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deeps u have make me speechless...i have never ever read any dark story in my life the way tvk is turning out...hats off for coming up with such heart touching close to reality story...
i am so happy to see this concept and story in hands of such sensible writer that ...u showing ugly side of society...but keeping the dignity intact...had it in hands of some one else...i dont know wt out come will be...its like its not cake walk..its very very difficult topic to cater and u doing marvellous wonders in that...
i love u the way u have taken the pain and emotions to new heights...its such a sensitive issue of society that lil bit of mishandling can cause havoc...but i salute u for writing it just PERFECT...
the way u have started the update...the situation and circumstances which lead to distortion of an innocent soul inner ...those weak steps which she took after having the drink...which changes her life into poison...that low whisper of her saying ARNAV when ever her steps were shaky...with heavy head...she going towards the hell ...man created hell...i am wondering wt is going to be the end of such physcopaths like adi ,above in the supreme created hell...
poor soul...though not in hosh but still she still tried her best to think ...the smell is not the same...she still strong enough in trying to think who can touch her as she is belonging to arnav...uff she has given her soul to arnav indeed...but bad luck...few things meant to be happened y like it or not...and thats the truth of this world...wt matter is how u survive later...how u going to stand after falling hard...then comes the character...and i m sure deepu ur khushi which u have created with immense strong base... she is going to make the difference...forsure...i love u the way u have shown almost unconcious khushi concious in many ways...hosh waloon say zyada in hosh...she felt the touch was different...she felt the smell diff...she was in pain and not moaning in lust...u have done wonders with such girl deepu...as i think ur character proved herself much in hosh in my view then many of us in so called host...👏
i cant blame arnav here...no not at all...he was also under the weather...he is also poor soul ...as he was trapped badly ...his weakness khushi...he went to find out the truth behind her father killing..in a way he was out for her...so how to blame him...and the way he reacted that also very natural...and i think it shows his character..my pov y arnav didnt entered as he has recognised those eyes...he has got character...he stopped aman to entered...he got dignity in his own way...he can lash out on naked...but he step back...he is man his anger and all ,though right there...anger is enemy of sane too ...
i loved the way u have written arnav's pain...ufff...u have shown him going on knees in love...in its pain...in trusting someone with whole heart...the way he is crying and all reacting...for a sec ...if i put myself in his shoe...i ll die million deaths...hats off deeps for writing breaking down of such strong man so beautifully...although every thing is sad...but i cant stop myself from praising u...u have done justice ...the situation in which poor arnav is...not knowing the truth and all...from where he is standing...from where he is seeing the picture...and the mental break down of him u have written...standing ovation from myside deeps...👏
i know khushi side of story is also going to be killing ...but as arnav is discussed right now ...so hats off girl...in this all aman being there with him...thank u so much deeps...for creating aman character like this...now i am noticing how much effort and base u have created for each person in tvk ...they all pillars in one way or other for there repestive dear ones...👏
i know its very painful...i know the whole rape scene of khushi was pure torture...but i salute u once again for writing it as specific as possible...thank u deepu for writing the scene only for the sake of showing the revenge...not like other dark stories where these turned out to be lust for psychopaths..he was pathetic...he ll going to pay back in such a way that only arnav knows wt is going to be the end of this maniac...when the truth will be out...he torned the poor soul...badly very badly...i am all teary as u have brought out the tears which r required here...such strong writing magic u have...if i not crying here i ll consider myself to be inhuman...honestly...hats off
in short as u said The lives of Arnav Singh Raizada and Khushi Singh Raizada would have been different at this moment had not there been an animal named Adarsh Singh Raizada.
now only if and buts r left as storm came and took innocent souls along...as disaster never see before coming whom it going to hit ...in short who ever is there in its way ...have to face the consequencies
same thing happened with these two...perfect example of today's world.. .the dying one don't know y he isbeing killed ...:(
i loved the note deepu...ur each and ever word in note is eye opener for many...i am impressed the soch u r having and taking it forward in ur writing...u contributing alot in ur own very way for the society and its so called norms...the power of pen...:)...the power of words...the power of writing.i can see everything right there in the note..👏
ur coming up and explaining things ...thats the demand of time...and i am sure all sensible will stay till end as if any one is going to stop reading it its going to be loss of that own person...as how many arshi stories we read for the sake of fun and all...but very few writers r having courage to stand up and write unconventionally...to show the bitter side of society...and you r the one👏...its not easy at all to write on such realistic topic knowing readers going to react as per there soch...but still u took the first step and come up with such story hats off to u ...i know bauhat bool deya but jo kahon gee sach kahon ge sach k sawa kuch nahi kahon gee...u got the nerves girl...u got the guts girl...its like that old saying ...hang the picture in between the town and ask every one to do take out the mistakes from it...u will find end of the day the picture all circled with mistakes...and if u ll ask them to give views how to improve the picture ...u ll find end of the day picture all clean and clear :)
in my eyes ...in my view point...way par excellence update...written in the most appropriate style ...thank u soo much for giving these tears ...it shows me still alive ...loveed it to the core...and love u even more...i know u knew it :)
Jhanak
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