I read the chapter and flashback to college days!

The woods are lovely, dark and deep,

But I have promises to keep,

And miles to go before I sleep...

I see these words as Arnav's mindset when in college. He had a lot going on in his life and was not ready for a relationship. The way he broke it off with Khushi could be debated till kingdom come, but he did it the only way he saw fit!!

Khushi, heartbroken walked away keeping her self respect which is not easy to do as well...kudos to her!!!

So, the heads called it off, but the hearts were left on stand by!!!

The tensions of the past and present environment...what will happen??? Only the future will tell!!

I do hope Arnav and Khushi talk it out...sooner not later!!!