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abida406

@abida406

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Posted: 11 years ago

#181

Amazing Update.😊 I want more...😆

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sheena29

@sheena29

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#182

The moment the Red sari and the bangles appeared I caught my breath knowing that it was time for some ahem ahem action but Sandhya, Arnav being just an angry witness of the clinch was not done. 😭

I still have hopes though since the diwali night is still young and once Nandu is sent out of the picture these two can have a passionate outburst or two. Don't just send him in rage somewhere...😃

And is this the first time that Khushi is comparing the kisses or has she indulged in this earlier? Must have in the beginning of the physical proximity of this relationship but then five years down the line standing under his roof, kissing her fiance, she remembers his kisses...

You've not kissed your fiance for a few days and she's shying away from PDA and you immediately have doubts on her commitment?? Makes me curious on the dynamics of the relationship. This is the first time an interaction between them has been introduced and leaves me confused on where they stand.

Was Arnav so forgiving earlier or the years of loneliness and guilt have turned him so? Has this period of 5 years brought a personality change in him that his family has not been able to see. Payal has not even seen his room in all the years that she has been married to his brother. He has been severely shunned by his family and still he brings peace to their mind in a moment relieving them of their guilt while he himself still has not got any succour from any one. This is not a pity party for Arnav but except for the one stupid decision that he has taken he is far better human being than the people around him.

I found the update to very well paced with lot of detailing. It starts at languorous pace and then picks up to explode at the end. 😃

Looking forward to the next update.. Can wednesdays come any sooner.😃

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roshaan

@roshaan

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#183

awesum update whol thing looks soo mess up n tangle witn each othet dono how will arshi going to cum out with this maze after this super excited end of this chp wait for nxt chp is really longgg

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sskaug25

@sskaug25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#184

It was a fantastic update. Loved the conversation between Arnav and Payal. It was so sweet. Loved Payal khushi convo also. All know that both Arnav and khushi love each other. Anjali, Payal and Ana all want to help them out. Ya we know that as you said it will take time. But still want them to be together. Out of all the people Arnav witnessed the kissing scene of NK and khushi. Feeling sad for Arnav . Waiting to know what will be his next step. Hope NK find out the past of khushi soon. NK will get hurt. Hope he will get a true life partner. It was a wonderful update. Thanks for the pm dear.

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Sanghamitra Roy

@Smrikta992

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#185

Oh shit..
Arnav saw them kissing each other..
Oh god!
Hope arnav wont hurt himself..
Arnav is hurting badly..
Plz show khushi why he broke her heart..
M realy very sad for arnav..
Give some love to him, he is suffering so long..
Thnks for pm..

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mysticmanthri

@mysticmanthri

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Posted: 11 years ago

#186

i am busy..seriously busy but couldn't help myself read and postsomething here...

you write beautifully i truly understand the pace and direction of the story...please dont worry about that.

have a great day and give us a little surprise early update:)

how much i read it doesnt quench ,,,,😉

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rainyday3000

@rainyday3000

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#187

Wow what an update...love the start where payal was examining Arnav...the way the she apologized to Arnav was to sweet and Arnav was such a darling to make payal comfortable...loved payal n khushi's conversation...Arnav n khushi are so readable in terms of their feelings...payal is right on the money...loved Anjali trying to put sense into Arnav...NK is a sweetheart he really is into khushi...for some reason I could not digest NK n khushi's kiss...I know Arnav was wrong to break up with khushi but I can't see khushi with anyone else but Arnav...Arnav as witnessed a kiss of khushi with NK n obviously he is not happy...I wonder if he will show his reaction n feelings to khushi...sandhya u don't know how slow the week has gone for me who was eager to read your update...I hope this week goes by quick coz I can't wait to read more!!! :)

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Nandz

@Nandz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#188

Wow!!! So interesting!!! The last part of the chapter simply stole the show!

But i will start from the beginning! I know i have always disagreed with you when it comes to family vs friend debate, but i also believe in letting bygones be bygones n trying to improve relations with your loved ones. Therefore in this context m glad that payal n arnav sort of reached a truce and decided to put their ugly past behind them, given the bone of contention has already moved on and quite ahead in life! Or so it seems!!

It was also nice to see khushi apologising to payal as she thgt she had hurt her! N it was more heartening to see all the three friends dressing up n decking each other up like old times!!

Now coming to the person who is fast becoming the cause of everyone's uneasiness! Nandu guy! Firstly i really had my suspicions regarding him being khushi's finance! That being set aside i dont know what to feel for him now! I know that he is going to have a heartbreak even though khushi seems pretty committed to make this work! I mean she is committed to her commitment to him, n here this commitment has a negative connotation to it! I mean something you do not because you want to but you have too!! N i dont think any person should be subjected to this! Khushi dear if you cant give you 100 percent to him then set him free! Y making his life miserable too! Her reluctance to kiss and stiffening at his proximity are proof enough of her not being sure! Please NK read between the lines and save yourself from the heartburn!!

And sandhya the end was so dhamakedaar! Arnav seeing khushi kissing someone else! Finally the kiss has set the ball rolling! Will now arnav get the shock of his life and the much needed slap to take him out of trance he had been for long or again he will feel he desrved it and will walk off!!

Oh m so excited to read what happens next! This has become so so so interesting! M so glad you make khushi kiss nandu!!!

Waiting to read what happens next, what dhamaka we will get in the next update!

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Monalisaa

@Monalisaa

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#189

Omg Sandy ah wat an update. I know I have said that before but this update has everything. Am glad that Payal n Arnav have reconcile n so is Khushi ' s apology to Payal. Anjali 's outburst over Arnav thought he deserves it my heart still goes out to him, maybe cause I love him more than Khushi.

I know Nk is her fiance, but to read abt them making out n Arnav watching it made me angry n my heart crushed just like Arnav glass did.

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smile1412

@smile1412

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#190

Hey S,, I just landed in India an hour ago ... N I checked for the update as soon as I could! Awesome girl... U keep breaking my heart n I keep ranting... Hehe...Poor Arnv! I guess this jolt was necessary to bring the competitive side of him to the fore and fight for his love ... N not hand over her on a platter!!! Phew... Tired... I guess, will continue my ranting once I read ur teaser 😉

By the way... Loved the talk between Payal n Arnav - it was about time n glad that Khushi was the catalyst!!

Edited by smile1412 - 11 years ago