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Sugi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1091

Part 26 - Painful update I was upset & disappointed b'coz ArShi r very close 2 my heart normally I don't read dark stories but I was little ok after reading ur note true this is d reality poor ArShi 😭

Edited by Arshi.Sugi.IPK - 11 years ago

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Sugi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1092

Part 27 - Heart breaking update both r in pain & very well described wanna kill Adi 😡

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ashnitaa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1093

I liked this story.
can u please pm me?

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BarunFan1212

@BarunFan1212

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1094

Hi Deepthi,

This is my comments for chapter 25, 26 and to your notes.

Yes. It was a very sad and shocking chapter. I was shivering when I was reading the last part of chapter 25. But I do stand by you. As you were trying to enlighten us with the reality of this world.

You are and amazing writer and your stories always have some inspirations and something for the readers to learn from

Though I felt very sad, and was expecting something around this line(from the Prologue) but just had a hope that Arnav may be wrong about the father of the child.

But then you mentioned why cant a woman make a mistake of knowing who the real father is and then I knew that Arnav was not the father of her child.

It was nice of you to bring up these hidden realities of the real world and I will be happy to see if you make Khushi to not loose her pride as she is not guilty of what happened to her.

I hope Arnav doesn't suffer much and realize that Khushi has been duped and stand by her.

Only thing that worries me is Arnav got a good friend Aman. What about Khushi? will she have some one to emotionally support her until Arnav realize what happened that night?

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Meeshaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1095

After reading ch:24 i just hav to say plzzz dont ever
End dis plzzz i beg u its getting on my nerves though
But i never want it to be finshed :( coz i idmire dis couple
As real soulmates :)

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Meeshaali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#1096

OMG immm not in da position to comment anymore
Whyyy he ???? And yyy khushi hav to suffer like dis???
I cant believe dis Adi can stoop dis low OMG
:( im feeling terrible for arnav :(