I'm tired of Resing.
I really am :/
My Alulu's updating, and I cant comment?
No ways.
I was waiting till Saturday for vacations to start, but now that you have updated again, the guilt is killing me.
Having my lunch.
Gimme five minutes, then I will start reviewing each chapter as I read :'')
-----Unres----
*Rubs her eyes, exhausted from school*
*Should really bathe now, but cant resist reading*
*Warns Watson in advance, about her rant*
*This one's going to be long :'')*
Okay so lets start xD
*Luckily I have commented for the prologue already*
*Sighs with relief*
Now lets really start xP
So for Chapter One...
WHAAADDD?
*Faints*
I told u. You get the most amzingly creative ideas i know.
Randhir is from an UNDERPRIVELEGED family??xO
*Unconcious*
Both were insanely intelligent, alone amongst friends and perfectly imperfect.
Wow :'') Lovely line xD
Sanyu's family died :'( Poor baby girl :/
He jiggles around with four jobs??
A waiter at a restaurant xO Washerman?
Naaww.
MALE ESCORT?
*dead*
My Randhir, only reserved for me, KBGs and Sanyu ofcourse.
So if you ever describe him on duty with another girl...make sure it is one of US...as in the KBGs or Sanyu.
OMGEEE.
That Kameena of an Uncle.
*Prays for that inhumane creature to be hanged*
So the truth was revealed...but seven years? :'(
OH GOD.
STop the torture girl..Why you do dis :'(
My Randhir <33
Its okay baby, Sanyu ll be here for you :'')
Invitation huh?
For whom?
*Runs to read next chappie*
*Oh wait. I need to bathe*
*Will get back and move on to next*
I am back!
SO on to chapter 2 :)
"I believe I rose in love the moment his eyes met mine across a hall of innumerable people and never wavered till our last breaths. Other people fall in love, but that day, he and I rose in love."
Looking into his eyes was like life, death and everything in between.
^^ What the Effing Eff?
Aru , how can you write so well. God damn it :/
These lines were beautiful :'')
People have pets, other people and phones for life companions, but Sanyukta had many a tequila bottle.
^^Whoa.
Tequilla-bottle-phillic?
ROFL!!
Royal Blue Jumpsuit???
I wannna see. I wanna see!!
Aahaa! Randhir is admiring the beauty, huh?
Your vocabulary!!
Godd Aru. I need to start taking classes from you.
"Should I be scared or amused?" he quipped.
"You... s..s...should be drunk," she uttered, her words slurred.
Lol xP
I would be looking up the dictionary at the word ubiquitous, but luckily I read it in my school text book recently xP
"See, I don't know what you saw in me, but I know what I saw in you. Don't hold this against me but I felt that you need to be protected from all evil that is out there, starting from this tequila bottle."
^^Aawww <33
"Funny how I don't know your name and yet you have showed me where it hurts the most."
^^SanDhir. Whatever state they may be in, wherever they may be, whatever the situation may be, whoever they may be. They are simply SanDhir :'')
There are only two important days in our lives. One is the day we are born and another is the day we know why. Find your reason for being born, Sanyukta."
^^I need coaching classes.
Please train me for free. Cannot afford ur high fees.
I know these phrases are completely thought of and written by you :'') And even if they aren't many of them are, and those which are not, have been used so aptly at the perfect places!
And she would find a way to return it to him. Not because she couldn't accept what he had given her but because she didn't want him to walk down a painful road at her cost.
^^Wow. Simple words that beautify ur work :'')
I wish I hadn't started reading and reviewing ur updates today :/
Now I cant stop.
And I have so much work to finish before tomorrow :'(
Damn man.
Chapter three...
I loved the quote in the beginning :'')
I should also mention, since I didn't before, that I so love all the titles of each chapter :*
WHAADD?
2 years passed? O_o
Ahaa.
Life getting better :'')
And he had always been grateful for the ray of sunlight that had been sent into his perpetually frosty life.
^^Speechless. Simply Subtly Charming :'')
"Beta, I know you want me to stay at home but your dad has to work so that you can have the prettiest dolls there are."
When did Randhir's childhood in show become Sanyu's in this fic? Wow. Intrasting.
"I don't want dolls. I want you."
^^Aww baby. I wish you were so sweet with randhir...On the show I mean. -_-
Oh. So both of them changed each others life for the better?
This is so damn beautiful :'')
Maybe she needed a jolt of electricity again. His electricity.
^^I guess she does need that in the show too. Poor Randhu has been getting so many, the poor lad's gone Love Struck Lovey Dovey Romeo. xP
"I want him. Find him from wherever you can or be prepared to be arrested for lack of cooperation with the police."
Oodi baba!
Aa su che?
How domineering xP And demanding!
Typical Sanyukta xP
Is it her though? I guess so.
Telling herself to be from the police? xP
ROFL.
Okay Now Alu, I told you the reason on WA.
I will read and review Chapter 4 on Sat.
Sorry for the delay Watson,
I hope this comment satisfies you.
I love you <3
Tanya
~SoulStalker
Edited by TashaForever - 11 years ago
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