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Amita2014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#201

That was a wonderful update!!!!!!!
Glad Payal and Arnav are amicable now..and Akash in this story is such a sweet heart...
Feel so sad for Arnav..the kiss must have shattered him...
Just waiting for Kushi and Arnav to come together...

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arshisimple

@arshisimple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#202

Wonderful update 😊

After last part, I was very sad the way Payal behaved with Khushi and I thought it was payal's fault. But after reading conversation between Arnav and Payal and Khushi and Payal, I realized it was nobody's fault. The situation was complicated. But I am glad that everyone has called a truce.

Now to Arnav, why is he doing this? I am not sure but the fact is NK's heart will be broken and I am feeling 😳😉. Sorry can't help it, biased when Arhi around 😊

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lakraj80

@lakraj80

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Posted: 11 years ago

#203

Hey sandhya, not fair yaar, cliff hanger!! Please don't torture us poor readers like this! How am I going to wait till the next update after a mind blowing update!!! It was picture perfect, although I did not like NK kissing khushi I totally understand its required to give arnav the push! I loved the convo btw Payal and akash! It was funny! Thanks for the pm.

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1chilly

@1chilly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#204

Originally posted by: sman
one more thought came into my mind during a meeting :-) I guess this will lead to a argument between Arnav and Kushi and Kushi will tell everything that happened in last 5 years..

Good point!

And we get back to the prologue.

Sandy, when will you reveal the identity of the woman in the prologue?

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Arnima

@Eternalallure

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Posted: 11 years ago

#205

I don't know what to say anymore, S. Yes, you are right- I am frustrated and angry. But my frustration and anger stem from the protagonists' stubbornness and denials, egos and self- righteousness.

Doesn't remembering someone else's passionate kisses while kissing your own fiance call for some deep introspection? Isn't this the right time- when you are unwilling to be physically intimate with your betrothed and instead craving someone else- to finally step back and stop deluding yourself? What Khushi is doing is morally wrong and completely unfair to NK, for I believe that emotional infidelity and anything less than absolute surrender to your partner is just as ethically wrong as physical unfaithfulness and adultery. Why add the guilt of unfairly stringing him along to her already growing pile of regrets? At this juncture, she owes NK to atleast come clean about her past and tell him about her conflicting emotions and confusing thoughts.

And Arnav? If he really thought that he could sit back and watch Khushi becoming someone else's, he was clearly overestimating his sacrificing abilities. Life is a bitch- no one would know that better than him. You have to fight every step of the way for your own happiness. It's about time he stopped being a selfless sacrificing saint and fought for his only love. However unworthy and undeserving of her he thinks himself to be. Because for me, love is a subjective concept with many facets. It need not always be positive or selfless. It could be just as mean and selfish and manipulative too. After all Cathy and Heathcliff's love is just as passionate and beautiful as Romeo and Juliet's right?

As for Payal and Ana- they still have to work some more to fully redeem themselves in my eyes. Maybe if they did something to drum some sense in those two, I would be more than happy to extend my forgiveness (Yeah I am vain, I know😆).

Kudos to your stellar writing for making us experience such myriad of emotions- from excitement to frustration to anger to impatience. Isn't it what a good story does? Make you feel.

Waiting for the next Wednesday...it is so far away...😭

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sman

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Posted: 11 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: 1chilly

Good point!

And we get back to the prologue.

Sandy, when will you reveal the identity of the woman in the prologue?

Charu...meri dil ki baat cheenli tumne..I was even thinking Kushi saying "do u know what i went thru for not taking that damn table"..!! all our thoughts go back to that woman in prologue..!! Now that it is not Garima - Payal, more probablity is that it is Kushi even i had a image of Arnav getting their kid from orphanage and holding it..i imagined a boy as they already have a girl at home :-)

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@addicted25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#207

Aw lovely update Sandhya. FIRST FINALLY Akaash snd Payal get some action! I've read so many FF over the last few months, but this has been the only one where it was their scene. Good for them, and thank you, these two characters deserve to be up there with the main two. Payal , no longer the bashful little lady, but a mature confident woman. Similarly Akash funny man of action.

Ok the main two. Khushi, obviously she has kissed NK before, otherwise he wouldn't have been so confident she would go along with it. For a minute I thought that NK was going to pull the terrace scene and grab her, and Arnav comes to her rescue... 😔. I love the fact that nanni gave the bangles to Khushi, and then Anu gave the earrings. Feel sorry for Arnav, he admitted his love to Anjali, but thinks its too late now. You must clear the scene about the baby... I'm on tenterhooks, please dont let if have been a one off with Arnav... 😔

Thanks for the pm, and effort of writing. Muuwh

Edited by addicted25 - 11 years ago

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Sutapa Sarbabhom

@sutapasarbabhom

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Posted: 11 years ago

#208

Lovly updt sory sandhya i enjy the chap but cant tolrate aother man with khushi last part mk me sad cant c arnav so heart broken sry if i hurt u

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#209

This is awesome. To read almost 4-5 chapters in one go. Ha ! The stories pace is perfect. Not so fast not so slow. Though the length is so small. Just kidding. But it ain't that long too.

This dialogue from 39th chapter ( I guess) took me back to HP. "Spoke like a true business women." Similar to this one,

"Spoke like a true politician."-Voldemort. ( I am a crazy HP fan. So ignore this.)

The end scene is a cliff-hanger. I don't know but this scene has so many resemblance to the MU terrace scene between Khushi-Arnav-Shyam.

I am hoping you update this soon.

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Preethi

@blackdove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#210

Oh GOD. I just re-read the prologue again.( I have never done that.)

Why do i have the feeling that Khushi is that lady and the baby is hers. The descriptions suit hers and the brown eyes tells us the baby is related to Arnav.

Could clear the doubt????

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