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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing last 2 chps loved it..its so amazing..atlast d prolouge part is gonna cum..its almost cum nly!!
M njoing it!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nishu_shorna


yeah yeah, you res-ed... but i commented before you Lala, like after ages... 😈 🥳


hahahaha i am soo happy to see u here with us...my happiness is infinity time more than urs ...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
its sad,if only arnav had yelled that time...you are trying different here,i really congratulate u but at the same time my heart bleeds reading this n now its official the baby will be adis ...but poor khushi will think otherwise that my fear here I only hope that I don't know in how many chapters it will come but I will wait impatiently for arnav to rip adi apart.
I part will this violence fill note as this is my believe on rape n for me tht was rape,rapists should be hanged.
even if its fiction as a woman I am asking a woman
Edited by march2011 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
she has been practically raped and she hav no knowledge of it
i watched an epi of MTV webbed i guess where a friend spikes her frnd's drink n dat frnd's boyfrnd rapes her n make a p*** movie ...

this subject which u have chosen is very important for society

yesterday i was feeling sad for both arnav n khushi , cauz i hoped dat it will turn out to be a misunderstanding but today i am feeling bad for khushi n angry at arnav

a married gal is not safe at her own house in her own bedroom ...it was duty of arnav to save his wife from all the danger of the world, he knew his brother is after his wife ...then too wen he found sumthing lyk dis in front of his eyes, instead of kicking the person ,he backed off n not even for a sec trusted his wife...he got busy in crying over his fate n asking questions from a imaginary person ...i agree he was heart broken to witness such a scene ,but she was his wife ,she deserved to be trusted ...
after some passionate moments how can u even think dat ur wife cheated u , how could u not think of the possibility dat ur wife is been raped in-front of ur eyes n u backed away

disappointed with arnav

ur story is amazing ...
khushi child hav d same fate as her , n dis tym she will show her mom dat for her ,her child is more important then her husband ...its not d child fault
its arnav's fautt , who could not save his wife from his own brother
Edited by ankitamishra201 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
well deeps i am hapi that u cleared my doubts,like u said it is life n not a dream,may be for me arnav n khushi characters r like breathing in this harsh world,reading about them ,be hapi with each other ,is my peace.i really want to pay my gratitude to the woman whom this story belongs too,will pray for u,ur devotion to ur unborn child...deeps honesty i was upset last 3 days after reading last chaper but now i can see what u want us to see...LIFE!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
im really crying after readig this...arey yeh arnav kab janega...waiting for the day to see arnav beat the hell out of adi. Want khushi to be in abold avtar of representative of all women who want to stand in thier own legs to face this brutal world. i guess after reading your FF many will be inspired to face the world strongly...kudos to all the wordly ladies and women who are stronger throught out their life...👏👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
I have no words to say...
Will be reserving my comment for now..
Will be editing it tomo morning.

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I am totaly speechless after reading the part.. it's like omggg so touchy.. I am not able to see what Arnav is going tru.. same time even Kushi will be broken or to be precise she wuld be shattered to know what happened to her.

She trusts Arnav that he will not let the things happen like the wat happend to her with her dad-mom. Hope Arnav keeps her trust and does not betray her.. But the prologue seems different.. hope Arnav's missunderstanding is cleared out soon.

Awaiting for the next parts Deepti.

Edited by polishedtechie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oh my writer ji kya kia hai aapne ek to lambi update wo bhi jaldi or uper se itny intensive marne ka irada hai kya jokes apart but seriously kya likha hai hat's off to you baki kya kahoo I m truelly speechless you rocks waiting really eagerlyfor next
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Posted: 11 years ago
I would be lying if I would say that I am not disappointed by the turn of the events because Adi had to defeat Arnav and Khushi was made a mere pawn in it. She wasn't at a fault but will have to face the dire consequences especially the undeserving guilt and hatred but I have trust in your capabilities and I only hope you get another twist soon. I believe that once the second part of the first prologue comes out, things will change.

My eyes got misted on reading his plight. He believes he was pursuing a mirage throughout but he needs to realize that is not the case. I want Adi to be thoroughly punished because what he has done in inhuman and is regarded as degrading a woman's dignity. I wish you update the next few parts soon Deepa.

Waiting for the next part.
Update soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
i'm like a fool checking whether u hv upd i hv my exams in ten days
i hope Arnav sees wht he had missed n come back soon as the truth will be revealed she will need him the most as he had become the anchor of her miserable life

sometime wht us see may nt be wht the truth is so before judging look closer if its the truth or someone is deceiving u
Arnav will destroy Adi in a way he had never destroyed anyone n hope to read it soon

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