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Posted: 20 years ago
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I didn't want to keep u guys waiting so here goes the next part, with lots of love.😊

PART-10

He turns her around and gets even a bigger shock to see that its Kripa. He gets tears of joy and pain in his eyes. He holds her and touches her to see if it's her for real or if its just his imagination. He then realizes that she is unconscious, so he picks her up and takes her to the hospital. The doctor does a check up. Angad is really worried and asks: "will she be okay doctor" Doctor: "We really can't say anything as she is pregnant and her baby could've been affected." Angad shocked "Kripa is pregnant" The doctor then says, "She is really week, but she's gonna be ok. The accident didn't effect her at all, we think that she's under a lot of stress and depression. R u her husband.?" Angad is hesitant, yet answers "yes." The doctor says, "I advise you to keep her happy, and not cause her any sadness. Try to bring a smile on her face ok." The doctor pats Angad's back, smiles and leaves. Angad is trying to understand all the things that have happened in the past few hours. He thinks Kripa is pregnant, but is this baby mine's. Ofcourse it is angad. How can u even think like that. But I should ask Kripa personally. Then he thinks Kripa how could u bear this all alone. I don't care wat u say but I can't leave u now. My life depends on it, or else I will die. He goes to see her. He sits next to her bed, she opens her eyes, looks at him and smiles. She says, "angad, you don't even leave me alone in my thoughts." She then touches him and thinks is thins Angad 4 reals. The doctor comes in the and says, "Mr. Khanna u can take ur wife home now, she is perfectly alright." He leaves and Kripa is surprised, She gets up and says, "Angad tum? What r u doing here??" Angad doesn't say anything, hold her hand and touches her stomach, crying. Kripa also starts to cry and Angad asks her "why did u leve me ha, tell me was there anything wrong in me. Or my love? Ha wat else did u wanted? I could've given my life 4 u dam it, if u had just asked once. Kripa I want an answer." Kripa looks at him with tears flowing down her eyes and says "I'm sorry Angad, but I had my reasons." Angad gets mad, and says "ok, u had ur reasons but look into my eyes and say that u don't love, say it." Kripa doesn't say anything. A: "Kripa u know that u love me, I know that u love me. Then wat is the f***** problem, ha tell me." He holds her by the shoulders and shakes her. Kripa says " I do love u angad, but please don't ask me why I left u. please" Angad looks at her pleading face and hugs her tight. He then kisses her stomach and says "I don't give a damn wat u say. I'm not leaving u or my baby alone again. Never. Kripa baby please try to understand I can't live over there where u had left me. It's like hell for me. You don't know how I lived for a whole month without you. Baby please don't ever leave me again." Kripa doesn't know wat to do or say, her heart is filled with confusion and love. She wants Angad to be with her forever, but she also doesn't want Mishti to destroy Angad. Kripa asks Angad "How long r u here for Angad."

A: "I was here for a month, but now I'm gonna be here 4ever with u, I ain't going back now without you."

K: "Angad why r u so ziddi, please listen to me."

Before Kripa can say anything else, Angad puts his finger on her lips and says, "I don't wanna hear one word outta you. Alright. We're going home. Where do u live by the way."

He helps Kripa get out of the bed and takes her to the car, she is still hella week. Angad says, "wat have u done to urself, didn't u eat? I don't know how u did it, but u got even skinnier than u already were. You better start drinking and eating properly. You also have to worry about our little kiddo that's in your stomach right now ok." He looks at Kripa, smiles and kisses her on the cheek. Angad is acting like nothing ever happened and they were together the whole time. Kripa is still confused.

Tomorrow : Kripa tells Angad about why she left him, and Angad's reaction, and his decision.

Tadam Tadam Tadam

DEEPEY PRODUCTIONS

Take care and enjoy. Love u all😊

Edited by deepey - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#62
i really wish that this was the real story of kyph....it would have been just unbelievable on the screen.....wow......keep writing 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Deepey, I loved it. Deepey Production is providing us a great serial. Keep it up. I might stop watching Balaji Production. 😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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bips I really agree wid u...if dis was da real story of kyph......then..............n deepey plz continue......yr story is mindblowing...keep it up......
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanks Deeps, thats very nice and extremely entertaining..👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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yes i agree tooo.....i really wish that this was the real story of kyph...plz keep wrting....i just love it ur story.......

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey Deepey, tusi great ho. Kya likha hai tumne. Wah Wah!!!👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#68

hey u r gr8 deepty tell me when ur next part will b posted i cant wait any longer

plz b fast in posting

lots of love

esha

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Posted: 20 years ago
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quite good uptill now and yea do continue it was quite good and you have done a great job
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Posted: 20 years ago
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PART-11

Angad looks at Kripa and sees that she is really bothered about something. He remembers the doctor advising him to keep Kripa happy. They're driving to Kripa's apartment

A: "Baby wat's wrong wid u? why don't u talk to me.?"

K: "Nothing Angad, I'm ok"

A: "Tumhe meri kasam, tell me why u want me to get married to Mishti." He takes her hand and puts it on his head.

Kripa is helpless and tells Angad everything about Mishty's visit, and her threat. Angad gets so mad after listening to Kripa and says, "I can't believe that Mishti did this, I always thought of her as my friend. And Kripa wat do u think that Angad khanna isn't able to pay her back. Baby I paid her back as soon as I got the money for the music video that I'm doing right now. Mishti can't do shit to me. I can't believe that u believed Mishti. I thought that u were smarter that."

Kripa is really happy after hearing this, and says "Angad r u sure, cause I don't want u to get into any trouble coz of me."

Angad puts his arm around her while driving with the other arm and says, "Baby u can never cause me any trouble, You r the love of my life. But please promise me that u'll never leave me promise karo. Tumhe hamare hone wale bache ki kasam, don't ever leave me."

K: "I promise."

Kripa takes Angad to where she lives and angad gets really sad looking at the small crappy apartment, and says "kripa u live here?" She says "yeah, I live here" Angad says, "no u don't live here, u used to live here, come on hurry up get ur stuff packed u r coming wid me."

K: "but Angad"

A: "no means no, now hurry up"

Kripa gets her stuff packed and Angad takes her to his Motel.

A : "Let me make one thing clear to u Kripa, from now on u r my wife, I'm ur husband, and there isn't nobody in this world who can separate us. Ok."

Kripa gets tears in her eyes, goes up to him and hugs him, she says "I'm sorry I was sooo stupid to go away from u"

A: "Don't call urself stupid, I've only given that right to me" They both smile and hug each other tightly.

A: "Don't ever leave me again ok."

Then Angad gets down on his knees touches her stomach and says, "Hi, there baby ur daddy is here."

Kripa smiles and says, "You think ur the daddy of my baby u better think again."

Angad raging with anger, "don't ever say that again Kripa or I'll die."

Kripa: "Awwww I'm sorry, I didn't know u loved me that much"

Angad: "You wanna know how much I love u"

Kripa: "nayi, thanku ha "

Angad taks a knife cuts his hand, takes the blood and puts sindoor on her forhead.

Kripa is shocked and says, "Angad u r so damn crazy I swear"

She hugs him, takes a piece off of her chuni and wraps it around his hand.

Kripa: "Angad wat r u gonna tell ur mom and Mishti."

A : "I don't have to tell them anything. They r the reason we separated now I don't want to keep any relation with them"

K: "Don't say that Angad, please"

A: "Why do have to be soo good ha"

K: "Coz obviously u r my bad part."

A: "ok kripa ji so I'm ur bad part ha"

K: "ofcourse, I mean a girl like me deserves the best, which u r not."

A: "acha ji"

K: "Han ji"

Angad picks her up and says I'm gonna show u how bad I can be"

Kripa yells like a little kid "ok sorry sorry"

Anagd looks at her and smiles sweetly "I love u baby"

Kripa smiles and says "I love u toooooooooo"

Then Angad says, "lets get something to eat, u need to start eating"

They eat and then go to the beach.

A: "wat do u want to name our baby girl"

K: "who told u that it was gonna be a girl, I want a boy."

A: "no a girl"

K: "no boy"

They fight like little kids and then Angad finally says, "it doesn't matter as long as it is healthy."

They have there little sweet talks and drive back home. They go to sleep and next morning Angad says Kripa we're gonna enjoy today, coz I have to start shooting from tomm." Kripa says, "it doesn't matter wat we do, as long as u're with me"

Angad hugs her and says, "chalo get up"

They have a nice time together and then come home the next morning Kripa wakes angad up at 4 o clock, cause he has to go to work."

They r both in bed and Kripa says : "wake up Angad"

A : 'nayi, lemme sleep" He hugs her Kripa gets irritated and says "get up or else I'm gonna runaway again"

Angad laughs at this and says "Nayi I wont let u run away again"

Then Angad gets up, takes a shower and gets ready. Kripa makes him food and does everything for him like a wife. Then when he's about to leave, Kripa very innocently says, "Tusi ja raye o" Angad smiles and says "Baby I don't wanna leave u but I have to go, anyways when I come home I have a surprise for you."

Kripa says what he says just wait and watch.

He hugs her and kisses her and says "I love u baby, don't run away now" (lol)

Kripa smiles and hits him.

Tomorrow: Angad's surprise for kripa.

Tadam Tadam Tadam

DEEPEY PRODUCTIONS

You guys my story is about to end unless u guys give me some ideas. But don't worry we'll start a new one. Ok. I just want my story to have a happy ending. Enjoy. Lots of love.

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