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Posted: 11 years ago
well your note does offer so many explanations...its hard to say that i loved your update..but it has a very strong impact...it was a shock as i was expecting a beautiful reunion of Arshi...
but then life is not a bed of roses and to see where they go from here would a journey itself...
Arnav who feels betrayed by one who he has trusted and fell in love with ...(he should show a little more trust,than having run away from the scene he saw...even what you see need not be truth itself)
Kushi who has not realized yet that she has been violated in the worst possible way..poor girl i hope she remains strong to face that without any support...and dont get me started on Adi that leech bugger...

But you had made very valid points and i look forward to read your story...and see how you weave it...

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Posted: 11 years ago
i was bang on right... itz adi... n khushi thought n thinks itz arnav... arnav left n vn cums bk aftr sum tym he gets 2 knw khushi s pregnant ...
my heart goes out to arnav... as well as khushi ...
adi has ruined all d happiness of arhi!!!
as u said

If..if only had she opened her eyes, he would have seen the torment her lifeless body tried to tell him at that moment...

If..if only had he not picked the drink, she would not be flying in the air with the needles aiming at her soul...

If..if only had she had her phone with her, he would have been next to her the moment her speech slurred...

If..if only had he not left without saying a word, her subconscious mind would have fought to the last breath even if she had to die saving herself for her, for him and for them...

The lives of Arnav Singh Raizada and Khushi Singh Raizada would have been different at this moment had not there been an animal named Adarsh Singh Raizada.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Waiting for the dawn... thats all i could say now...
It was a really bad to read that khushi thinks she finally belongd to arnav in evry sense while her fate...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
Just one statement, " I should't hav read this chap" so painful.
Even though many things like this happen in society, its so difficult to read such a situation come across in Arnuv Khushi FF.

Pz giv us peace of mind soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Whatever be the reasons for your writing this story I am OK with it and would love to see Khushi emerge stronger and know how she was used as a pawn in the hatred between Arnav and Adi. Your writing is awesome and am a big fan of yours and please don't be disheartened with people's opinion as everyone is entitled to have their own perspectives. I will wait for your next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Speechless... hope when Khushi realizes wgat happened she will be able to recover. Hoprfully Arnav will also realuze what actually happened and will help Khushi instead of making it worse for her.
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Posted: 11 years ago
😭 😭
Let me cry fully than will be back with my commant 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ntmrjn

I don't want to mention more abt my sadness,thanks 4 the note.If to mention,i was eager to know what is the reason behind all this to happen?
Society..of all class behaves same.women are being misused..the sexual abuse,harrasment, has been a major platform for male to show their power..their revenge..
I am now headstrong enough to deal with this story.
Khushi is depressed only with the pain that is now,well the vulnerability of pain is of too much when truth will hit her. Right now,Arnav's pain is too small in front of khushi unknown pain.
U mentioned abt khushi will loss everything..her unborn baby,bua,payal is it?


Her ownself...Thats what I meant...ANd she will not lose Bua or Payal and we will know about baby in future
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Posted: 11 years ago
Now I understand, what happened in prologue...
Awesome..
U built the plot in such a structured manner..
Hats off...
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Posted: 11 years ago
i agree its not abt being the first
if he loves her he will come n talk to her if he doesn't he will be the one who will be responsible to let her slip from his life
this is the moment she needs him the most she will die each second with the truth
its not abt find the right one its about building the right life together however wrong other try to through ur way
i hope he comes back trusts his heart rather than wht he saw

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