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Posted: 11 years ago
unRes...

I have no words ...the update was soo painful...

Poor khushi...she doent know anything right now..

I cant imagine her condition..wen she comes to know the truth..

She doesn't know wht has happened...plus arnav is also missing..

My heart aches wen I imagine her...n her reaction to the truth..

All her dreams abt her new life with arnav are going to b shattered...

Wen a person suffer fr his/her entire life..n then a ray of hope to b happy is seen.. n then hope is broken..it is very painful..khushi is being punished fr no fault of hers..

Adi has no humanity in him...even if arnav finds out n kills hum..its not enough.

The entire scene which adi n khushi..my heart stopped beating..very painful..

My heart stopped beating wen adi said those words..really scary.

Arnavs emotional breakdown..even his hopes n dreams are shattered...

My heart breaks fr him too...bt its good to know that aman s with him always..

Bt I think its khushi who is going to suffer the most..

Reading all ur replies di...I don't knw whts going to come next..

I m confused on how khushis going to react n wht steps she is going to take..whos going to b on her side..

I m jst hoping that both will know that they both haven't betrayed eachother..

I was thinking khushi gets pregnant..is it easy to see the child who going to remind her of this painful event??..i m sure she is going to love the child..its a distant thing... bt jst a thought..

Bt hats off to u dii...wht ever u wanted to convey n palnning to convey with this amazing piece of work..u r successful..

I m a person who has read all the updates of all ur three storiestill now more than once...

Bt fr this one I have no strength to read it again..a very difficult one..

read the note after the update,...completely agree with u..

Eagerly waiting to know wht happens next
Edited by littlemissstar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago





COMMENTED on PAGE 120
Edited by smiley-shiney - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
cant believe what adi did to her😡.
she thought its arnav😲😲.
very sad😭😭
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Posted: 11 years ago

am sad... is all i want to say... just too overwhelmed...

waiting for next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
that Adi... Argh... Di i wanna kill him... no, i NEED to kill that animal... i need to harm that insect physically... i rarely gets this angry Di... i know me naa... right now i am feeling so violent, that i guess i am capable of killing that Adi now...

Poor Khushi... Poor Arnav... u were right Di... i cant blame either them... both of them are as much victim of circumstances... but i CAN blame the fate naa... life shouldnt play 'this' cruel game to them...

bechari Khushi... she doesnt even know... she doesnt have a clue what has happened... if & when she is gonna come to know, her life would be shattered... i just hope, Arnav would recover and know the truth by then to be with her, to take care of her...

Arnav's pain was so hard to tolerate Di... it hurts, dammit... so very much... i cant see him falling apart, breaking down into pieces like this... its painful Di... a lot...

At least Aman was there with him, for him... am so glad for that... but what more he culd do... how was he supposed to hold him when he knew nothing of what happened... i can feel his helplessness... i have to say poor Aman too...



now coming to your note... loved what u said about being first, what we have to go through and dark stories... cant agree more... u know how much i love you, hain naa Di... *hugs*

and here come what i needed to hear... 'The worst part of the FF is over with this chapter'... thank you, thank you, thank you for that... i dealt with this... so i hope i will definitely deal with the rest...

all i want Di is Arnav to know the truth before Khushi knows it... i WANT him to be there for her... and support her... after all, he is her Valiant Knight...

u love tomato...😲 i HATE them...😳😛😉


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Posted: 11 years ago

yeah yeah, you res-ed... but i commented before you Lala, like after ages... 😈 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
D you cheated. I was so hoping you will show some mercy. But you had to go and ruin all my hopes 😭 . But your notes give me hope that Khushi will come out stronger and I have an inkling what she is going to do when she gets to know the truth.
You have portrayed Arnav's pain with empathy and finesse. The one time he let go of his heart, it got stabbed and he can't even share it with any one. I am really upset and depressed.
I know it is a story, but D you write superbly.
I have to pack for holiday trip and here I am busy venting my anger and disappointment. Hope to find a little light when I come back.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Heart broken after the update... 😭 but very nicely written di... Hope everything goes well after this...
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Posted: 11 years ago
I may not like the current page but now i cant wait to read what happens next. I guess thats what makes a writer a good one. You may not like it but csnt stop yourself from resding. You keep ur readers hooked. Hope u just continue.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Just hate the people who cant take the revenge directly.. Yet go in different path.
Being stronger in his life is ARNAV'S fault...

Falling in LOVE with arnav is the KUSHI'S mistake...

Destiny plays role in our life...

Hope KUSHI cope up after knowing the truth...

Hope arnav be supportive at that time..


I WAN TO SEE ARNAV OR KUSHI KILL ADI...

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