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Posted: 20 years ago
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I can't wait no longer this looks spicy
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Posted: 20 years ago
#92
Great job with the entire fanfic including the romantic bits.

Can't wait for the next bit

CONTINUE SOON!!!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#93
please continue I can't wait
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Hey guys thanks 4 the suggestions, and liking the twist. Ok I decided that the name should be Adi, coz it sounds really cute, especially when u say Adiiiiiiiiiii. Tell me if u like it or not. Oh yeah another thing, I really don't know this I'm kinda stupid. How old is a kid when he starts talking coz Adi is gonna develop a bond wid Angad (without Angad knowing that Adi is Kripa's son), so he has to talk. In the fan fic I said that the leap is of 2 years but I'm thinking of making it more coz I don't think a kid who is 1and half years old can talk. Maybe I'm wrong correct me ok. Lots of Love. I'm working on it right now. Hopefully it'll be ready by today afternoon. Thanks once again.😊
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Posted: 20 years ago
#95
plez continue watever u do plez continue fast
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Posted: 20 years ago
#96
ya adi is a good name.....n me tooo,I aslo don't know abt all dis age.......do whatever u want to do but plz continue fast.............
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PART-14

I'm gonna introduce 2 new characters to u guys:

Adi: The baby of our story. He is 3 years old. He is the world to Kripa, he brings happiness in her world. She is basically living coz of him.

Khushi: She is Adi's nanny basically. She takes care of Adi when Kripa is working. She also helps out Kripa in her work.

Background: Kripa, Adi, and Khushi live in a beautiful house by the beach in Mumbai. The three of them share a beautiful relationship of love and trust. They have a small world of their own. Kripa also treats khushi like her little sister.

Angad still lives in his house, but doesn't talk to anybody. He heart is filled with hatred and pain. He thinks that his only love betrayed him. He doesn't trust anybody anymore.

Scene 1:

Kripa is running behind adi trying to feed him.

K: "adiiiii please listen to mamma, eat something na. Mamma is getting late for her recordings."

Adi: "no mamma, u promised me that u would take me to the park today."

Kripa: "I know bacha, I'm sorry. Please forgive ur mamma. I promise I won't do that again. Khushi massi is gonna take u today."

Adi: "I wanted to go with both u and massi."

He stops running, Kripa grabs him and puts him on the couch, "My sona bacha is gonna behave today and go wid massi, ok. I promise when I come home today all three of us will go eat outside."

Adi sticks his hand out and says: "promise"

Kripa: "paka promise."

Khushi comes running out and says, "Kripa hurry up ur gonna be late here, I packed all ur stuff. Try to come home early ok."

Kripa takes her stuff from Khushi and says, "Thanks Khushu u r da best."

Kripa kisses adi and leaves.

Adi and Khushi decide to go to the park.

(By the way Khushi is also unaware of everything that happened between Angad and Kripa, she doesn't know anything. She is also a really big fan of Angad. She knows that Kripa doesn't like Angad for some reason. So she hides everything about Angad from Kripa)

Park:

Angad has come to the park to shoot a music video.

Adi is running around while Khushi is chasing him. Khushi gets hungry and tells adi to stay here and I'll go get some food and drinks for us. She puts Adi in a kids playhouse. Adi is playing and sees a bird. He starts running after the bird. He crashes into his daddy Angad (who is on a break from shooting). Angad who doesn't know that Adi is Kripa's son starts playing with Adi.

Angad: "hey there, wats ur name'

Adi: "Adi"

Angad : "Hi Adi, I'm Angad, mujhse dosti karoge"

Adi shakes his hand. Angad picks Adi up and for some reason feels a strange bond with Adi.

Adi sees a man selling candy, and gets all excited. He starts yelling, "I want candy, candy, candy"

Angad buys Adi a whole bag full of chocolates and Adi says "Thanku Uncle"

Angad: "U r welcome adi."

Then Adi hears Khushi yelling his name and hurriedly says, "I have to go now my mashi is looking for me"

Angad smiles and says bye Adi, he hugs him and kisses him on the cheek.

Angad: "u won't forget me na."

Adi: "no, u gave me candy. I won't forget u. My mommy never lets me eat candy, she says it's not good."

Angad: "really, it's ok Adi. Whenever I see u I'll always give u candy."

Adi: "promise"

Angad: "paka promise"

Adi smiles and says bye. He runs away.

Then he turns around and says, "But where will I meet u again, Uncle"

I don't know. Khushi finally finds Adi and scold him, "where were u ha, u know I was hella worried about u"

Adi: "sowwwy mashi"

Khushi finally sees angad and gets really happy, she says, "oh my god, Angad Khanna I'm like ur number one fan will u give me an autograph."

Angad signs a piece of paper for her and says, "R u Adi's massi."

Khushi says, "Oh u know Adi, yeah I'm his massi."

Adi repeats himself again and says, "But where will I meet u again, Uncle"

Angad looks at Adi and says, "well beta I'm always busy, but I always go to the beach at 10 in the morning everyday coz I have a break at that time, maybe u can come and c me there sometime."

Khushi gets really excited and says, "ofcourse, I will bring him everyday."

Angad then hears somebody calling him and says, "I have to go now, I'll see u at the beach ok Adi."

Adi: "ok don't forget our secret (chocolate)"

Angad smiles and says, "Don't worry I wont"

He waves them goodbye and leaves.

Khushi starts jumping picks Adi up and starts kissing him, "I love u Adi, I love u Adi, I loveeeeeee u Adi." Adi is just hanging on to her.

She then thinks Oh no, if Kripa finds out she's gonna be really mad, its better that I don't tell her. Both Adi and Khushi go home happily.

Tadam Tadam Tadam

DEEPEY PRODUCTIONS

Ok guys, that's it for today. I know u guys didn't get to see Angad and Kripa together but don't worry they're gonna meet. I have to start the story off slowly and then gradually develop it. Just be patient. Lots of love from Raman. Take care.

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Posted: 20 years ago
#98
I loved it Raman. Adi is adorable. I am loving it.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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Oops sorry forgot to tell u that I extended the leap to 4 years.

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Posted: 20 years ago

wow u are just two good plz do post the next scene

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