The Last Place On Earth/Arshi SS/ LINK thread 2 on Pg 148 - Page 46

I knew this would be a terrific read and that it certainly is.


Anan- your start was super, the decription of the forests and the dramatic meeting at the end left us fired up wondering how they knew each other.

Anu, your focus on the minutiea, as ever, created such a poignant picture of their unrealised desire for each other along with the building up of the suspense about the evil goings on in the jungle.

And Disha- I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw your name, but boy you can write girl. Loved your chapter where you build up on the details of the past that the other two had created. Well done!

Shyam is turning out to be as creepy as the creatures that slither about the floor of the jungle.

And everyone, loved the way you all evoked the mystery and majesty of the jungles- the real one and the one of Arnav and Khsuhi's past which has both the majesty and the mystery of the real! Loved how you all created the jungle itself as another character in the story.

Bring it on, the rest of you!😃

Dishaaa, this was so well written. I really hope you continue writing.

Its a different universe for them...once again together in a place where they care...i doubt they can keep away from each other for long...looking forward to the updates...

Loved the chapter. This chapter had bit of their past history present desires . Hard to believe it's from first time writer. Awesome job Disha. Thx.

Dear Authors/Collaborators
I have been a silent reader of the last three chapters and I have been completely caught up with your plot and characters.

First of all - Kudos to all of you for choosing this very unique setting for your story - Indian Forestry - a forgotten landscape in our post modern psyche..:) .. and your narrative reveals your efforts at your homework and research on this subject... :)

Second - I am impressed with your writing styles - in fact what I find amazing is that while you have each chapter authored by a different person, the narrative style and flow have not changed.. The consistency in voice is quite astounding.. truly worthy of compliments.

Third - Your updates are amazingly frequent.. and for that I thank you. Often, as a reader, I find myself having to reread previous chapters to remind myself of the story thus far and my own place to keep abreast of the story.. your frequent updates keep me interested and focused!

I like your Khushi.. she is bold.. unafraid in her pursuits - of both bad guys and her desire for Arnav.. :) I am not fully acquainted with your Arnav yet.. and I wait for you to lead me through this introduction. :)

What a great collaborative project!
--Mirabell

Nice update!!

Wow lovely story, both of them are
stubborn. The feeling years ago is still
there, Khushi's ego has been bruised.
She's proud I like her. 👏 ⭐️

Nice update... finally we know their history from back in college...

Fabulous update...

Loved the update are you sure it's your first time witting it ;)