Virman - LoVeRs.. or RiVaLs.. last part 25 updated 18-05-2015 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
#71
Thank you sooo much for ur likes n coments..
These encourage me alot...
Many of u wanted to have virman seens i just thought of a new track...
Nxt few updates will be of virman...


Mani n vini at virats place

Hey buddy.. N both hugs virat..

V : hey chap.. Hello my angel
Com om lets go n practice...

Virats tries to teach mani bt he was nt able to kick ball correclty..
V ( a bit irritated ) champ its so easy... U are doing exactly like her.. ( stops suddenly)
Vini : her who her buddy...
V : nothing.. I said him.. My scul friend..
Vini : ohhh .. (In a teasying way)
After playing for a while..
Mani : break tm buddy im tired n hungry...
Kids jumped over to the snaks that virat had brought for them..

Virat was obsering the kids.. N lost in his own memories..

** flash back..

Manvi is in 12 th standard n virat in his 1st yr of clg..

M : viru plz teach this kick to me...
V : no ways manu.. again today i dont wanna waste tm in teaching.. How many times b4 i tought u bt u dont understabd..
M : for the last time plz..
V : no means no manu.. I have to go for practice.. Y dont u understand footbal is nt ur cup of tea...

Virat was in hurry in practice n leaves..

Manvi's anger reaches peaks.. Virat vadjera u are so dead now.. U said no to me.. Manvi chaudhry ur manu ..

N she leaves in anger..

Next day

Footbal match
All of the grp members very present to chear virat... Except manvi his lucky cham.. virat was nt able concentrate on game bcoz of manvi ' absence...
N his team lost..

After match
Virat searched manvi every where bt no use..
J : searching manvi..
V : yes jevi..
J : she is dam upset.. I went to cal her bt she refused..
V : shitt...
J : any problem virat

V : nothing jevi i have to go..
N he ran from their..

Manvi' s house
M : wat are u doing here go n practice..
V : sorry manu.. U know match was realy imp for me.. Bt i lost coz u ver nt there with me... :-(:-(

M : i dont care virat just leave..
Virat holds his ears Sooorrryyy...

Manvi without giving a lok to virat went from their..

After soom tm..
Virat enters manvi's room
M : just leave virat..
V gives her a bounch of orchids ( mqnvi fav flowers)
Choolllyyy holding his ears n sirting on his knees..( making a pout like a small kid )

Manvi started crying..
V : manu wat happen.. Y are u crying.. Plz stop crying u know i cant see u like this.. Sorry manu i promise tom i will teach u football ...
M : sorry viru mistake was mine.. This match was really imp for u n u lost it bcoz of me.. Im nt a gud frnd viru...

N started crying again

V tired to stop her bt no use..
V took her in a friendly hug.. N rubed her back..
: plz manu stop cryng.. If u kept on crying like a donkey.. :-P Icecream will melt..

Hearing the word donkey.. Manvi lifted haer head to hit virat... Manvi ran after virat in the whole rum to hit her.. After running for about 5-6 mins both got tired n sat in bed... And enjoyed manvi's fav icecream...
Virat was about to leave manvi held his hand..
: plz stay for some time.. We have nt talked scine yesterday properly..

Virat n manvi talked for hr n then virat left..

Next day virat tried to teach manvi foot ball bt it resulted same as before manvi was nt able to kick it properly jst like mannan did rite know..

Virat came out of his thoughts when mannan names struk his mind...

V : (to himself ) i dont know y i fel diff when im with these kids.. I fel like v have some spl bond betwen us..

2 months passed n every wkend kids used to play wirlth virat the whole day... N there bond was growing stronger... Even tanya joined them for a couplr of hrs...!!!

In builders association club..

One of the member : mr vadhera n miss chaudhry this is really a grt opportunity.. For the first time v are invited for international level seminar.. N v all want u both to represent us.. It is bcoz of ur efforts our association has been recognised...
V : im realy greatful that u choose me bt i cant really go with miss chaudhry..
M : same here sir..
Member : u both have the bst knowlegde and exprence among us ... For our association plz keep ur personal stuf aside.. U guys are nt getting it.. Its really a grt opprtunity..

All the members forced them to go together for the semenar to Cailifornia...!!!
N both having no other option agred.. !!!

Nxt morning both left for california ..!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: prathe

was superr update loved virat and yes the kids of course superb dear
thank god tanya loves someone else excite for virman meeting more and more
its getting interesting day by day👏
do continue soon😊



thanks alot dear for liking it..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#73
Awesome update...
Loved the flashback...
The First scene was really sweet...
Update soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: manuthi

nice update... kids are so much attached with virat... the kids are virman kids.. virat is the father of the kids.. i'm confused...


thanks dear..
for kowing this plz stay tuned.. u will come to know in upcoming updates


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Posted: 11 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: crazynanulims

nice one dear. like it. continue soon. thanks for pm.


thank u dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: chandiniebinda

Awesome update...
Loved the flashback...
The First scene was really sweet...
Update soon...


thank u soo much dear...⭐️😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#77
Loved it dear
first scene was really sweet
liked the update
FB was good too
Thanks for the scrap
Continue soon 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#78
nice update... mani remember abt manvi to virat... virman going to california... great going i hope they patch up soon.. waiting for next...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update kids are cute
looking kids he remind her
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#80
wow virman @california super lovinng
excited to see virman 😳
super excited do continue soon😊

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