Fan Fic (after break- up cont.) - Page 8

Originally posted by: Kaj!

Hey Deepey, tusi great ho. Kya likha hai tumne. Wah Wah!!!👏

Thanku ji😊

i have waiting since yesterday for u to continue...........just way toooooooo romantic........why is it going to end😭..........atleast add alot of kripa angad romance scenes before finishing it. it will help us to get through the tsunami we are seeing on tv......really good work

good job deepey. I am looking forward to the surprise.

Originally posted by: bips

i have waiting since yesterday for u to continue...........just way toooooooo romantic........why is it going to end😭..........atleast add alot of kripa angad romance scenes before finishing it. it will help us to get through the tsunami we are seeing on tv......really good work

awwwww sorry bips, I'll try to make it as long as possible ok. Thanks u all for reading my story and loving it soo much.🤗 A big hug to u all filled wid a lot of love😊

wow....i like ur story.......i can't wait for next part....

~sweta~

Originally posted by: happe

Deepey, I loved it. Deepey Production is providing us a great serial. Keep it up. I might stop watching Balaji Production. 😆

Hey happe lets stop wasting all of our money and brains on going to Universities and trying to be attorneys. Lets start our own production house yaar, we can include all of our talented writers on this forum. I bet u we're gonna run Ekta outta business.😆

it is a very lovely story

thanks

Sorry guys but 4 some reason my computer was being really weird on me, but finally here it is.

PART-12

Angad goes to work and for once actually looks forward to coming back home. Kripa on the other hand, is at home, making food for Angad. Angad comes home and yells in the typical hubby style, "honey I'm home" Kripa comes, gives him a hug and a kiss.

K: "I missed u"

A: "I missed u 2 baby"

K: "I made ur favorite food today. I spent like 3 hours in the kitchen just 4 u so u better appreciate it."

A: "wat? Kripa wat's wrong wid u? U should take care of urself. From now on no cooking, no working. Ur gonna rest, rest, and rest. That's ur work from now on. Baby please, I don't want anything to happen to u or our baby."

K (whining) : " Noooo I don't like resting that's hella boring, and don't worry about me. I know how to take care of myself."

A: "ok lets eat first and then I'm gonna give u the surprise ok."

K: "Angad hurry up na. I can't wait anymore."

A: "sorry, but ur gonna have to."

They eat together and Angad gives her a beautiful lehnga to wear.

K: "was this the surprise"

A: "no just wear it, or do u need help wid that coz I'm free."

Kripa hits him and goes to change. She comes out and Angad is smiling looking at her beautiful face, then a ties a scarf around her eyes. Takes her by the hand and makes her sit in the car.

K: "Angad, wat r u doing. Tell me na. Please Jaldiii. Don't test my patience."

A: "ok, meri jaan just wait for a little while…………….. here v are"

He stops the car, takes her outside and takes off the scarf from her eyes. Kripa is surprised to be at a temple. She looks at Angad and says, "wats going on Angad"

Angad takes her hand and they go inside. Angad thanks god and says, sorry for not trusting you. He looks at Kripa and very sweetly says, "Kripa today u r gonna be legally, technically, religiously, truly, sacredly, everythinglly mines, and only mines. Today infront of god I'm gonna make u mine's, we're gonna belong to each other 4 ever, so that the world will know."

Kripa gets tears in her eyes hugs him and says, "I love u sooooooooo much."

Angad holds her hand and they get married.

They go home and Angad asks kripa, "sooo, baby where do u wanna go 4 our honeymoon."

K: "wat u still need a honeymoon"

A: "ofcourse"

He hugs her from behind and says, "actually if I think about it, everyday that I spend wid u is like a honeymoon."

Kripa smiles and says, "u sure know how to win ladies hearts."

A: "ofcourse, I've been practicing for soo many years"

Kripa hits him and says I don't wanna talk to u anymore.

She goes in her room and locks the door.

Angad thins Gawd wat have I done now, I'm gonna have to make it up.

He knocks on her door and says "I'm sorry baby, please forgive me."

No answer.

Then he thinks of a plan.

He cooks dinner for her and decorates the whole living roon, with big letters saying I'm soor, and I love u. Then he knocks on her door and says, "ok then Kripa, I'm leaving I have better things to do then wait for u."

Kripa gets mad hearing this, opens the door and says, "oh so ur bored of me now." She then looks around her and sees the room, she smiles. Angad gets on his knees, hold his eyes ears and says, "I'm sorry baby, will u please forgive me. I promise aisi galti phir kabhi nahi hogi." Kripa smiles livingly, also gets on her knees and hugs him tightly and says, "please don't ever say that ur leaving me or I'll die." Angad holds her face and kisses her softly, and says, "don't worry even if u die I'm gonna be right behind u, I'm not gonna leave u alone. I'm gonna follow u up to heaven" Kripa (jokingly), "who told u that u were gonna go to heaven."

A: "I'm not but I'm sur u r, and I'm ur shadow. I'm gonna be wid u where ever u go."

They both snile and Kripa says, "Ur the sweetest person ever" and kisses him again.

They stay in California for a few more weeks loving each other more than ever, and Angad gets all his work done and they decide to go back to Mumbai. Kripa is a bit scared of the idea but Angad finally convinces her. They fly back to Mumbai. Angad takes Kripa to his house, and all are shocked to see Kripa again, hand in hand with Angad, wearing a mangalsutra, and sindoor.

Naina (shocked): wat is all this

Angad: Hey, mom how r u? did u miss me?

Naina: wat the hell is going on here

Angad: "oh sorry mom, I forgot to introduce my wife to u. Meet Kripa , my wife and the mother to my hone wala baby. Oh and Kripa this is my mommy."

Nanina is changing colors: "Shut the hell up. Do u even know wat ur saying"

A: "ofcourse I do, and let me make one thing clear, Kripa is my wife and u can't do nothing about it. Ok"

Naina: "She is not ur wife and the baby that she is carrying is definitely not ur's, pata nahi kis ka paap hamare pet thop rahi hai."

Kripa gets tears in her eyes and runs outside.

Angad yells, "MOM, enough ok I don't wanna here one word outta u"

He runs behind Kripa and holds her by the arm.

A: "I'm really sorry Kripa"

K: "I told u Angad that they will never be able to except me as their bahu. I won't be able to take it every day. Please Angad lets go from here."

A: "nahi Kripa this is my house and u r my wife. You r gonna stay here if anybody has a problem wid it they're welcome to leave. Please baby."

He holds her hand and takes her inside, he takes her straight up to her room, opens his arms and says welcome to my house, my room and my heart.

Kripa runs into his arms and says, "Wow r u sure u have enough room in ur heart to fit me."

Angad: "ofcourse"

They both smile.

Downstairs Naina is already making plans to separate the two love birds.

Tomorrow : Naina poison's Angad's mind against Kripa and proves to him with fake medical reports that the baby is not angads"

Tadam Tadam Tadam

DEEPEY PRODUCTIONS

Hey guys to continue the story I'm gonna bring the twist mentioned above in the story ok. Don't hate me, just trying to entertain u people. Sowwwy.

Deepey sweetie, thanx for bringing a smile on my face. I have been low and wanna thank you for bumping my mood up.

Originally posted by: happe

Deepey sweetie, thanx for bringing a smile on my face. I have been low and wanna thank you for bumping my mood up.

Awww happy I'm glad I made u smile. Hey ur happe, so don't forget to always be happy. Ok and don't take life too seriously yaar. We all have our ups and downs. So don't forget to smile😃