Fan Fic (after break- up cont.) - Page 6

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Posted: 20 years ago
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that was amazing ur really talented !plz continue !👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
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PLZ CONTINUE 😉

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great story, please continue!👏
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Please continue I can't wait any longer
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Sorry for making u guys wait for so long.

PART-9

The sad part starts now:

Angad wakes up after like half an hour and notices that Kripa is not there. He thinks that she must be in the bathroom. He gets up smiling and thinking Kripa I'll never let u go away from me now. He remembers that last night he had said that he'll go to the temple, so he yells, "Kripa, I'm gonna go home, get dressed and go to the temple, ok Baby, I'll come pick u up later." He leaves and goes to his room, takes a shover, gets dressed, and goes to the temple. He tals to god and says, "God, today u have given me everything, without me even asking u. I just want to Thanku. Please God don't ever take this happiness from me. Don't ever separate me from Kripa, please." (awwww, poor guy doesn't kjnow wat's in store for him. But don't worry our God will bring the two lovers together) He then goes back to the outhouse and thinks "These girls take so long in the damn bathroom. Inka make-up hi nahi khatam hota. He knocks on the bathroom door, and realizes that its open and nobody's in threw. He gets worried and looks for Kripa. He then thinks maybe she left for studio already. He then looks at the bed, smiled and says "God this girl is even lazier than me, she didn't even make her bed." So he goes and fixes the bed. (how sweet can this guy get) While he's fixing the bed, he finds the letter and reads it. His world just stops and he gets the shock of a lifetime. Poor Angad cries, and his heart breaks into pieces. He says "why, Kripa. Why, why did u do this 2 me. I was the happiest person alive last night and today I feel like dieing. He then sees a murti og god and says, "And u, for the first time in my life I asked u for something, and u couldn't even give me that. All this pyaar, vishwaas, god is all fake. It's all backvaas, made-up, a bunch of crap. It's all Bull shit." He drops on his knees and screams, "KRIPA WHERE R U, DON'T LEAVE ME, please don't leave me, please don't." He cries his heart out. He then leaves and goes looking for Kripa at Dadi's house, harshini's hostel. He searches everywhere. He even goes to Nanintal and searches for her there, but nope she is nowhere to be found. He gives up and goes back home devastated. Naina, however, is really happy with the turn of events. She thinks now there is nobody who can stop A's and M's marriage from happening. Angad goes into his room, gets all of his stuff and moves into the outhouse. Naina asks him "what the hell do u think u r doing ha?"

A: "I'm gonna live in the outhouse from now on." Naina yells at him, but he doesn't say anything and then he turns around and says, "I'm gonna do the engagement with Mishti only because it was Kripa's wish ok." Naina looks at him like she's gonna kills him and then he leaves. After two days the engagement ceremony takes place and A and M exchange rings. Without any reaction, Angad immediately leaves after putting the ring on Mishty's finger. He doesn't stay for the party or food (I would've stayed for the food atleast). He goes to the outhouse, takes out Kripa's pic and says, "R u happy, now u got wat u wanted. I'm engaged to Mishti." He gets tears in his eyes. "Kripa I might be engaged to Mishti, but u were, u are, and u will always be my only love. All this with Mishti is fake, a drama. I consider u as my wife Baby, I only love u" He kisses her pic and says, "Good night Baby, sweet dreams, where ever u are I love u." He wakes up the next day and goes to his house. He sees both his and Mishti's family sitting in the living room with a pundit. He hears their conversation and smiles at what he hears. The pundit ji is saying that the marriage cannot take place now, they're gonna have to wait for a whole year. (Hey u guys I really don't know anything about kundli's as I'm a sikh, so just imagine anything written in it that can delay the marriage for a year.) Angad smiles and leaves thinking atleast I'm free from this unwanted bandhan for a year.

One month later

Angad is still the same devdas, searching for his lost love. On the other hand we see Kripa now. She is living in California, USA. (don't ask me why and how). She lives in a small apartment and goes to college, while working part time at a store. One day she comes from college and feels dizy, and throws up. (guess wat guys, yes she's pregnant) She goes to the hospital to get a check-up and finds out about the good news. Kripa is happy yet sad. Sad because all the memories of angad come back to her. She thinks Angad now I'll be able to spend my life with this nishani of yours. This baby is gonna be my life. It was ur wish that I became the mother of ur children, well god has granted one of ur wishes. She smiles to herself and goes home. She puts her hand on her stomach and tries to feel the baby.

Mumbai:

Angad gets an offer from a big producer to do a music video. Angad is not excited about it, but naina jumps with excitement. She thinks more money, more fame, more power, it can't get any better than this. She makes angad accept the offer. Angad also signs it thinking Atleast this contract will keep me away from Mishti and mom 4 sometime. Guess where they r gonna shoot the video at. California ofcourse. Ao, Angad gets his stuff packed as he's gonna be in California for a while. His plane lands in San Francisco Airport and Angad gets a room at a Motel. For a whole week he shoots non-stop and then the director decides that they should take a break for a few days as they r already ahead of the schedule. Angad neither feels sad nor happy, he just leaves in his rented car, which by the way is also red and a sports car. He decides to drive around for a while. He starts dreaming about Kripa and doesn't notice a lady going infront of him. His car crashes into her. It is not a big accident, the car just touched her legs a little bit. She just falls and faints. Angad gets really shocked and runs outside. The lady is on the ground, so that he's unable to see her face. He turns her around and gets even a bigger shock to see that its Kripa (god finally brought them face to face).

Tommorow : Angad to the doctor: "will she be okay doctor" Doctor: "We really can't say anything as she is pregnant and her baby could've been affected." Angad shocked "Kripa is pregnant"

Tadam Tadam Tadam

DEEPEY PRODUCTIONS

U guys r gonna have to wait for the good part. Sorry. Today's part was sad, and boring, but it had to be included. Don't worry u guys r gonna see Kripa and Angad's love again now. God bless u all, Enjoy. Lots of love.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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Deepey

i love your fan fic.. i was waiting for it all week.. hecka cute..

keep it up..

-Shikha
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57
ab main kal subha check karoonga!! and the continuation should be there😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Thanks u guys. I love u all.😊🤗 Ok Jink I'll make sure I put it up by tomm.😆
Edited by deepey - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59

i love ur story....plz continue...i can't wait for next part...

~sweta~

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Posted: 20 years ago
#60

deepey yr story is sooooo good...........

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